From 867fa4747404b623f7e41191ef085f754383af6b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 18 Sep 2023 16:18:43 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 01/86] Update index.md

add Ceremony
---
 Spells/1/Warding/index.md | 23 +++++++++++++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Spells/1/Warding/index.md b/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
index 804bdb551..66b95fc57 100644
--- a/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
+++ b/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
@@ -58,6 +58,29 @@ You are immune to the [Prone](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/
 
 When this spell is cast, you gain resistance to physical damage for the duration. If you are hit by a weapon attack while this spell is active, you gain a retribution charge, wbhich you can choose to spend before the spell ends to deal an additional 2d12 energy damage when you hit with a weapon attack. Once you expend the charge, the spell ends.
 
+## Ceremony
+*1st Level Warding (Ritual)*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 1 Hour<br>
+**Range:** Touch<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(Powdered silver worth 25 gp, which is consumed.)*<br>
+**Duration:** Instantaneous
+
+*You perform a special religious ceremony that is infused with magic.*
+
+When you cast the spell, choose one of the following rites, the target of which must be within 10 feet of you throughout the casting.
+
+**Atonement.** You touch one willing creature whose alignment has changed, and you make a DC 20 spellcasting ability check. On a successful check, you restore the target to its original alignment.
+
+**Bless Water.** You touch one vial of water and cause it to become holy water.
+
+**Coming of Age.** You touch one humanoid who is a young adult. For the next 24 hours, whenever the target makes an ability check, it can roll a d4 and add the number rolled to the ability check. A creature can benefit from this rite only once.
+
+**Dedication.** You touch one humanoid who wishes to be dedicated to your god’s service. For the next 24 hours, whenever the target makes a defence check, it can roll a d4 and add the number rolled to the save. A creature can benefit from this rite only once.
+
+**Funeral Rite.** You touch one corpse, and for the next 7 days, the target can’t become undead by any means short of a wish spell.
+
+**Wedding.** You touch adult humanoids willing to be bonded together in marriage. For the next 7 days, each target gains a +2 bonus to Strength and Dexterity defence vs melee and ranged attacks while they are within 30 feet of each other. A creature can benefit from this rite again only if widowed.
+
 ## Mage Armour
 *1st Level Warding (Ritual)*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>

From ed52727c0d024d3e71969af30e221a89c8fc4635 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 18 Sep 2023 22:42:20 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 02/86] revise To this Point, Bring the East

---
 Spells/2/Charms/index.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Charms/index.md b/Spells/2/Charms/index.md
index 6050f034b..e283f6f2e 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Charms/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Charms/index.md
@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A stone stele.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Take a stone stele and affix it into a point of your choosing when you cast this spell. The next creature that attacks you within 100 foot of this stele must succeed at a Charisma defence check or be drawn to destroy it instead.
+Take a stone stele and affix it into a point of your choosing when you cast this spell. The stele has 10 integrity and DR 6. The spell ends when the stele reduced to zero integrity or until dispelled. 
 
-The stele has 10 integrity and DR 8. The spell ends when it breaks.
+A creature that attempts to make an attack against you within 30 feet of the stele must first make a Charisma defence check vs your charms spell skill. On a success, the spell has no effect on the creature. On a failure, the creature must spend at least 1 action to Strike the stele as it is drawn to destroy it. 
 
-At the end of each of its turns, a creature affected by this spell can make another Charisma defence check. On a success, the spell ends on the target.
+At the end of each of its turns, a creature affected by this spell can make another Charisma defence check. 
 
 **At Higher Levels:** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 3rd level or higher, the integrity of the stele increases by 10 and the DR of the stele increases by 2 for each slot level above 2nd.

From e0bd6b453febe06204dab48fd13e81aa3a03107f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 18 Sep 2023 23:03:15 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 03/86] revise Attonement

---
 Spells/1/Warding/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/1/Warding/index.md b/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
index 66b95fc57..ee9ad1d9d 100644
--- a/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
+++ b/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ When this spell is cast, you gain resistance to physical damage for the duration
 
 When you cast the spell, choose one of the following rites, the target of which must be within 10 feet of you throughout the casting.
 
-**Atonement.** You touch one willing creature whose alignment has changed, and you make a DC 20 spellcasting ability check. On a successful check, you restore the target to its original alignment.
+**Atonement.** You touch one willing creature who has broken an oath or breached their diety's principals. Make a spellcasting ability check vs DC 20. On a successful check, the target is absolved of its transgressions. A creature can benefit from this rite once every 7 days.
 
 **Bless Water.** You touch one vial of water and cause it to become holy water.
 

From 61a88e8fd671157fd37074284ac4f770ecb856f2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2023 08:26:40 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 04/86] revise Beget Nest of Crowns

---
 Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md | 12 +++++++++---
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
index 90c8508b3..196008e76 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -9,11 +9,17 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 ## Beget the Nest of Crowns
 *2nd level Conjuration*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Self (600-foot radius)<br>
+**Range:** Self (120-foot radius)<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A crown of twigs and feathers.)*<br>
-**Duration:** Instantaneous
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
 
-Affix upon your brow a crown of twigs and feathers as a part of casting this spell. Birds without number will then cloud the heavens above and descend. All within 600 feet is considered obscured, ranged missiles will not hit their marks, no one can move more than 10 feet per round, and all sound is drowned by their chirping. These birds swarm until somehow killed en masse or dispelled. This spell is useless indoors.
+*Birds without number cloud the skies and descend.*
+
+Affix upon your brow a crown of twigs and feathers. A large flock of birds is summoned that swarm an area in a 120-foot radius of you. The area within the flock is considered heavily obscured and difficult terrain. All creatures inside the flock is considered [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) as sound is drowned by their chirping. 
+
+These birds swarm until somehow killed en masse, dispelled, or the crown is removed from your head. 
+
+This spell cannot be used indoors.
 
