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Graded Assignment-1 (May Term 2024) :- Visualization Critique #27
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Name: Rajesh Saha Title : How people get around, by modal share % Easiness:
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Citation:https://www.visualcapitalist.com/how-people-get-around-america-europe-asia/ |
Title: Hierarchy of Digital Distractions Critique How effective is it at what it aims to do and what works well? • Clear Hierarchical Structure:
• Effective Use of Color and Space:
• Relatable and Engaging Content:
• Concise and Informative Text:
• Visual Appeal:
What doesn’t work well? • Overgeneralization / lack of credible support for hierarchy:
• Subjective Ranking:
• Small Text and Readability Issues:
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Title: Population Distribution by country Short Critique The visualization effectively communicates the distribution of the world's population by country. It provides a clear, quick understanding of how the global population is distributed geographically. What Works Well: Color Coding: The use of distinct colors for each continent makes it easy to differentiate between them also the use of different shade for the countries in the same continent aids in quick identification of each country. Labels: The labels are clear and appropriately placed, aiding in quick identification of each continent. Relative Size Representation: Showing regions with the most population as larger helps in quickly understanding the relative population densities of different areas. Simplicity: The simplicity of the visualization can be a strength, making it easy for viewers to understand at a glance. However, it might also be a limitation if viewers require more detailed information about specific countries or regions. Weaknesses: Lack of Specificity: Not showing countries' original shapes can lead to ambiguity, as viewers may not be able to identify individual countries or regions accurately also Without the actual shapes of countries, viewers might misinterpret the data. For example, a large, sparsely populated country might appear smaller than a small, densely populated country, leading to incorrect assumptions about population density.. Distortion: The use of a globe can distort the perception of population distribution, especially for countries placed near the poles in the visual, which may appear larger than they are in reality. Lack of Country Details: Viewers cannot see the shapes or boundaries of countries, which may be important for understanding geopolitical contexts or specific population distributions within countries. Clarity and focus: Since distribution is based on countries the use of continent names for regions may lead to confusion (e.g rest of east Asia 36M). Consider using country names or alternative labels to maintain clarity. Color coding: Color shades for the countries of a continent should have been selected based on the population of the country. Suggestions for improvement: Interactive Elements: Incorporating interactive features like tooltips or clickable regions to display detailed population information for each country. Data Transparency: Providing access to the underlying data or methodology used for the visualization can enhance trust and understanding among viewers. Scale Representation: Including a scale or legend to indicate how the globe's size and color correspond to population density can improve clarity. |
Title: "The World Wide Web: A Breakdown of Internet Usage by Country"Name: Kaustav Goswami Article Link: https://www.visualistan.com/2016/03/the-world-wide-web-a-breakdown-of-internet-usage-by-country.html Strengths
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Overall, I feel that this infographic is rich in data and visually compelling but simplifying its design, improving accessibility and providing more context would significantly enhance its effectiveness and user-friendliness. |
Data Visualization Designs - Assignment 1My Details
Percentage of Americans That Identify As Christians - Fox NewsFox News broadcasted the following visualization which is semantically incorrect. Let's look at it in brief below What's wrong
Why it's wrong
What could have been right?
Things that are just correct
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Satya Ranjan Sahu What they are trying to show:The rising cost of training AI models over time. What's working:
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Name - Neeraj Yadav (21f1005729) Critique: Effectiveness: What Works Well:
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Overall, the bar chart effectively communicates the CO2 emissions by country, but some enhancements could improve its readability and provide a deeper understanding of the data. |
Name - Shyam Sundhar Ganesh
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CO2 Emission vs. Vulnerability to Climate Change by Nation Across the World Aim of the given visualization This visual presents a precise report of CO2 emissions and climate change vulnerability data of nations as of 2010. It aims to gently remind and warn nations to stop excessive CO2 emissions. How effective is the given visualization? At first glance, this visual stands out because it is clear and easily understandable. The title, visual, and color labels clearly convey the intended message without clutter, effectively covering the data of all nations. Things that work well in this visual
Things that don’t work well in this visual
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Visualization Critique: Women's Wages - Jobs with the Highest and Lowest Pay Gaps CritiqueEffectiveness The visualization aims to highlight the jobs in which women earn the most and the least compared to men, expressed as a percentage of men's earnings. It effectively demonstrates the disparity in earnings across different occupations, providing a clear comparison between jobs where women are relatively better paid and those where they face significant pay gaps. What Works Well
