diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/0/0.md b/english/time-travel/0/0/0.md
index 487e3b42..367b62de 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/0/0.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/0/0.md
@@ -5,5 +5,5 @@
 What do you want to do 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♂️?
 
 - [Travel back to the future 🌠](../1/1.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
 - [🥣 Search for food](../7/7.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/1/1.md b/english/time-travel/0/1/1.md
index 83915a20..bacfdc1e 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/1/1.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/1/1.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 **Your time machine broke. 💔**
 
-*Instead of travelling at speed of light, it travels at speed much larger than it 🌠🌠💫.*
+*Your time machine uncontrollably accelerates to over 10X the speed of light 🌠🌠💫.*
 
-You are thrown out of it while travelling and your body is torn up 🩸.
+Your body is violently throw out and torn up whilst attempting the return journey 🩸
 
 You. Are. Dead.
 💀☠😐⚰
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1.md
index e7050768..bade779d 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You are untying woman 👩.**
+**You untie the woman 👩.**
 
-She is so happy and kissing you on the cheek 😘. She tells you, that better to hurry up and go from this place, because she saw two more werewolves 🐺.
+She is so happy, she can hardly stop kissing you 😘. As the adrenaline wears off, she warns you it's not safe here. Her memory isn't clear, but she swears she saw two more werewolves 🐺 nearby.
 
-You can see bushes 🌳 deeper in the ravine. You are sure you can cut them with your machate 🔪.
+You look around, hoping to make a plan. You see a patch of bushes 🌳 at the end of the clearing. You think to yourself that it's either forwards 🔪 or backwards...
 
 - [🏞️ Go back through the gorge](10-1A.md)
 - [🌳 Cut 🔪 the bushes](10-1B.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1A.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1A.md
index 7dc5fc07..a17a2068 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1A.md
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
-**You are trying to go back the way you came here 🏞️.**
+**You turn back to face the darkness of the gorge that brought you here 🏞️.**
 
-Suddenly two werewolves 🐺 appears from both sides.
+*Two smaller werewolves 🐺🐺 emerge from the sliver of blackness in the gorge*
 
 You don't have the strength 😫 to fight anymore.
 
-They attack you both. 
+They ambush you both. 
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You die<!-- a virgin --> ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1B.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1B.md
index 6cf8e721..807d31e1 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1B.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1B.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 **You cut the bushes 🌳.**
 
-It turns out that this path leads to the river on which you walked earlier!
+This path leads back to the river!
 
-This is a place where the river is shallow so there will be no problem with crossing.
+The river is shallow here and you both have no problems crossing the river.
 
-Soon, you are in your shelter ⛺ with beautiful woman 👩
+Soon, you are back in your shelter ⛺ with this beautiful woman 👩
 
 - [Stay there and start living with woman 👩](10-1BA)
 - [🌠 Go back to your times](../1800-won)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1BA.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1BA.md
index 157da1ad..bc1f2af2 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1BA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1BA.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 **Congratulations! 🥳**
 
-You lived happily ever after with a beautiful woman 💑.
+You lived happily ever after with this beautiful woman 💑...
 
-Till... 🐺 🐺
+...until 🐺 🐺 😈
 
 Thanks for playing! 🥳
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2.md
index a052b498..40d620ef 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You are killing 🔪 woman 👩 with cold blood.**
+**You kill her 🔪 👩 in cold blood.**
 
-She screams 😱 loudly and die ☠️.
+Her screams 😱 echo into the clearing and fade from the night air ☠️.
 
-You can see bushes 🌳 deeper in the ravine. You are sure you can cut them with your machate 🔪.
+You can see bushes 🌳 at the other end of the clearing. Your machete drips with her blood 🔪.
 
 - [🏞️ Go back through the gorge](10-1A.md)
 - [🌳 Cut 🔪 the bushes](10-2A.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2A.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2A.md
index 2c192818..b38175ea 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2A.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 **You cut the bushes 🌳.**
 
-It turns out that this path leads to the river on which you walked earlier!
+This path leads back to the river!
 
-This is a place where the river is shallow so there will be no problem with crossing.
+The river is shallow here and you have no problems crossing.
 
-Soon, you are in your shelter ⛺. You feel terible about what you did. Her screams and blood gonna haunt you in your nightmares ☹️.
+Soon, you are in your shelter ⛺. You feel terible about what you did. Her screams and blood will haunt your dreams ☹️.
 
 - [Stay there for a night 🌙](10-2B)
 - [🌠 Go back to your times](../1800-won)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2B.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2B.md
index 691da1b8..b7763435 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2B.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2B.md
@@ -1,13 +1,14 @@
 **You are feeling sleepy 💤.**
 
-You are lying on the bed 🛌.
+You lie in bed 🛌 and drift off to an uncomfortable sleep.
 