 ## Move the Warlord's Statue
 *2nd level Conjuration (Ritual)*<br>

From f33a503bafa283f894c1a42d1c43c7b021039c37 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2023 08:37:58 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 05/86] revise range

Beget the Nest of Crowns
120 ft to 300 ft
---
 Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
index 196008e76..7aff7ef32 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -9,13 +9,13 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 ## Beget the Nest of Crowns
 *2nd level Conjuration*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Self (120-foot radius)<br>
+**Range:** Self (300-foot radius)<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A crown of twigs and feathers.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
 
 *Birds without number cloud the skies and descend.*
 
-Affix upon your brow a crown of twigs and feathers. A large flock of birds is summoned that swarm an area in a 120-foot radius of you. The area within the flock is considered heavily obscured and difficult terrain. All creatures inside the flock is considered [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) as sound is drowned by their chirping. 
+Affix upon your brow a crown of twigs and feathers. A large flock of birds is summoned that swarm an area in a 300-foot radius of you. The area within the flock is considered heavily obscured and difficult terrain. All creatures inside the flock is considered [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) as sound is drowned by their chirping. 
 
 These birds swarm until somehow killed en masse, dispelled, or the crown is removed from your head. 
 

From 09dd0374666a20c910dc3e46e920d69a84294581 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2023 08:43:18 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 06/86] phrasing

Beget the Nest of Crowns
---
 Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
index 7aff7ef32..f2d4d257f 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 *Birds without number cloud the skies and descend.*
 
-Affix upon your brow a crown of twigs and feathers. A large flock of birds is summoned that swarm an area in a 300-foot radius of you. The area within the flock is considered heavily obscured and difficult terrain. All creatures inside the flock is considered [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) as sound is drowned by their chirping. 
+Affix upon your brow a crown of twigs and feathers. A large flock of birds is summoned that swarm an area centered on you in a 300-foot radius. The area within the flock is considered heavily obscured and difficult terrain. All creatures inside the flock is considered [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) as sound is drowned by their chirping. 
 
 These birds swarm until somehow killed en masse, dispelled, or the crown is removed from your head. 
 

From 7f941978c310ab49b338ceaf11c3e1f5da884374 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2023 08:49:30 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 07/86] phrasing, duration

Beget the Nest of Crowns
---
 Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
index f2d4d257f..a276c4535 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
 **Range:** Self (300-foot radius)<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A crown of twigs and feathers.)*<br>
-**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
+**Duration:** 8 hours
 
 *Birds without number cloud the skies and descend.*
 
-Affix upon your brow a crown of twigs and feathers. A large flock of birds is summoned that swarm an area centered on you in a 300-foot radius. The area within the flock is considered heavily obscured and difficult terrain. All creatures inside the flock is considered [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) as sound is drowned by their chirping. 
+Affix upon your brow a crown of twigs and feathers. A large flock of birds is summoned that swarm an area centered on you in a 300-foot radius. The area within the flock is considered heavily obscured and difficult terrain. All creatures inside the flock are considered [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) as sound is drowned by their chirping. 
 
 These birds swarm until somehow killed en masse, dispelled, or the crown is removed from your head. 
 
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ This spell cannot be used indoors.
 **Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M<br>
-**Duration:** 1 Hour (Concentration)
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
 
 A statue of animated stone constructs itself. It stands twice your height and is decorated and painted to mimic that of a famed warlord. It will follow in your footsteps for the spell's duration, or until you command it to take one of the following actions:
 * **Attack:** The statue makes a melee spell attack (using your attack bonus) against a target that it can reach with 30 feet of movement. On a hit, this attack deals 5d6 bludgeoning damage.

From 5b28b1cb7b2586927cec8a49ffab8855e2a1d6d3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2023 12:15:13 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 08/86] revise Move the Warlords Statue

---
 Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
index a276c4535..c657635ac 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A crown of twigs and feathers.)*<br>
 **Duration:** 8 hours
 
-*Birds without number cloud the skies and descend.*
+*Birds without number cloud the skies and cover your movements.*
 
 Affix upon your brow a crown of twigs and feathers. A large flock of birds is summoned that swarm an area centered on you in a 300-foot radius. The area within the flock is considered heavily obscured and difficult terrain. All creatures inside the flock are considered [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) as sound is drowned by their chirping. 
 
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@ This spell cannot be used indoors.
 **Components:** V, S, M<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
 
-A statue of animated stone constructs itself. It stands twice your height and is decorated and painted to mimic that of a famed warlord. It will follow in your footsteps for the spell's duration, or until you command it to take one of the following actions:
-* **Attack:** The statue makes a melee spell attack (using your attack bonus) against a target that it can reach with 30 feet of movement. On a hit, this attack deals 5d6 bludgeoning damage.
-* **Defend:** The statue absorbs the damage from the next melee or ranged attack that hits you.
-* **Lift:** The status will lift one thing weighing 200 lbs. or less.
+A statue of animated stone constructs itself. It stands twice your height and is decorated and painted to mimic that of a famed warlord. It will follow in your footsteps for the spell's duration, or until you use 1 action to command it to take one of the following actions:
+* **Attack:** The statue moves up to 30 feet and makes a melee against a target that it can reach with its movement. Make a melee conjuration attack against the target. On a hit, this attack deals 5d6 bludgeoning damage.
+* **Defend:** The statue interposes itself between you and your enemies. This counts as using the [Raise Shield](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Combat/Melee/Raise/) action, giving you a +3 shield bonus vs melee and ranged attacks until the start of your next turn.
+* **Lift:** The status will lift one thing weighing 500 lbs. or less and move it up to 30 feet.
 
 After any of these acts, the statue will turn into mud and disintegrate.