What Doesn't Work
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Satellites in Low Orbits Are Taking over the SkiesSource: Satellites in Low Orbits Are Taking over the Skies | Scientific American What works?• Using different contrasting colors to categorize orbits, and sub-categorizing satellites by weight with varying shades of the same color, is an effective method for organizing and displaying data compactly and efficiently. • Initially, I thought that choosing the origin at the top instead of the bottom for displaying “Satellites in Low Orbits Are Taking Over the Skies” conveyed the opposite meaning. However, I then realized our minds are trained to read from top to bottom. These clever positioning of the origin makes it an effective starting point for the graph. • Incorporating arrows in the legends, rather than relying solely on numerical labels, provides clear visual cues and enhances the data’s interpretability. It’s a smart way to facilitate quick comprehension. What doesn’t work/ what can be improved?• Horizontal grid lines help in aiding data comparison for a specific year. Their absence makes it difficult to interpret the data accurately. Consider adding those grid lines to enhance clarity. • The uneven pyramid structure can introduce ambiguity when interpreting the length and corresponding satellite count. Opting for a flat base would certainly enhance clarity and readability. FINALM CONCLUSION:OVERALL, THE STATIC VISUALIZATION EFFECTIVELY CONVEYS THE INCREASING NUMBER OF SATELLITES OVER TIME, ESPECIALLY IN THE LOWER ORBITS IN AN SIMPLE YEAT EFFECTIVE WAY. |
Name - Suraj ARS PROS:
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Name: Kirupa Krishan G Source Image: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/d/d2/Indian_General_Election_2024.svg Cons :
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Infographic that explains an InfographicName - S R Srinivasan CritiqueObjectiveThe visualization aims to present essential purpose of an infographic. As the author says, "An infographic is a picture that blends data with design, storytelling, and insights that helps nonprofits concisely communicate messages to their audiences." The creative presentation in this infographic looks to bring out the difference between data, information, presentation, and visualization. What Works WellAlmost everything seems to work well in the visualization. A few specific items are:
What Doesn't WorkMost of the elements of the visualization fit together and there are very few 'mistakes'.
What Could Be BetterIt is quite difficult to improve a product that is already very good. Since lego blocks are often used to create shapes, the last tile could have actually used shapes rather than simple arrnagement of the bricks. The other tiles have an element of 3-dimensions and the last title could have enhanced this further by making the shapes 'interact' with each other. |
Name: Ashutosh Kumar Barnwal Pros:
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Name: Sakiley Pranay Deep Objective: This visualization aims to depict the 10 most visited countries in 2023, based on the total number of foreigners entering each country. Pros:
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What could be improved: While this visualization effectively fulfills its objective, there are places where it could be improved to make it more effective and accessible.
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Name – Souvik Bhattacharjee Objective: This visualization aims capture the reduction of the number of teenage pregnancies rate Pros: Cons: What could be improved: |
Name: Ashrey Title: The Rise and Rise of A.I. Large Language Models (LLMs) & their associated bots like ChatGPTURL: The Rise and Rise of A.I. Large Language Models (LLMs) & their associated bots like ChatGPT EffectivenessThe visualization aims to depict the evolution and diversity of large language models (LLMs) over time, highlighting their sizes (in terms of parameters) and categorizing them by the organizations that developed them. It successfully showcases the rapid growth and variety of LLMs from different companies and research institutions, providing a clear historical context and current landscape. What Works Well
What Could Be Better
ConclusionOverall, the visualization is effective in communicating the rapid development and diversity of LLMs. Enhancements in handling overlapping bubbles, providing more detailed information, and refining the scale could make it even more informative and user-friendly. |
Name: Abir Subroto Chakraborty Title: Visualizing the Biomass of LifeSource: Visualizing the Biomass of Life Objective:The objective of the infographic is to visually compare the biomass of various animal groups on Earth, highlighting their relative carbon weights to educate viewers about the distribution of biomass in the living world. Positives:
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Conclusion:Overall, the infographic succeeds in making complex data accessible and visually appealing but could benefit from minor adjustments to improve clarity and user interaction. |
Name: Sheikh Uzair Hussain The Spiraling Opioid Epidemic in AmericaThe infographic titled "The Spiraling Opioid Epidemic in America" is effective in visually representing the dramatic rise in opioid overdose deaths over the last 20 years in the United States. It effectively highlights the three waves of the opioid crisis, providing a clear and impactful visual narrative. What Works Well
What Doesn't Work and Can Be Improved
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Name: Syed Afrin Gowhar Title: Learning Out of PovertyStrengths:
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Conclusion: "Learning Out of Poverty" is a compelling and visually engaging infographic that effectively communicates the multifaceted benefits of education. By improving text readability and providing data sources, its impact could be further amplified, making it an even more powerful tool for advocacy and education. |