-At night 🌙, you are awakened by the sound of the door 🚪 opening. Before you react, you feel like your heart is pierced 💔.
+At midnight 🌙, the door 🚪 creaks open. You are wrenched from your nightmares by the feeling of an icecicle piercing your heart 💔.
 
-You see two werewolves 🐺 standing over you.
+As your vision fades to black you make out the silhouettes of two werewolves in the moonlight 🐺🐺 crouched by your bedside.
 
-*For our father...*
+As your final breath escapes you hear their shrill voices ringing in your ears: 
+*"For our father..."*
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You died ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3.md
index 5860838f..8c1f5b92 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You are leaving woman 👩 and go away.**
+**You leave the helpless woman 👩 tied up.**
 
-She screams 😱 loudly.
+She screams 😱 in panic.
 
-You can see bushes 🌳 deeper in the ravine. You are sure you can cut them with your machate 🔪.
+You can see bushes 🌳 on the other side of the clearing. You are sure you can cut them with your machate 🔪.
 
 - [🏞️ Go back through the gorge](10-1A.md)
 - [🌳 Cut 🔪 the bushes](10-3A.md)
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3A.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3A.md
index a1b248c3..d0ee8841 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3A.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 **You cut the bushes 🌳.**
 
-It turns out that this path leads to the river on which you walked earlier!
+This path leads back to the river!
 
-This is a place where the river is shallow so there will be no problem with crossing.
+The river is shallow here and you have no problems crossing.
 
 Soon, you are in your shelter ⛺. You wonder if you did the right thing by leaving the woman 👩.
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3B.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3B.md
index 55ab9614..93fc34e8 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3B.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3B.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **Congratulations! 🥳**
 
-You survived and killed werewolf 🐺! Now you can play another dungeons or rooms! 
+You survived and killed the werewolf 🐺! Now you can play other dungeon or rooms! 
 
 Thanks for playing! 🥳
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/1800-won.md b/english/time-travel/0/1800-won.md
index 38bcbb40..4f4e4624 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/1800-won.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/1800-won.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **Congratulations! 🥳**
 
-You survived and killed werewolf 🐺! Now you can play another dungeons or rooms! 
+You survived and killed the werewolf 🐺! Now you can play other dungeons or rooms! 
 
 Thanks for playing! 🥳
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/3/3.md b/english/time-travel/0/3/3.md
index 3843e05d..0b4b8888 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/3/3.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/3/3.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**You built a shelter 🎁⛺!**
+**After 2 hours, you managed to build a cozy shelter 🎁⛺!**
 
 *Sun is about to set* 🌆. *You miss your friends*(👦🧑👧👩‍🦰) *back in the future*.
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/5/5.md b/english/time-travel/0/5/5.md
index ccd140c5..b7b9aff1 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/5/5.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/5/5.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **You sit in the dark shelter alone and fall asleep.😴🛌**
 
-**While you were sleeping, a tiger enters your wood built house. 🐅🐯**
+**Whilst asleep, a hungry tiger snuck into your cozy shelter 🐅🐯**
 
 He. Kills. You. 😐🥩
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/6/6-1A.md b/english/time-travel/0/6/6-1A.md
index d8c698cc..8273f85d 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/6/6-1A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/6/6-1A.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**You ate cooked meat and felt sleepy .**
+**You ate cooked meat and felt sleepy.**
 
 *You fall asleep by the fire and it's cosy 🤗. You awake in the morning in your new house.*
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2A.md b/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2A.md
index 78becc3b..9b6c1744 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2A.md
@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@
-**You spend some time looking for food, and you found berries 🍇.**
+**In the darkness of the forest, you get lucky and stumble into a tasty-looking berry bush 🍇**
 
-Unfortunately, way back home wolf 🐺 attacked you.
+You make your way back to camp, munching on your tasty treats.  
+Unfortunately, you're not the only one in the forest who's looking for a meal...
+A rabid wolf 🐺 smells your berries and attacks.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You slowly and painfully bleed out until you die 🩸☠️
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2B.md b/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2B.md
index 6935b399..f1430f16 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2B.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2B.md
@@ -1,3 +1,6 @@
-**You are waking up very hungry and has no strength to do anything.**
+**You wake up famished and have no strength to do anything.**
+
+Spending the night in the past was fun, but you're so hungry and tired.
+You look at your time machine and remember the possibilities are endless...
 
 - [Travel back to the future 🌠](../1/1.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/6/6.md b/english/time-travel/0/6/6.md
index 62b049dd..0afd4072 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/6/6.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/6/6.md
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 
 Your stomach growls with hunger 😟.
 