From bd7fe7cf011b197f9d5669d4febacf205e205164 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2023 12:17:30 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 09/86] phrasing

Move the Warlord's Statue
---
 Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
index c657635ac..abd067882 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ This spell cannot be used indoors.
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
 
 A statue of animated stone constructs itself. It stands twice your height and is decorated and painted to mimic that of a famed warlord. It will follow in your footsteps for the spell's duration, or until you use 1 action to command it to take one of the following actions:
-* **Attack:** The statue moves up to 30 feet and makes a melee against a target that it can reach with its movement. Make a melee conjuration attack against the target. On a hit, this attack deals 5d6 bludgeoning damage.
+* **Attack:** The statue moves up to 30 feet to make a melee against a target. Make a melee conjuration attack against the target. On a hit, this attack deals 5d6 bludgeoning damage.
 * **Defend:** The statue interposes itself between you and your enemies. This counts as using the [Raise Shield](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Combat/Melee/Raise/) action, giving you a +3 shield bonus vs melee and ranged attacks until the start of your next turn.
 * **Lift:** The status will lift one thing weighing 500 lbs. or less and move it up to 30 feet.
 

From 8a95a33895e3eddc71216cfba7e207deb0f5e7fa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2023 12:34:39 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 10/86] phrasing

Move the Warlord's Statue
---
 Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
index abd067882..0d2041452 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ This spell cannot be used indoors.
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
 
 A statue of animated stone constructs itself. It stands twice your height and is decorated and painted to mimic that of a famed warlord. It will follow in your footsteps for the spell's duration, or until you use 1 action to command it to take one of the following actions:
-* **Attack:** The statue moves up to 30 feet to make a melee against a target. Make a melee conjuration attack against the target. On a hit, this attack deals 5d6 bludgeoning damage.
+* **Attack:** The statue charges to strike. Make a melee conjuration attack against the target that you can see within 30 feet of the statue. On a hit, this attack deals 5d6 bludgeoning damage.
 * **Defend:** The statue interposes itself between you and your enemies. This counts as using the [Raise Shield](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Combat/Melee/Raise/) action, giving you a +3 shield bonus vs melee and ranged attacks until the start of your next turn.
 * **Lift:** The status will lift one thing weighing 500 lbs. or less and move it up to 30 feet.
 

From f6962428678847ec218d1979eed96f57772b0dbc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2023 15:00:30 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 11/86] updated 2nd level evo

---
 Spells/2/Evocation/index.md | 40 ++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Evocation/index.md b/Spells/2/Evocation/index.md
index d586ee0ff..7654b9479 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Evocation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Evocation/index.md
@@ -8,27 +8,27 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Binding Ice
 *2nd Level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self (30-foot cone)<br>
 **Components:** S, M *(A vial of meltwater.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
  
-A burst of cold energy emanates from you in a 30-foot cone. Make an attack against each creature's Constitution defense in that area. On a hit, a creature takes 3d8 cold damage and is hindered by ice formations for 1 minute, or until it or another creature within reach of it uses an action to break away the ice. A creature hindered by ice has its speed reduced to 0. On a miss, a creature takes half as much damage and isn’t hindered by ice.
+A burst of cold energy emanates from you in a 30-foot cone. Make an evocation attack vs the Constitution defense of each creature in the area. On a hit, a creature takes 3d8 cold damage and is hindered by ice formations for 1 minute, or until it or another creature within reach of it uses an action to break away the ice. A creature hindered by ice has its speed reduced to 0. On a miss, a creature takes half as much damage and isn’t hindered by ice.
  
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 3rd level or higher, increase the cold damage by 1d8 for each slot level above 2nd.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 3 or more mana, the damage increases by 1d8 for each additional point of mana.
 
 ## Consecrate/Desecrate
 *2nd level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Touch<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M *(A vial of holy water and 25 gp worth of silver dust, all of which must be sprinkled around the area.)*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** Touch (20-foot radius)<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(A vial of holy water and 25 gp worth of silver dust, all of which must be sprinkled around the area and are consumed.)*<br>
 **Duration:** 8 Hours
 
-This spell blesses or curses an area. Channel divinity has advantage to hit creatures within this area.
+This spell blesses or curses an area in a 20-foot radius sphere centered on a point which you touch. Choose one of the following effects when you cast the spell: 
 
-Undead cannot be created within or summoned into a consecrated area. If the consecrated area contains an altar, shrine, or other permanent fixture dedicated to your deity, pantheon, or aligned higher power, undead creatures within the area suffer disadvantage on attack rolls and other creatures have advantage to hit them.
+**Consecrate.** Undead cannot be created within or summoned into the area. If the consecrated area contains an altar, shrine, or other permanent fixture dedicated to your deity, pantheon, or aligned higher power, undead creatures within the area suffer -1d on attack rolls and other creatures gain +1d on attack rolls to hit them.
 
-An undead creature created within or summoned into a desecrated area gains +1 hit point per HD. If the desecrated area contains an altar, shrine, or other permanent fixture dedicated to your deity or aligned higher power, undead creatures within the area gain advantage on attack rolls and other creatures have disadvantage to hit them.
+**Desecrate.** Undead creatures created within or summoned into the area gain stamina equal to your spellcasting ability modifier. If the desecrated area contains an altar, shrine, or other permanent fixture dedicated to your deity or aligned higher power, undead creatures within the area gain +1d on attack rolls and other creatures suffer -1d to hit them.
 
 You cannot consecrate/desecrate an area with a similar fixture of a deity other than your own patron. Instead, the spell curses the area, cutting off its connection with the associated deity or power. This secondary function, if used, does not also grant the bonuses and penalties relating to undead, as given above.
 
@@ -53,38 +53,38 @@ If the target being pushed would be moved into a creature of its own size or sma
 
 ## Gust of Wind
 *2nd level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A legume seed.)*<br>
-**Duration:** 1 Minute (Concentration)
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-For the spell's duration, a line of strong wind 60 feet long and 10 feet wide blasts from the spellcaster in a direction of their choice.
+For the spell's duration, a line of strong wind 60 feet long and 10 feet wide blasts from you in a direction of your choice.
 