Name: Harsehraab Singh Sarao Title: Market share of AMD and Intel during Q3 2019 The stacked bar chart aims to visually represent the relative market share of AMD and Intel CPUs during Q3 2019. What works well:
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Name: U Adithyan Biggest Tech Acquisitions of 2020Source: https://www.visualcapitalist.com/visualizing-biggest-tech-mergers-and-acquisitions-of-2020/ Strengths
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ConclusionWhile the current design for the visualization is visually appealing and eye-catching, a simpler visualization could have been much more effective at conveying the information without much clutter or empty space. |
Top Lithium Producers in 2023https://www.visualcapitalist.com/ranked-the-worlds-largest-lithium-producers-in-2023/ Student: Kruttika Milind Soni (21f1001029) Strengths
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Name: Bhumika Taneja It Fell From the SkySource: https://www.behance.net/gallery/95352539/It-Fell-from-the-Sky This visualisation by Luiz Amorim depicts information about meteorite impacts. It uses a combination of elements like a world map, timeline, and text descriptions to showcase this data. What works
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Name - Iqbal Hossain Short Critique Pros: Comprehensive Data Presentation:
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Source Attribution: The presence of the World Bank Group logo adds credibility and assures viewers of the authenticity of the data. Cons: Data Density: The infographic is packed with information, which can be overwhelming for viewers. Breaking it into smaller sections might improve readability. Lack of Interactivity: The static nature of the infographic limits user engagement and the ability to explore the data in depth. Overuse of Percentages:
Limited Geographic Detail:
What Could Be Better: Interactive Elements:
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Additional Context: Brief explanations or context for each statistic would help viewers grasp the real-world implications of the data. For instance, elaborating on what a 6.2% agricultural loss entails in practical terms. Consistent Scaling: Ensuring consistent scaling and clear legends for all visual elements can help prevent misinterpretation and enhance overall clarity. |
Name: Pranam P. Pagi The Top 50 Most Visited Websites in the World (2022)URL: https://www.visualcapitalist.com/top-50-most-visited-websites/ Effectiveness:The visualization effectively communicates the dominance and relative traffic volumes of the world's top 50 websites. It uses a circular layout with bubble sizes proportional to the amount of traffic each site receives, making it visually impactful and easy to grasp the overall landscape of internet usage. What Works Well:
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Conclusion:Overall, this visualization is effective in showcasing the dominance of the top 50 websites, but it could be improved with better handling of small-scale data, and an optimized colour scheme for better readability and accessibility. |
Name - Sajal Dhingra Source - https://i.redd.it/1yhc7a4w26881.png Global Hunger Index in 2018Aim and Effectiveness The map aims to show world hunger levels by country in 2018. It uses color coding to represent different levels of hunger severity, ranging from “very low” (in green) to “extremely alarming” (in dark red). This is a fairly effective way to communicate the information, as color coding is a well-recognized way to represent data. Strengths
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Conclusion Overall, the map is a reasonably effective way to show global hunger levels at a glance. However, it could be improved by including more data visualization techniques. |
Shelley R > Title: The World’s Oldest and Youngest Countries, by Median AgeArticle Url: https://www.visualcapitalist.com/the-worlds-oldest-and-youngest-countries-median-age/ Introduction: The Median age is a single indicator of the age distribution of a population- where half the population is older and half is younger than the listed age. It can help government and private companies plan for age-specific demand for goods and services from the resident population. World median age is 31 years and India's age is 30 years. What Works:
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Name : Dheeraj S Title: Switching behaviour between phone brands of the dutch - 2014 EditionSource : https://www.visualcinnamon.com/2014/12/using-data-storytelling-with-chord/ EffectivenessThe visualisation depicts the relationship between cell phone service providers in NewZealand as to which company the consumer switches to while buying a new phone. It was done by data visualisation designer Nadieh Bremer based on Deloitte Survey Data. What Works Well
What Doesn't Work Or Could Be Better
ConclusionThis is one of the most Efficient and Effective Visualisations as it is almost perfect and communicates the phone behaviour pattern of the dutch people.It is very user-friendly and intuitive It was rightfully chosen for the shortlist of the Data Journalism category in the 2015 Kantar Information is Beautiful Awards. |
Title : The World’s Best Restaurants in 2024Name: Nikita Sharma Source : Link to Article Introduction: This visualization effectively presents the top ten restaurants in the world for 2024, as ranked by William Reed’s Best 50 annual list. The map and accompanying list provide a clear and concise overview of the locations and rankings of these restaurants. What Works Well:
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Name: Arvind Gunasekaran 50 Years of Video Game Industry Revenues, by PlatformInfographic Link: https://www.visualcapitalist.com/video-game-industry-revenues-by-platform/ Brief: How effective is it at what it aims to do? What works well?