-- [Go out and try to find a food](6-2A.md) 
+- [Forage for food](6-2A.md) 
 - [Stay home ⛺ and go to sleep](6-2B.md)
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1.md
index 129be2b7..8dc39435 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-**You feel dizzy from eating mushrooms 🍄. Your world starts spinning 🌀 and you fall to the ground.**
+**Within 10 minutes, you begin to feel dizzy 🍄. Your world slowly starts spinning 🌀 and you blissfully fall down to meet the soft forest floor. You close your eyes.**
 
-A huge rainbow 🌈 hare 🐰 appears in front of you and is asking for the way to Valhalla...
-Unfortunately, you are unable to speak.
+Your eyes crack open. Suddenly, a huge rainbow 🌈 bunny-rabbit 🐰 appears, politely asking if you know the way to Valhalla...
+You understand his perfect English, but your head is still spinning when you try to speak:
 
 - [🙊 ymmhmmmhmmm](7-1A.md) 
-- [↪️ Show him random direction](7-1B.md) 
+- [↪️ Point to a random direction](7-1B.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1A.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1A.md
index 0b72d666..c7d2197e 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1A.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-**A huge rainbow 🌈 hare 🐰 gets angry and throw shurikens at you.**
+**The huge rainbow 🌈 bunny-rabbit 🐰 gets angry at your blasphemous mumbling and throws shurikens at you.**
 
-You die ☠️.
+Everything happened so fast! Your wounds don't feel real. Paralyzed by what took place, you bleed out and die ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1B.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1B.md
index 6bc2cc1d..ffe9d355 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1B.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1B.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**He thanks you and leave you alone.**
+**He thanks you and leaves you to enjoy your bliss.**
 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2.md
index a7961b6d..0242097d 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-**You see a little hare 🐰 jumping around.**
+**You see a little bunny-rabbit 🐰 jumping around.**
 
-- [👐 Try to kill him with bare hands](7-2A.md) 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [👐 Try to kill him with your bare hands](7-2A.md) 
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2A.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2A.md
index 44339d39..4e617141 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2A.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**Hare 🐰 noticed you and started to run away.**
+**The bunny-rabbit 🐰 noticed you and runs away.**
 
 - [🏃 Chase him](7-2AA.md) 
-- [🤾‍♂️ Throw a stone at it](7-2AB.md) 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [🤾‍♂️ Throw a stone at him](7-2AB.md) 
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AA.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AA.md
index 6c14052f..2fedc886 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AA.md
@@ -1,5 +1,7 @@
-**Suddenly a wolf 🐺 jumps out of the bushes and attacks you.**
+**You take off after the bunny-rabbit 🐰 with the speed of Usain Bolt 🇯🇲, randomly darting through the trees after your prey.**
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+*On your pursuit, a rabid wolf 🐺 joins in the hunt! Unwilling to share your next meal, you abandon your chase by attacking the beast instead!***
 
-[🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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+You manage to fight off the rabid wolf, but you've been bitten and are badly bleeding. Within hours, rabies sets in - driving you mad. Alone, hungry and confused deep inside the forest, you think of the time machine and your friends back in the future.You eventually succumb to your injurues, and die ☠️.
+
+[🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AB.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AB.md
index 6ba237cd..f9612922 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AB.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AB.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**You thrown 🤾‍♂️ a stone at hare 🐰.**
+**You thrown 🤾‍♂️ a stone at the bunny-rabbit 🐰.**
 
-It died. You obtained **meat** 🥩.
+Critical HIT! You obtained **meat** 🥩.
 
-- [🤤 Eat meat 🥩](7-2ABA.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2-1.md)
\ No newline at end of file
+- [🤤 Eat raw meat 🥩](7-2ABA.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2-1.md)
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2ABA.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2ABA.md
index 10cb0754..7ba8e109 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2ABA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2ABA.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**It wasn't eatable. You puked 🤮.**
+**It wasn't edible. You vomit 🤮.**
 
-You still feel hungry.
+You feel better after vommitting, but still hungry.
 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-3.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-3.md
index 783fd01d..bffa47fe 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-3.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-3.md
@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@
-**You spend some time looking for food, and you found berries 🍇.**
+**You get lucky and stumble into a tasty-looking berry bush 🍇**
 
-Unfortunately, wolf 🐺 attacked you.
+You continue through the lush forest, munching on your tasty treats.  
+Unfortunately, you're not the only one in the forest who's looking for a meal...
+A rabid wolf 🐺 smells your berries and attacks.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You slowly and painfully bleed out until you die 🩸☠️
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-4.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-4.md
index 861019fe..64f8b8e6 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-4.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-4.md
@@ -4,4 +4,5 @@ What do you want to do?
 