 When the spell is cast, the spellcaster may choose one of two possible effects:
 1. Each creature hit by the spell is pushed 15 feet away from the spellcaster in a direction following the line.
 2. Each creature hit by the spell is pushed 10 feet away from the spellcaster in a direction following the line and falls prone after being moved in this way.
 
-When the spell is first case, the spellcaster makes a spell attack roll vs. the Strength defence of each creature in the line. Each creature hit is subject to the effects of the spell.
+When the spell is first cast, make an evocation spell attack roll vs the Strength defence of each creature in the line. Each creature hit is subject to the effects of the spell.
 
 Any creature in the line must spend 2 feet of movement for every 1 foot it moves when moving closer to the spellcaster.
 
 The gust disperses gas or vapor, and it extinguishes candles, torches, and similar unprotected flames in the area. It causes protected flames, such as those of lanterns, to dance wildly and has a 50 percent chance to extinguish them.
 
-As a bonus action on each of the spellcaster's turns before the spell ends, they may change the direction in which the line blasts from them.
+On each of your turns before the spell ends, you can use 1 action to change the direction in which the line blasts from them.
 
 ## Moonbeam
 *2nd level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** 120 feet (5-foot radius)<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(Several seeds of any moonseed plant and a piece of opalescent feldspar.)*<br>
-**Duration:** 1 Minute (Concentration)
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
 A silvery beam of pale light shines down in a 5-foot-radius, 40-foot-high cylinder centered on a point within range. Until the spell ends, dim light fills the cylinder.
 
-When the spell is first cast and at the end of each of your turns for the spell's duration, any creature within the spell's area is engulfed in ghostly flames that cause searing pain. Make a spell attack vs the creature's Constitution defence. On a hit, it takes 2d10 radiant damage, or half as much damage on a miss. Additionally, any creature that enters the spell's area for the first time on a turn must also make a Constitution defence check. It takes 2d10 radiant damage on a failed check, or half as much damage on a successful one.
+When the spell is first cast and at the end of each of your turns for the spell's duration, any creature within the spell's area is engulfed in ghostly flames that cause searing pain. Make a evocation spell attack vs the Constitution defence for each creature inside the area. On a hit, it takes 2d10 sacred damage, or half as much damage on a miss. Additionally, any creature that enters the spell's area for the first time on a turn must also make a Constitution defence check vs your evocation spell skill. It takes 2d10 sacred damage on a failed check, or half as much damage on a successful one.
 
-The spell has advantage to hit shapechangers and they make their defence check with disadvantage. If one is hit or fails, it also instantly reverts to its original form and can't assume a different form until it leaves the spell's light.
+You gain +1d to hit shapechangers and they make their defence check with -1d. If one is hit or fails, it also instantly reverts to its original form and can't assume a different form until it leaves the spell's light.
 
-On each of your turns after you cast this spell, you can use an action to move the beam up to 60 feet in any direction.
+On each of your turns after you cast this spell, you can use 2 actions to move the beam up to 60 feet in any direction.
 
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 3rd level or higher, the damage increases by 1d10 for each slot level above 2nd.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 3 or more mana, the damage increases by 1d10 for each additional point of mana.

From 4cb24294706a180c5b65d7358ae8f99e20a92975 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 19 Sep 2023 16:22:58 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 12/86] revised Blind the Readers

---
 Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md | 14 +++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md
index d865fbf5b..ce56ef1ee 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -6,20 +6,24 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 # Necromancy
 
-## Blind the Readers of These Spells
+## Blind the Readers of This Tome
 *2nd level Necromancy (Ritual)*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(Incense and a book.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Until dispelled or triggered
 
-Light incense upon a book when you cast this spell. When someone attempts to decipher the contents of the book, or attempts to cast a spell that lets them do so, they will be blinded for 1d6 days time. Even a creature with no training in magic trying to read the book will fall victim to this spell. After one creature is cursed in this manner, the spellbook is no longer protected.
+Light incense upon a book when you cast this spell. When a creature attempts to read the contents of the book, or attempts to cast a spell that lets them do so, it must make a Constituion defence check vs your necromancy spell skill. On a failure, they will be blinded for 1d6 days time. 
+
+After one creature is cursed in this manner, the book is no longer protected.
 
 ## Keep Dead the Dead
-*2nd level Necromancy (Ritual)*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
+*2nd level Necromancy*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 actionse<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(The blood of a wounded creature.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Gather the blood of a wounded creature and imbibe it when you cast this spell. The creature cannot ever be brought back from the dead, as its body will turn to sour soil upon death, unfit for the hosting of a soul.
+*You curse the blood of a body so that it cannot be reaised.*
+
+[work in progress]

From 51442b496626ec6aaad9e36b144e816c82f3a198 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 08:56:58 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 13/86] remove Keep Dead from necro

---
 Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md | 11 -----------
 1 file changed, 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md
index ce56ef1ee..1373850eb 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -16,14 +16,3 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 Light incense upon a book when you cast this spell. When a creature attempts to read the contents of the book, or attempts to cast a spell that lets them do so, it must make a Constituion defence check vs your necromancy spell skill. On a failure, they will be blinded for 1d6 days time. 
 
