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"point": "Tautology",
"transforms": ["<span class='gr_grammar_del'>possibly</span>"],
"title": "Redundant phrasing",
"minicardTitle": "Remove redundancy",
"result": "Avoids redundancy:",
"details": "<p>Redundant phrases such as <i>final outcome, red in color,</i> and <i>I personally</i> express the same information twice. Avoiding this kind of redundancy will make your sentences sound tighter and more professional.\n",
"explanation": "<p><b>Can possibly</b> may be redundant.\n",
"examples": "<p><span class=\"red\">Wordy: I’ve been attending this school for <b>the period of</b> several weeks.</span><br/><span class=\"green\">Concise: I’ve been attending this school for several weeks.</span><br/><p><span class=\"red\">Wordy: Her dress was grey <b>in color</b>.</span><br/><span class=\"green\">Concise: Her dress was grey.</span><br/><p><span class=\"red\">Wordy: This delicious donut is the best <b>$5 dollars</b> I’ve ever spent.</span><br/><span class=\"green\">Concise: This delicious donut is the best <b>5 dollars</b> I’ve ever spent.</span><br/><span class=\"green\">Concise: This delicious donut is the best <b>$5</b> I’ve ever spent.</span><br/>",
"todo": "remove redundancy",
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"category": "Wordiness",
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"point": "InAWayManner",
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"title": "Wordy adverbial of manner",
"minicardTitle": "Change the wording",
"result": "Less wordy:",
"details": "<p>Often, phrases that describe how someone is performing an action, such as <i>in a clear way</i> or <i>in a calm manner,</i> make sentences wordy. You can cut out excess words by replacing these phrases with adverbs, such as <i>clearly</i> or <i>calmly.</i>\n",
"explanation": "<p>The phrase <b>in an effortless manner</b> may be considered wordy. Consider changing the wording.\n",
"examples": "<p><span class=\"red\">Wordy: Everything seems to be working <b>in a proper manner</b>.</span><br/><span class=\"green\">Concise: Everything seems to be working <b>properly</b>.</span><br/><p><span class=\"red\">Wordy: George did not dress <b>in an appropriate way</b> for the formal event.</span><br/><span class=\"green\">Concise: George did not dress <b>appropriately</b> for the formal event.</span><br/><p><span class=\"red\">Wordy: Please speak <b>in a quiet way</b> while you’re in the library.</span><br/><span class=\"green\">Concise: Please speak <b>quietly</b> while you’re in the library.</span><br/>",
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"original": "You'll find suggestions that can possibly help you revise a wordy sentence in an effortless manner.",
"corrected": "You'll find suggestions that can possibly help you effortlessly revise a wordy sentence."
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