 - [🚶‍♂️ Explore the area](../8/8.md) 
 - [⏲ Go to the future year 2100](../../1/0.md) 
-- [🌠 Go back to your present](../1/1.md)
\ No newline at end of file
+- [🌠 Go back to your present](../1/1.md)
+
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7.md
index 6f63376a..bbdb04ce 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/7/7.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/7/7.md
@@ -1,8 +1,9 @@
 **You are looking around and notice strange-looking mushrooms 🍄.**
 
-When you look at mushrooms, you hear animal sounds.
+As you approach the mushroom patch, you hear the faint sounds of animals nearby...
+What do you do?
 
-- [🍄 Eat mushrooms](7-1.md) 
+- [🍄 Pick and eat the mushrooms](7-1.md) 
 - [🦻 Follow the sounds of the animals](7-2.md) 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓🏠 Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
\ No newline at end of file
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-1.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-1.md
index 09b1fc12..f162d7d0 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-1.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-1.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 **The bushes 🌳🌲 on the other side of the river are too tall to pass through.**
 
-Without machete 🔪 you are unable to go further.
+Without a machete 🔪 you are unable to proceed.
 
 - [⬅️ Go back](8-4.md)
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2.md
index 498632e9..b010fe18 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2.md
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
-**You see the stream narrows and becomes quite dangerous.**
+**You see the river widens up and becomes quite dangerous.**
+
+*the rocks create rapids which throw white water over 1m into the air*
+
+What now?
 
 - [⬆️ Go upstream](8-2A.md)
 - [➡️ Cross the river](8-2B.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2A.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2A.md
index dac48bb7..9273ae03 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2A.md
@@ -1,8 +1,10 @@
-**You are keep walking, and mile beyond, the hills narrow ominously on either side.**
+**You reluctantly press onwards. After about a mile, the gently-sloping river bank shifts to ominous, narrow canyon walls on either side.**
 
-The road goes uphill ⛰️ in a series of switchbacks and continues. 
+The river slices through the surrounding hillside 🏞️, leaving a trecherous gorge in its wake that stretches into endless blackness.
 
-The stream slices through the neighboring ridge 🏞️, carving a dark and dangerous gorge as it goes.
+Uphill ⛰️ the path continues in a series of switchbacks and loose boulders.
+
+*Your path forks in two* 
 
 - [⛰️ Go uphill](8-2AA.md)
 - [🏞️ Go through the gorge](8-2C.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AA.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AA.md
index 587c45a5..77d11752 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AA.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**You keep going uphill and you reach an ramshackle farm 🏚️🌾.**
+**You wind your way uphill until you reach an ramshackle farm 🏚️🌾.**
 
-The farm consists of well-kept fields 🌾, a farmhouse 🏚️, a woodshed, and a mostly-collapsed barn.
+Just beyond the boulders you spy the remains of a mostly-collapsed barn. Next to it lies what appears to be a woodshed. As you near your approach, to your delight and releif, a small farmhouse 🏚️ with well-kept fields 🌾 morph into view.
 
 - [🏚️ Enter farmhouse](8-2AB.md)
 - [🚪 Enter woodshed](8-2AC.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AB.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AB.md
index 6f3644d2..a933a7b0 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AB.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AB.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You enter farmhouse 🏚️.**
+**You enter the farmhouse 🏚️.**
 
-The front room contains a table, four chairs 🪑, a fireplace 🔥, a few cooking utensil and some books 📚.
+In the front room now, you see a table with four chairs 🪑, a fireplace 🔥 with cooking utensils, and some books 📚.
 
-There is also back room.
+In the corner, you see the entance to the back room.
 
 - [📚 Read books](8-2ABA.md)
 - [🚪 Enter back room](8-2ABB.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABA.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABA.md
index 4cdc997e..61293e95 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABA.md
@@ -1,8 +1,9 @@
-**You open books 📖 and read.**
+**You open some books 📖 and read.**
 
-First one is copy of *Monstres And Their Kynde* 📘 in archaic English. Books is about wolves 🐺 and werewolves.
+You first pick up a copy of *Monstres And Their Kynde* 📘written in archaic English. You skim to learn it's about wolves 🐺 and werewolves. It piques your interest, inviting you to explore the other titles. 
 
-There is also a copy of *Les Lupus Horrifique* 📗, concerning a mass outbreak of lupus 🐺 and rabies, by a Dr. Raphael Peltonne 👨‍⚕️. The book is filled with terrifying events, told in an excecdingly cynical way.
+Returning the tattered chunk to the table, your eye catches **bold** lettering engraved on sheepskin:
+ *Les Lupus Horrifique* 📗 by a Dr. Raphael Peltonne 👨‍⚕️. The book is filled with terrifying events concerning a mass outbreak of lupus 🐺 and rabies - told in an excecdingly cynical way.
 