 After one creature is cursed in this manner, the book is no longer protected.
-
-## Keep Dead the Dead
-*2nd level Necromancy*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 2 actionse<br>
-**Range:** Touch<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M *(The blood of a wounded creature.)*<br>
-**Duration:** Instantaneous
-
-*You curse the blood of a body so that it cannot be reaised.*
-
-[work in progress]

From fdb004b60334e6600683fa0900f21aaa5a2cf899 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 08:57:39 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 14/86] revised Keep Dead the Dead

revised and move to wards from necro
---
 Spells/2/index.md | 11 +++++++++++
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Spells/2/index.md b/Spells/2/index.md
index 6d2f0b9db..5617ea4a8 100644
--- a/Spells/2/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/index.md
@@ -6,3 +6,14 @@ nav_order: 4
 ---
 
 # Level 2
+
+## Keep Dead the Dead
+*2nd level Warding (Ritual)*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 1 mintue<br>
+**Range:** Touch<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(Salt and strips of linen.)*<br>
+**Duration:** Instantaneous
+
+*You prepare a body making it dificult to return to the living.*
+
+You touch the body of a deceased creature. If, within the next 10 days, a spell is cast upon it to return it to life, the reviving caster must first succeed on a restoration spell check vs your necromancy spell skill for the creature to return to life. 

From b799c088e7413a0c796986e4c70126a631b29e16 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 09:00:02 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 15/86] revise casting time

---
 Spells/2/Restoration/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Restoration/index.md b/Spells/2/Restoration/index.md
index eefcc840f..7ce3288c8 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Restoration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Restoration/index.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Lesser Restoration
 *2nd level Restoration*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous

From 11ae2ed4f377dbcd8dbb592e770055feefa11d81 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 10:04:26 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 16/86] update L2 transmutation spells

---
 Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md | 36 ++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md
index 3752c8cb2..76d7ba92d 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -8,60 +8,60 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Barkskin
 *2nd level Transmutation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A handful of oak bark.)*<br>
-**Duration:** 1 Hour (Concentration)
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
 
 You touch a willing creature. Until the spell ends, the target's skin has a rough, bark-like appearance and they gain DR 8 and coverage 1-2, 8-16. The effects of *barkskin* do not stack with worn armour.
 
 ## Disfiguring Touch
 *2nd level Transmutation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** 3 Days
 
-Make a spell attack vs a creature's Wisdom defence. On a hit, the creature becomes cursed for the duration of the spell. The victim of this spell grows hideously disfigured. The physical appearance of the deformity is subject to the caster’s whim (most demon worshipers choose deformities that reflect their Abyssal patron’s shape or form).
+Make a transmutation spell attack vs a creature's Wisdom defence. On a hit, the creature becomes cursed for the duration of the spell. The victim of this spell grows hideously disfigured. The physical appearance of the deformity is subject to the caster’s whim (most demon worshipers choose deformities that reflect their Abyssal patron’s shape or form).
 
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 3rd level or higher, the spell's duration increases by 2 days for each slot level above 2nd.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a 3 or more mana, the spell's duration increases by 2 days for each additional mana.
 
 ## Dusk that Settles On Mud
 *2nd level Transmutation (Ritual)*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Touch<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** Touch (10-foot cube)<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(The dust of a black ore.)*<br>
-**Duration:** 1 Round
+**Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Sprinkle the dust of a black ore onto clay, mud, soil, brick, limestone, or any other earthen substance. It will turn into constricting, hard, black metal and shrink slowly in size. A 10 foot cube of earth can be enchanted in this way. After 1 round, it will have shrunken down to the size of a pebble.
+Sprinkle the dust of a black ore onto clay, mud, soil, brick, limestone, or any other earthen substance. It will turn into constricting, hard, black metal and shrink in size. Up to a 10-foot cube of earth can be enchanted in this way. At the beginning of your next turn, it will have shrunken down to the size of a pebble.
 
 ## Enlarge/Reduce
 *2nd level Transmutation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** 30 ft<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A pinch of powdered iron.)*<br>
 **Duration:** 1 Minute (Concentration)
 
-You cause a creature or an object you can see within range to grow larger or smaller for the duration. Choose either a creature or an object that is neither worn nor carried. If the target is unwilling, make a spell attack vs its Constitution defence. On a miss, the spell has no effect. If the target is a creature, everything it is wearing and carrying changes size with it. Any item dropped by an affected creature returns to normal size at once.
+You cause a creature or an object you can see within range to grow larger or smaller for the duration. Choose either a creature or an object that is neither worn nor carried. If the target is unwilling, make a transmutation spell attack vs the Constitution defence of the target. On a miss, the spell has no effect. If the target is a creature, everything it is wearing and carrying changes size with it. Any item dropped by an affected creature returns to normal size at once.
 
-**Enlarge.** The target's size doubles in all dimensions, and its weight is multiplied by eight. This growth increases its size by one category. If there isn't enough room for the target to double its size, the creature or object attains the maximum possible size in the space available. Until the spell ends, the target also has advantage on Strength checks, attacks vs its Strength defence suffer disadvantage, and its walking speed increases by 5 feet. The target's weapons also grow to match its new size and deal 1d4 extra damage.
+**Enlarge.** The target's size doubles in all dimensions, and its weight is multiplied by eight. This growth increases its size by one category. If there isn't enough room for the target to double its size, the creature or object attains the maximum possible size in the space available. Until the spell ends, the target also has +1d on Strength checks, indirect attacks vs its Strength defence suffer -1d, and its walking speed increases by 5 feet. The target's weapons also grow to match its new size and deal 1d4 extra damage.
 
-**Reduce.** The target's size is halved in all dimensions, and its weight is reduced to one-eighth of normal. This reduction decreases its size by one category. Until the spell ends, the target also has disadvantage on Strength checks, attacks vs its Strength defence benefit from advantage, and its walking speed decreases by 5 feet. The target's weapons also shrink to match its new size and deal 1d4 less damage (this can't reduce the damage below 1).
+**Reduce.** The target's size is halved in all dimensions, and its weight is reduced to one-eighth of normal. This reduction decreases its size by one category. Until the spell ends, the target also has -1d on Strength checks, indirect attacks vs its Strength defence gain +1d, and its walking speed decreases by 5 feet. The target's weapons also shrink to match its new size and deal 1d4 less damage (this can't reduce the damage below 1).
 