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TITLE : Small states can be significant players in development and good governance.Effectiveness : What Works Well
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Name: Subhashree M Projected 2023 global GDPAim of the Visualization:The primary goal of this visualization is to represent the projected 2023 global GDP (Gross Domestic Product) by visualizing the relative sizes of different economies. Using a circular chart, it aims to provide an overview of economic power distribution among countries and facilitate comparisons. Effectiveness and What Works Well:
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Overall scope for improvement:Refinements in color choices, label placement, and clarity would enhance effectiveness, While including more detailed contextual information and ensuring proportional representation would make the visualization more informative and accurate. source: https://www.visualcapitalist.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/08/world-economy-2023-full-size.html |
Top 10 Largest Nuclear ExplosionsName: Arshpreet Kaur Dhanjal The visualization aims to depict the ten largest nuclear explosions in history, focusing on the height of the explosion's "mushroom cloud," the yield in kilotons (kt) of TNT, the date and location of the tests, and the countries responsible. The graphic succeeds in providing a clear and impactful representation of this information, enabling viewers to understand the scale and historical context of these nuclear events. What works well?
What doesn't works well and Potential Improvements.
ConclusionThe visualization effectively communicates the scale and historical context of the ten largest nuclear explosions through clear and impactful graphics. The use of mushroom cloud imagery, chronological ordering, and scale comparisons with Mount Everest and the stratosphere add significant value. However, improvements can be made in text readability, utilization of empty space, consistency in bar height proportions, and the color scheme. Addressing these areas would enhance the clarity and overall effectiveness of the visualization, making it more accessible and informative for a broader audience. |
Name: Pradeeshwar A Strengths:Visual Appeal:
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Weaknesses:Complexity:
Accessibility: Recommendations:Simplify the Design:
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By: Vamsi Krishna NK Visual StrengthsEngaging Format:
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Visual WeaknessesComplex Presentation:
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Name: Abel GeorgeRoll Number: 21f2000265Apple’s iPhone 2013 event featured a few very impressive-looking charts such as the dramatic increase in processor and graphics performance between the very first iPhone in 2007 and the iPhone 5s, but a far more controversial chart displayed “cumulative iPhone sales” since 2007 shown above. My Analysis
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Name - Harsh Y Mehta TITLE: India - Consumption CritiqueConsumer Stack (Classification of Indian Consumers) INDIA 1
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The division of Indian consumer gives a good idea about there consumption pattern and contribution to the economy. It also helps the companies/ startup to understand their target audience better. It gives great insights like
Recommendations
ConclusionA really helpful report, cutting all the noise around the economy and helps evaluate the real numbers. The report effectively conveyed valuable and not so obvious truths. |
Name: Tallam Visist Mineral Analysis This composition explains the natural sweetness, viscosity, and nutritional content of honey, highlighting that it is primarily composed of sugars, with a significant water content and small amounts of other substances. Pro's Cons: Lack of Title and Source: The chart lacks a title and a reference to the data source. Including these elements would enhance the credibility and context of the information. |
Name: Sujasha Image Source: https://informationisbeautiful.net/visualizations/methane-or-natural-gas-the-other-major-greenhouse-gas/ This graphic provides a clear categorization of the main human activities and natural processes that release methane into the atmosphere. It offers a helpful starting point for understanding the major contributors to atmospheric methane levels. Pro's:
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Name: Varun Balaji Article Link: https://www.nytimes.com/athletic/5566290/2024/06/15/toni-kroos-germany-scotland-euro-2024/ Title: Where Toni Kroos made his passes vs. Scotland | UEFA European Championship, 2024 Effectiveness: What works well:
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Name: Fashmina Mohamed PROS: CONS: WAYS TO IMPROVE: |