 - [🚪 Enter back room](8-2ABC.md)
 - [🚪 Go to woodshed](8-2AE.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABB.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABB.md
index 11fec676..3550bfe9 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABB.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABB.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 **The back room's contents include three beds, dirty and unmade.**
 
- There is a second fireplace 🔥, and this one has warm coals .
+The smoldering coals of this bedroom's fireplace dimmly light the room.
 
  Clothes are piled everywhere, both men's 👔 and women's 👚, and an upright wardrobe actually holds reasonably clean, respectable clothes.
 
- There is a machete 🔪 by the bedside table.
+ In the glint of the firelight you spy a machete 🔪 by the bedside table.
 
 - [🔪 Take machete and go back](8-2ABD.md)
 - [🚪 Go to woodshed](8-2AE.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABC.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABC.md
index e2446669..9e06a88c 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABC.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABC.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 **The back room's contents include three beds, dirty and unmade.**
 
- There is a second fireplace 🔥, and this one has warm coals .
+The smoldering coals of this bedroom's fireplace dimmly light the room.
 
  Clothes are piled everywhere, both men's 👔 and women's 👚, and an upright wardrobe actually holds reasonably clean, respectable clothes.
 
- There is a machete 🔪 by the bedside table.
+ In the glint of the firelight you spy a machete 🔪 by the bedside table.
 
 - [🔪 Take machete and go back](8-2ABE.md)
 - [🚪 Go to woodshed](8-2AE.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABD.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABD.md
index 39a1e824..0915509f 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABD.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABD.md
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 **You are back in front room.**
 
-The front room contains a table, four chairs 🪑, a fireplace 🔥, a few cooking utensil and some books 📚.
+In the front room now, you are greeted by the same table with four chairs 🪑, a fireplace 🔥 with cooking utensils, and some books 📚.
+
+In the corner, you stand with the entance to the back room behind you.
 
 - [📚 Read books](8-2ABDA.md)
 - [🚪 Go to woodshed](8-2AE.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABDA.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABDA.md
index 7827d0b3..7f8b34be 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABDA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABDA.md
@@ -1,8 +1,9 @@
-**You open books 📖 and read.**
+**You open some books 📖 and read.**
 
-First one is copy of *Monstres And Their Kynde* 📘 in archaic English. Books is about wolves 🐺 and werewolves.
+You first pick up a copy of *Monstres And Their Kynde* 📘written in archaic English. You skim to learn it's about wolves 🐺 and werewolves. It piques your interest, inviting you to explore the other titles. 
 
-There is also a copy of *Les Lupus Horrifique* 📗, concerning a mass outbreak of lupus 🐺 and rabies, by a Dr. Raphael Peltonne 👨‍⚕️. The book is filled with terrifying events, told in an excecdingly cynical way.
+Returning the tattered chunk to the table, your eye catches **bold** lettering engraved on sheepskin:
+ *Les Lupus Horrifique* 📗 by a Dr. Raphael Peltonne 👨‍⚕️. The book is filled with terrifying events concerning a mass outbreak of lupus 🐺 and rabies - told in an excecdingly cynical way.
 
 - [🚪 Go to woodshed](8-2ABE.md)
 - [🚪 Go to barn](8-2ABE.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABE.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABE.md
index 1de4ff97..511a1a68 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABE.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2ABE.md
@@ -1,4 +1,6 @@
 **You go outside the farmhouse, and see that sun is going down 🌄.**
 
+*You must have lost track of time*
+
 - [⬇️ Go back](../9/9-1.md)
 - [🥱 Stay here overnight](8-2AEA)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AC.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AC.md
index 6a01553d..4b7a17f7 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AC.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AC.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**The woodshed hold nearly eight cords of well-cured hardwood.**
+**The woodshed holds nearly eight cords of well-cured hardwood.**
 
 Some sticks have teeth marks on them.
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AE.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AE.md
index 29bbf973..1d6f9f60 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AE.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AE.md
@@ -1,4 +1,6 @@
 **You go outside the farmhouse, and see that sun is going down 🌄.**
 
+*You must have lost track of time*
+
 - [⬇️ Go back](../9/9-2.md)
 - [🥱 Stay here overnight](8-2AEA.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AEA.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AEA.md
index 9a582548..b0d19b0e 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AEA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AEA.md
@@ -1,8 +1,10 @@
-**You are going to sleep in one of the beds 🛌.**
+**You decide to sleep in the largest bed, nearest where the machete was found 🛌.**
 
-In the night someone is entering the house. You woke up to what felt like a blunt blow to the head.
+You sleep soundly, and gently stir to the sound of footsteps in the frontroom.
 