 ## Paper Wings
 *2nd Level Transmutation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M (A sheet of paper.)<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 10 minutes
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 10 mintues
 
-You touch a willing creature while begging them to fly halfway around the world. The target gains a flying speed of 45 feet for the duration. This spell ends early if the target takes fire or radiant damage. When the spell ends, the target comes spiraling down, landing in a random location within a horizontal radius equal to their altitude when the spell ended.
+You touch a willing creature while begging them to fly halfway around the world. The target gains a flying speed of 30 feet for the duration. This spell ends early if the target takes fire or radiant damage. When the spell ends, the target comes spiraling down, landing in a random location within a horizontal radius equal to their altitude when the spell ended.
 
 ## Wood Shape
 *2nd level Transmutation (Ritual)*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(One piece of wood no larger than 25 cu. ft.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-*Wood shape* enables you to form one existing piece of wood into any shape that suits your purpose. While it is possible to make crude coffers, doors, and so forth, fine detail isn’t possible. There is a 30% chance that any shape that includes moving parts simply doesn't work.
+You form one existing piece of wood into any shape that suits your purpose. While it is possible to make crude coffers, doors, and so forth, fine detail isn’t possible. There is a 30% chance that any shape that includes moving parts simply doesn't work.

From b77727e26a12e6ef8e9e971f5f81a542cfc3054a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 14:39:29 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 17/86] revised

new spell. Keep Dead the Dead moved to 5th level
---
 Spells/2/index.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/index.md b/Spells/2/index.md
index 5617ea4a8..9bb47ee7f 100644
--- a/Spells/2/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/index.md
@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@ nav_order: 4
 
 # Level 2
 
-## Keep Dead the Dead
+## Let the Soul Pass
 *2nd level Warding (Ritual)*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 mintue<br>
+**Casting Time:** 3 actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M *(Salt and strips of linen.)*<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(Oils, salts and strips of linen worth 100gp which the spell consumes.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
 *You prepare a body making it dificult to return to the living.*
 
-You touch the body of a deceased creature. If, within the next 10 days, a spell is cast upon it to return it to life, the reviving caster must first succeed on a restoration spell check vs your necromancy spell skill for the creature to return to life. 
+You touch the body of a deceased creature, anointing it with the ceremonial oils and salts. If, within the next 10 days, a spell is cast upon it to return it to life, the reviving caster must first succeed on a restoration spell check vs your warding spell skill for the creature to return to life. 

From 23d42c4ff46c3c68521694bb304ab4da9ee7e9ea Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 14:43:03 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 18/86] add Keep Dead the Dead

moved from 2nd to 5th level
---
 Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md | 9 +++++++++
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md
index a432e9140..a6ecef436 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -15,6 +15,15 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 Take the body of a dead man and lay the corpse of an animal upon it. Only then may you cast this spell. The two bodies fuse in a way of your choosing. The new creature is risen as a chimera that will faithfully serve you. It has as many HD as you do, and has one aspect of the animal that it is fused with, such as an eagle's wings, a lion's claws, or a shark's water breath. If the chimera is ever exorcised, it dies instantly.
 
+## Keep Dead the Dead
+*5nd level Necromancy (Ritual)*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
+**Range:** Touch<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(The blood of a wounded creature.)*<br>
+**Duration:** Instantaneous
+
+Gather the blood of a dead creature and imbibe it when you cast this spell. The creature's soul cannot ever inhabit this body, as it will turn to sour soil upon death, unfit for the hosting of a soul.
+
 ## Raise Dead
 Raise Dead can be cast as a ritual.
 

From eeec7b93a48186132a17f49b4a1d9c3e372fa946 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 14:46:21 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 19/86] L3 charms, phrasing

---
 Spells/3/Charm/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Charm/index.md b/Spells/3/Charm/index.md
index c6ff545cc..670f22353 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Charm/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Charm/index.md
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ You address allies, staff, or innocent bystanders to exhort and inspire them to
 
 ## Psychic Spy
 *3rd Level Charm*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Special, see text.
 
-With this spell, you can try to steal the elation from the mind of one humanoid you can see within 60 feet. Make a spell attack roll vs the target's Charisma defence. On a hit, you can steal one beneficial effect that they currently possess, such as an ongoing spell (as long as its level is equal to or less than the slot level that psychic spy was cast from), temporary hit points, or possession of Bardic Inspiration dice. The effect ends for the target and transfers to you for the remainder of its normal duration. If the effect requires concentration, you must concentrate on it instead of the original caster.
+With this spell, you can try to steal the elation from the mind of one humanoid you can see within 60 feet. Make a spell charm attack roll vs the Charisma defence of the target. On a hit, you can steal one beneficial effect that they currently possess, such as an ongoing spell (as long as its level is equal to or less than the slot level that psychic spy was cast from), temporary hit points, or possession of Bardic Inspiration dice. The effect ends for the target and transfers to you for the remainder of its normal duration. If the effect is being sustained, you must sustain it instead of the original caster.

From 8e14193c485054882f80690f15d7bb7cbd0422c0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 14:56:19 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 20/86] L3 conj spells, phrasing

---
 Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md | 16 +++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md
index d497bf9fb..9302a68ce 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Create Food and Water
 *3rd level Conjuration (Ritual)*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** 30 feet<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
@@ -17,18 +17,20 @@ You create 45 pounds of food and 30 gallons of water on the ground or in contain
 
 ## Set Loose the Crocodiles
 *3rd level Conjuration*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-A moat 20 feet deep, 10 feet wide, and with a radius 30 feet away from you is suddenly carved into the earth and filled with water. If these dimensions cannot be met, then the moat tears through any non-magical obstructions to form itself. Inside of the moat, countless crocodiles. Creatures who attempt to swim or leap across must make a Strength (Athletics) check or take 1d6 damage as they are pulled in. Creatures in the moat cannot move, and take 3d6 damage every turn until they succeed at the Strength (Athletics) check and can swim out. 
+A moat 20 feet deep, 10 feet wide, and with a radius 30 feet away from you is suddenly carved into the earth and filled with water. If these dimensions cannot be met, then the moat tears through any non-magical obstructions to form itself. Inside of the moat, countless crocodiles. Creatures who attempt to swim or leap across must make a Athletics check or take 1d6 damage as they are pulled in. Creatures in the moat cannot move, and take 3d6 damage every turn until they succeed at the Athletics check and can swim out. 
 