Name: SOORYAKIRAN B The Most popular AI tools of 2023Artificial intelligence had its breakout year in 2023, with large language models (LLMs) and text-to-image generators capturing the attention and imagination of technologists and investors alike. Similar to other recent breakthrough technologies like the internet and the smartphone, the early stage of AI’s tech adoption cycle has already seen the creation of highly-used software products. ChatGPT dominated the industry’s web visits with more than 60% of visits from September 2022 to August 2023, building up 14.6 billion visits to their website. About the VisualizationThe visualization effectively conveys the popularity of various AI tools in 2023 by displaying the number of visits each tool received. It aims to highlight the dominance of specific AI products. ProsVisual Clarity and Appeal: The use of different colors and sizes for the circles representing each AI tool is visually appealing and makes it easy to distinguish between them. The large size of the ChatGPT circle immediately communicates its dominance in the field. Contextual Information: Including a timeline of tech adoption cycles for the internet, smartphones, and AI helps place the rise of AI tools in historical context, which enriches the reader’s understanding of AI's impact and the growth of AI in industry perspective. It shows when the tech companies started working on AI and was aware of its powers and effectiveness. Comprehensive Data: The infographic provides specific visit numbers and percentages, giving readers a clear quantitative understanding of each tool’s popularity. This allows for an immediate comparison between different AI tools, showing how dominant ChatGPT is with its 14.6 billion visits, accounting for 60.2% of the industry total. The exact figures for each tool, such as Character.AI’s 3.8 billion visits and Midjourney’s 500.4 million visits, help highlight not only the leading players but also the relative scale of their user engagement. Additionally, by including smaller players like Civitai with 177.2 million visits, the visualization paints a comprehensive picture of the AI landscape, acknowledging the contributions of lesser-known tools. ConsLack of Detailed Source Information : While it mentions data sources (Writerbuddy and Coatue), it doesn’t provide detailed methodologies or additional context on how the visit numbers were collected, which could raise questions about data reliability. Without knowing the data collection methods or the timeframe considered, readers might question the accuracy and comprehensiveness of the information presented. Text Density: The lower section of the infographic, especially the tech adoption cycles chart, is dense with information and might be overwhelming for some readers. Simplifying or breaking this into multiple visuals could improve readability. Overemphasis on main contributors: The graphic heavily focuses on ChatGPT and Character.AI, with much smaller representations for other tools. This might overshadow the contributions and popularity of smaller yet significant AI tools. The disproportionate sizes could lead to a skewed perception, making it seem like only the top two tools matter, while the variety and innovation present in the AI industry are underrepresented. What can be done to improve?Interactive Elements: For an online version, adding interactive elements like tooltips with additional information about each AI tool could enhance user engagement and provide deeper insights without overcrowding the visual space. Highlighting Lesser-Known Tools: Providing more balanced representation by highlighting some unique features or niche use cases of the lesser-known tools could give a fuller picture of the AI landscape. Simplicity in Data Presentation: Simplifying the tech adoption cycles graph or splitting it into separate, clearer sections might make it easier to digest, especially for readers less familiar with such data. Overall the visualization completes its task of representing the top used AI tools of 2023 and it also includes AI tools of different niches which is useful for understanding diversity of AI tools and the innovative areas where the people use AI tools. There can be some improvements done in order to convey the objective more clearly and also to reach more viewers. |
Name: Ashrith Reddy A Note: My Analysis is on the overall Information Given visually in the above link This outlines four major trends transforming the Film & TV industry, including the rise of new streaming platforms, a surge in content spending, increased investment in indie content, and escalating TV series budgets. To Describe the Pros and Cons in terms of the given representations and Information over there.
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To evaluate the effectiveness of the information, we need to consider several factors, including the clarity of the message, the relevance of the data, the depth of analysis, and the potential impact on the audience. Here's a detailed report on these aspects:
In conclusion, the Over Information provides a useful overview of the Film & TV industry's emerging trends, which is valuable for gaining a broad understanding of the sector's transformation. However, it could be more effective with deeper analysis, critical discussion, and the inclusion of the promised visual representations to support the data presented. |
Name - Jigyasa Title - Top 10 most valuable global brands of 2024 What works well? Percentage Changes: Showing the percentage change in brand value next to each brand adds context regarding growth or decline. Visual Simplicity: The use of left-to-right layout makes it easy to follow the rankings and comprehend the differences in brand value. What doesn't work well? Comparative Growth: How these brands compare to the rest of the top 100 or other significant brands not in the top 10 is not visible, limiting a broader understanding of the market landscape. Ways to improve |
For the graded assignment 1, find a simple, stand-alone, static visualization and write a short critique on: How effective is it at what it aims to do? What works well and what doesn't? What could be better? (See Week 1, Part 7 lecture video for a briefing of the assignment)
Make your submission as a comment. It should contain:
Here are samples (sample 1,sample 2, Sample 3) of how this is to be submitted. Use examples that are not used in the samples.
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