-Before you could react, a second one followed.
+Not fully awake, you sit up, and promptly receive a blunt blow to the head - knocking you back onto your pillow.
+
+Before you could react, a second one follows.
 
 You're dying ☠️.
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2B.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2B.md
index c5cf9600..4b2669e1 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2B.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2B.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-**You are trying to cross the river, but you are carried away by the stream.**
+**You are trying to cross the river, but you are quickly swept along by the current.**
 
-You hit the rock, and die ☠️.
+Your body thrashes against the rapids. You get knocked unconscious underwater, and drown ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2C.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2C.md
index d72bd231..b00587a7 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2C.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2C.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**You walk in the ravine.**
+**You walk confidently into the gorge.**
 
-You hear screams 😱 in the distance.
+Shortly after entering, you hear screams 😱 echoing off the walls in the distance.
 
 - [🏃‍♂️ Run](../9/9-1BA.md)
 - [🚶‍♂️ Walk carefully](8-2CB.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CB.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CB.md
index e65addf4..56ea98ca 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CB.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CB.md
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 
 At the end of this ravine you see a woman 👩 tied to a tree and crying 😢. 
 
-- [Untie woman 👩](8-2CBA.md)
+- [Untie her 👩](8-2CBA.md)
 - [Walk to her carefully and watch 👀 the area around](8-2CBB.md)
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CBA.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CBA.md
index 51e154bf..07b8edc0 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CBA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CBA.md
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 **You run up to the woman and try to untie her.**
 
-Suddenly, something knocks you to the ground 💢. You see a human-like hairy monster with the face of a wolf 🐺. His face seems to be very angry 😠.
+Suddenly, something knocks you to the ground 💢. You see a human-like hairy monster with the face of a wolf 🐺. He is displeased and very hungry.
 
-It stab you in your face 🤕.
+He takes his blade from his sheath and stabs violently towards your face.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You died ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CBB.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CBB.md
index 49b64997..49413b83 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CBB.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2CBB.md
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
-**You are walking to a woman carefully.**
+**You approach the woman carefully.**
 
-Suddenly, you see a human-like hairy monster with the face of a wolf 🐺 running into you. 
+Suddenly, something knocks you to the ground 💢. You see a human-like hairy monster with the face of a wolf 🐺. He is displeased and very hungry.
 
-It stab you in your face 🤕 before you react.
+He takes his blade from his sheath and stabs violently towards your face.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You died ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-3.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-3.md
index 00cb9494..8590496d 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-3.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-3.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**You are walking downstream and find nothing but wagon wheels, and garbage tossed ⚙️ from the railway 🛤️.**
+**You are walking downstream and find nothing but wagon wheels and garbage tossed ⚙️ from the railway 🛤️.**
 
-The river gets bigger and dirtier from drainage from mines, and all the shafts.
+*Waste produced in the nearby mines makes the river smaller and dirtier as it flows downstream.*
 
 - [➡️ Cross the river](8-3A.md)
 - [⬆️ Go upstream](8-4.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-3A.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-3A.md
index cabf9fcf..1935e0c8 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-3A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-3A.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-**You are trying to cross the river, but it's too deep.**
+**You attempt to cross, but the waste from the mine is no ordinary waste.**
 
-You are drowning 🏊. Nobody around to help you.
+It is radioactive waste, and the river is very toxic!
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You died ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-4.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-4.md
index 6ed821ac..709bee3e 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-4.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-4.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You are back in place, where you came from.**
+**You backtrack to your starting place along the river bank**
 
 Where do you want to go now?
 
-- [➡️ Cross the river](8-1.md)
+<!-- - [➡️ Cross the river](8-1.md) This line just creates a sort-of loop between 8-1 and 8-4 and seems unnecessary --> 
 - [⬆️ Go upstream](8-2.md)
 - [⬇️ Go downstream](8-3.md)
 - [⛺ Go back to the shelter](../7/7-4.md)
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8.md
index ec9a55df..a8e55a3e 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/8/8.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/8/8.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**You went from your shelter and you came across the river 🏞️.**
+**You leave your shelter and come across a nearby river 🏞️.**
 
 The river is narrow and shallow. You are sure you are able to cross it.
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1.md
index 37004ad1..91ba5a30 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**You came back to crossroad, with gorge 🏞️ and way back to shelter.**
+**You traverse back to the fork and see the gorge 🏞️ and the way back to your shelter.**
 
 - [⬇️ Go downstream](9-1A.md)
 - [🏞️ Go through the gorge](9-1B.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1A.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1A.md
index 09eedcf8..e81e81ce 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1A.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-**You are trying to go downstream slowly.**
+**You turn back towards your shelter and carefully start down the path**
 