 ## Transfigure Dust into Vermin
 *3rd level Conjuration*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Special<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** 30 feet<br>
 **Components:** S<br>
-**Duration:** Instantaneous
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to one minute
+
+Point to a creature within range. Unseen motes of dust that lie upon the creature are turned into lice, rats, and scorpions. The vermin swarm them, biting and gnawing, dealing 6d6 piercing damage.  This damage continues until the target brings fire to the vermin, or the spell is dispelled.
 
-Motes of dust are turned into lice, rats, and scorpions around you. Point to a creature. The vermin swarm them, biting and gnawing, dealing damage equal to your levels. At 6th level, this will be 6d6 damage, and at 7th, 7d6, and so on. This damage continues until the target brings fire to the vermin, or the spell is dispelled.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, the damage increases by 1d6 for each additional mana.

From 04d2f773d0a385b7f640939a1754e65bc9986c2b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 15:47:44 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 21/86] L3 evoc, phrasing

---
 Spells/3/Evocation/index.md | 22 ++++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md b/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md
index 538a77455..8049eb0c1 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md
@@ -8,20 +8,20 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Gather Forth All the World's Waves
 *3rd level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self (30-foot radius)<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** 1 Round
 
-Lift your hands and sing to all the seas you cannot sea. A 30 foot radius of space around you is filled with churning, crashing waves of white-crested green water. Creatures in the water begin [suffocating](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Adventuring/TheEnvironment/Suffocating/) and thus cannot speak or cast spells with verbal components, unless under an effect such as waterbreathing.
+Lift your hands and sing to all the seas you cannot sea. A 30 foot radius of space around you is filled with churning, crashing waves of white-crested green water. Creatures in the water begin [suffocating](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Adventuring/TheEnvironment/Suffocating/) and thus cannot speak or cast spells with verbal components, unless under an effect that allows them to breah in water.
 
-Make a spell attack roll vs the Strength defence of each creature in the area of the spell. On a hit, they take 3d8 bludgeoning damage and are picked up and deposited prone at a location of the spellcaster's choice within the area of the spell. On a miss, the creature takes half as much damage and remains unmoved. After 1 round, the waves dissipate, returning to their distant homes.
+Make an evocation spell attack roll vs the Strength defence of each creature in the area of the spell. On a hit, they take 3d8 bludgeoning damage and are picked up and deposited prone at a location of the spellcaster's choice within the area of the spell. On a miss, the creature takes half as much damage and remains unmoved. After 1 round, the waves dissipate, returning to their distant homes.
 
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 4th level or higher, the damage increases by 1d8 for each slot level above 3rd.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, the damage increases by 1d8 for each additional mana.
 
 ## Sending
 *3rd level Evocation (Ritual)*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Unlimited<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A short piece of fine copper wire.)*<br>
 **Duration:** 1 Round
@@ -32,9 +32,11 @@ You can send the message across any distance and even to other planes of existen
 
 ## Spreading of the Repelling Minerals
 *3rd level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Self<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M<br>
-**Duration:** 4 Rounds
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** Self (30-foot cube)<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(Small bits of minerals.)*<br>
+**Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Scatter minerals strange and esoteric as a part of this spell's casting. A 100 foot cube magical zone is created. Any and all metal objects are thrown out of it with haste, as are weapons made of stone or bone, over the next 4 rounds.
+You scatter minerals strange and esoteric as a part of this spell's casting. A 30-foot cube magical zone is created originating from you. All metal objects not held or worn are thrown out of it with haste, as are objects made of stone or bone. 
+
+Make an evocation spell atack vs the Strength defence of any creature within the area holding or wearing any such object. On a hit, any such held object is pulled out of their hands, landing in a space of your choice immediately outside of the area. Additionally, any creature wearing any such object is pushed 10 feet in a direction of your choice. On a miss, this spell has no effect on a creature.

From 0e964bec654b1bc42befb9f20015e2141b4eb246 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 15:54:25 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 22/86] L3 illusion, phrasing

---
 Spells/3/Illusion/index.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Illusion/index.md b/Spells/3/Illusion/index.md
index 418a233d6..127118913 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Illusion/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Illusion/index.md
@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Fear
 *3rd Level Illusion*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self (30-Foot Cone)<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A white feather or the heart of a hen.)*<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 1 minute
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-You project a phantasmal image of a creature’s worst fears. Make a spell attack roll vs the Wisdom defence of each creature in a 30-foot cone. On a hit, the creatures drop whatever they are holding and become frightened for the duration.
+You project a phantasmal image of a creature’s worst fears. Make an illusion spell attack roll vs the Wisdom defence of each creature in a 30-foot cone. On a hit, the creatures drop whatever they are holding and become [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) for the duration.
 
-While frightened by this spell, a creature must take the Dash action and move away from you by the safest available route on each of its turns, unless there is nowhere to move. If the creature ends its turn in a location where it doesn't have line of sight to you, the creature can make a Charisma defence check. On a successful save, the spell ends for that creature.
+While [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) by this spell, a creature must [Stride](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Combat/Moves/Stride/) and move away from you by the safest available route on each of its turns, unless there is nowhere to move. If the creature ends its turn in a location where it doesn't have line of sight to you, the creature can make a Wisdom defence check. On a successful check, the spell ends for that creature.