-Suddenly you slipped and hit a rock.
+You slip and hit your head on a rock.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You died ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1B.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1B.md
index 4bb9d1d0..7ff9ddc2 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1B.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1B.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**You walk in the ravine, in the semi-darkness.**
+**You bravely face the gorge and enter.**
 
 You hear screams 😱 in the distance.
 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BA.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BA.md
index d21c6e7c..45017997 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BA.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 **You slipped and hit a rock.**
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You died ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BB.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BB.md
index d30c137d..d05077b8 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BB.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BB.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **After about 20 minutes you reach a valley.**
 
-At the end of this ravine you see a woman 👩 tied to a tree and crying 😢. 
+At the end of the gorge you see a woman 👩 tied to a tree. She's helplessly crying 😢. 
 
-- [Untie woman 👩](9-1BC.md)
-- [Walk to her carefully and watch 👀 the area around](9-1BD.md)
\ No newline at end of file
+- [Untie her 👩](9-1BC.md)
+- [Approach her carefully and check your surroundings 👀 ](9-1BD.md)
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BC.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BC.md
index 62489fc2..94378ea8 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BC.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BC.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **You run up to the woman and try to untie her.**
 
-Suddenly, something knocks you to the ground 💢. You see a human-like hairy monster with the face of a wolf 🐺. His face seems to be very angry 😠.
+Suddenly, something angrily knocks you to the ground 💢. Lording over you is a real werewolf 🐺😠.
 
 - [Defend yourself with a machete 🔪](9-3.md)
 - [🔪 Get up and try to stab werewolf](9-1BCB.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BCC.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BCC.md
index 2953722a..3cf06618 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BCC.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BCC.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-**You ran 🏃‍♂️ as fast as you could.**
+**You run 🏃‍♂️ as fast as you can.**
 
-You feel a strong stab 🩸 in the back. 
+You feel the white-hot pain of a blade pierce your back. 
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You run with the blade in your back until you bleed out 🩸, and die ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BD.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BD.md
index 18c18742..99559a21 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BD.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-1BD.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**You are walking to a woman carefully.**
+**You appraoch her carefully.**
 
-Suddenly, you see a human-like hairy monster with the face of a wolf 🐺 running into you. 
+Suddenly, you hear approaching footsteps and turn to see a werewolf 🐺 running sprinting towards you - and gaining speed! 
 
 
 - [🏃‍♂️ Try to dodge his attack](9-4A.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-2.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-2.md
index 630ac94a..509747b2 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-2.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-2.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**You came back to crossroad, with gorge 🏞️ and way back to shelter.**
+**You traverse back to the fork and see the gorge 🏞️ and the way back to your shelter.**
 
 - [⬇️ Go downstream](9-1A.md)
 - [🏞️ Go through the gorge](../8/8-2C.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3.md
index 8037b126..312ae739 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**Werewolf 🐺 is trying to hit you.**
+**The werewolf 🐺 is going to strike at you.**
 
 - [👈 Defend left side](9-3A.md)
 - [👉 Defend right side](9-3B.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3A.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3A.md
index 2f029587..3820106d 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3A.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**You are defending your left side with a machete 🔪.**
+**You perry left with your machete 🔪.**
 
-Fortunately, he attacks you with his right 🤜 paw. His paw tightens on the machete. You see big and sharp teeth hungry for blood 🩸.
+You defend just-in-time as his right paw clenches 🤜 your machete. He leans closer and the twilight reveals big, sharp teeth that are machetes of their own 🩸.
 
 - [Push him with the machete with both hands 🔪](9-3AA.md)
 - [Try to hit him in the face with other hand 🤛](9-3AB.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3AA.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3AA.md
index 22136eaa..63c987e2 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3AA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3AA.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-**You are trying to push werewolf 🐺 with your machete 🔪.**
+**You struggle against the werewolf 🐺 fighting with your machete 🔪.**
 
-It wasn't easy, but it seems werewolf 🐺 did not stand sharp machete, and he stepped back. Now you can get up.
+It wasn't easy, but your effort was just enough. The wererolf 🐺 recoils in pain, allowing you a brief chance to strike!
 
-- [🧍 Get up and attack him](9-4AA.md)
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+- [🧍 Combat roll and attack!](9-4AA.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3AB.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3AB.md
index ada12757..65dae8e9 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3AB.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3AB.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-**You are trying to hit 🤛 werewolf 🐺 while defending yourself with machete.**
+**You try your best uppercut 🤛 whilst guarding yourself with your machete.**
 
-Werewolf 🐺 is faster and stronger than you and bites you in the face 🤕.
+The cunning werewolf 🐺 side-steps your punch and bites your neck 🤕.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You let out a gasp as the blood warms your tired body on its way out onto the ground. It's over ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3B.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3B.md
index f9b2a2cf..52061b89 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3B.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-3B.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-**You are defending your right side with a machete 🔪.**
+**You perry right with your machete 🔪.**
 
-Werewolf attacks you with his right 🤜 paw exactly in your face 🤕.
+The relentless werewolf attacks your undefended side with his right paw 🤜, landing a jaw-crushing blow to your face 🤕.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You died ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4A.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4A.md
index 893f157f..01d70d26 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4A.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4A.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You are trying to avoid his attack.**
+**You attempt to dodge his attack.**
 
-You see a werewolf 🐺 with his paws 🤜 pointing straight at your head.
+You stare at your fate, the werewolf 🐺 with his paws 🤜 coming straight for your head.
 
-At the last moment, you bend down and see the werewolf 🐺 stopped behind you.
+But at the last moment, you see the werewolf 🐺 stopped behind you.
 
 - [Attack him 🏃🔪](9-4AA.md)
 - [Run away 🏃](9-1BCC.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AA.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AA.md
index 035f4e85..128611d0 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AA.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AA.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**You are stabbing 🔪💢 werewolf 🐺.**
+**You stab 🔪💢 the werewolf 🐺.**
 
-The werewolf screams into the sky 😱. He strikes a blow out of his rage 😡.
+Your strike wounds him deeply. The werewolf howls in pain 😱 but is not beaten. He swipes his razor sharp claws at you in rage 😡.
 
 - [Try to avoid 💨](9-4AB.md)
 - [Push him with the machete 🔪](9-4AC.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AB.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AB.md
index 980ad725..b0d23227 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AB.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AB.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**Werewolf 🐺 is trying to hit you.**
+**The werewolf 🐺 is trying to hit you, but you successfully avoid him**
 
-You jumped off and noticed, that he has his back to you. 
+You gather yourself and notice his back is turned, allowing you to strike! 
 
-You are stabbing 🔪💢 him, and he falls to the ground.
+You stab 🔪💢 him once more, a fatal blow that releases his bowels. You're confident that it's over...
 
 - [Rescue woman 👩](../10/10-1.md)
 - [🔪 Kill woman 👩](../10/10-2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AC.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AC.md
index 4d27ce7a..e7dc574a 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AC.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4AC.md
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
-**Werewolf 🐺 is trying to hit you.**
+**The werewolf 🐺 is trying to hit you.**
 
-You are attacking him with machete 🔪. Your hit was strong. But his was stronger.
+You slice at him with your machete 🔪. Your hits were strong, but his were stronger.
 
-You fall to the ground with a torn face 🤕.
+You fall to the ground with a broken spine 🤕.
 
-You are dead ☠️.
+You lie paralyzed, helpless, awaiting your fate ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4B.md b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4B.md
index c60f7e65..bb8ff4ed 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4B.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/0/9/9-4B.md
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
-**Werewolf 🐺 is running at you.**
+**The werewolf 🐺 is sprinting towards you.**
 
-You're standing tight with a machete 🔪.
+You brace yourself with your machete 🔪 in hand, ready for the worst.
 
-You hit him, but he is stronger and tear you apart with his claws 🤜💢.
+As he gets within striking distance, you buckle in fear. You barely scratch through his tough hide, and he proceeds to tear you apart with his claws 🤜💢.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You died ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/1/0.md b/english/time-travel/1/0.md
index 94b06abf..ea9c44cd 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/1/0.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/1/0.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **Future is pretty exciting. Flying cars all around 🚗 but global warming has exploited almost all of earth's resources.** 
 
-*SpaceX and NASA are working together to send everyone to Mars since Earth has become inhabitable.*
+*SpaceX and NASA are working together to send everyone to Mars since Earth has become uninhabitable.*
 
 - [😥 You get overwhelmed and go back to the past](../begin-journey.md) 
 - [😎 Stay and help people colonize on Mars](1.md)
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diff --git a/english/time-travel/2/3.md b/english/time-travel/2/3.md
index 99460504..14c8375d 100644
--- a/english/time-travel/2/3.md
+++ b/english/time-travel/2/3.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **You have gathered a team of top engineers 🏫 to save hummanity from extinction**
 
-*The engineers tell you that they have been working on the blueprints for sealed dome that would create a cooler environment for humans to survive 💨* 
+*The engineers tell you that they have been working on the blueprints for a sealed dome that would create a cooler environment for humans to survive 💨* 
 
 - [👨‍⚖️ You approve of these blueprints and allow the engineers to build the dome](3-A.md)
 - [🧐 You are skeptical of their plans and deny the funds for this project](3-B.md)
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