From f72bd6da74f8395cef15a63c744c5d4dbf9d314c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 16:08:14 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 23/86] L3 necro, phrasing

---
 Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md
index 9b3dc1f12..479b9d14d 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -11,6 +11,6 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
-**Duration:** 6 Rounds
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 10 minutes
 
-Work a short ceremony that loosens your soul from your body. It remains so for 6 rounds. While your soul is loosened, it can slip out of your body and move up to 2" away, sliding through walls or doors. You see and hear whatever is within the same area or space as your soul.
+Work a short ceremony that loosens your soul from your body. While your soul is loosened, it can slip out of your body and move up to 10 feet away, sliding through walls or doors. You see and hear whatever is within the same area or space as your soul.

From 34a8ab9564ee302ffa27358cdd03452367434046 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 16:10:59 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 24/86] L3 tans, phrasing

---
 Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md
index f7616ce3d..716d6751a 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 # Inflamed Feet
 *3rd Level Transmutation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Bonus Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
 **Components:** V,S<br>
-**Duration:** Up to 1 minute, Concentration
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
  
-Billowing flames grant you explosive speed. For the duration, your speed increases by 20 feet and moving doesn’t provoke opportunity attacks. When you move within 5 feet of a creature or an object that isn’t being worn or carried, it takes 1d6 fire damage from your trail of heat. A creature or object can take this damage only once during a turn.
+Billowing flames grant you explosive speed. For the duration, your speed increases by 10 feet and moving doesn’t provoke opportunity attacks. When you move within 5 feet of a creature or an object that isn’t being worn or carried, it takes 1d6 fire damage from your trail of heat. A creature or object can take this damage only once during a turn.
 
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 4th level or higher, increase your speed by 5 feet for each spell slot level above 3rd. The spell deals an additional 1d6 fire damage for each slot level above 3rd.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, your speed increases by 5 feet and the spell deals an additional 1d6 fire damage for each additional mana.

From 2f0945fa02ce8e83d34dca533f09278479ed20c7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 16:21:33 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 25/86] L4 charms, phrasing

---
 Spells/4/Charms/index.md | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Charms/index.md b/Spells/4/Charms/index.md
index b55d6aee1..807cb4a78 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Charms/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Charms/index.md
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Block of Slaughter
 *4th level Charm*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Special<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M<br>
-**Duration:** 6 Rounds
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** 120 feet<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(A dagger worth at least 50gp.)*<br>
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-Slice your hand open with a ceremonial dagger and take 1d6 damage when you cast this spell. Point your hand towards a creature that can see it. Said creature will exert all of its efforts to kill as many creatures as it can other than you during the next 6 rounds.
+Slice your hand open with a ceremonial dagger and take 1d6 damage when you cast this spell. Point your cut hand towards a creature that can see you within range and make a charm spell attack vs the Wisdom defence of the target. On a hit, the target will exert all of its efforts to attack as many creatures as it can other than your for the duration.

From 7c445f6fd43356d027365f6a08cca536bca38ade Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 16:31:49 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 26/86] L3 conj, revision

move Passage Through the Underworld to 3rd level
---
 Spells/4/Conjuration/index.md | 9 ---------
 1 file changed, 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/4/Conjuration/index.md
index 0ab5a29f4..e714fd284 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -5,12 +5,3 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 ---
 
 # Conjuration
-
-## Passage Through the Underworld
-*4th level Conjuration*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Self<br>
-**Components:** V, S<br>
-**Duration:** 1 Round
-
-Cover your ears and close your eyes as a part of this spell's casting. Then, walk forward. Your body will descend underground, to a place no living or undead creature may follow. The following round, appear anywhere within 360 feet of your original location (up or down). You know exactly where you will go. When you emerge, one ghost emerges with you, and will aggressively haunt wherever you appear.

From 0051007dbe34d9c60c9f975a34ecefd2494e2424 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 16:40:47 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 27/86] Passage Through the Underworld

moved to 3rd from 4th
---
 Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md | 9 +++++++++
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md
index 9302a68ce..c9de71946 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -15,6 +15,15 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 You create 45 pounds of food and 30 gallons of water on the ground or in containers within range, enough to sustain up to fifteen humanoids or five steeds for 24 hours. The food is bland but nourishing, and spoils if uneaten after 24 hours. The water is clean and doesn't go bad.
 
+## Passage Through the Underworld
+*3th level Conjuration*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** Self<br>
+**Components:** V, S<br>
+**Duration:** 1 Round
+
+Cover your ears and close your eyes as a part of this spell's casting. Then, walk forward. Your body will descend underground, to a place no living or undead creature may follow. The following round, appear anywhere within 360 feet of your original location that you can see. When you emerge, one denizen of the underworld- of the GM's discretion - emerges with you, and will aggressively haunt wherever you appear.
+
 ## Set Loose the Crocodiles
 *3rd level Conjuration*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>

From cebcb99c63ce1bd4da3ad09e65b4220f50490433 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:50:48 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 28/86] revise From Heaven's Eye See Sin

phrasing. move from 4th level to 3rd
---
 Spells/3/Divination/index.md | 11 +++++++++++
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Divination/index.md b/Spells/3/Divination/index.md
index efe9eae99..f06fafd80 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Divination/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Divination/index.md
@@ -5,3 +5,14 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 ---
 
 # Divination
+
+## From the Heaven's Eye, See Sin
+*3rd level Divination (Ritual)*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** Self<br>
+**Components:** V, S<br>
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 10 minutes
+
+Stare at the sun when you cast this spell and do not look away until you wish it to end. While staring into the sun, you shall see anything that the sun could see, in any part of the word. You can see it as close as if you were 10 feet above ground. After you have looked away from the sun, you are [blinded](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Blinded/) for 1d4 hours.
+
+At night this spell has no effect, and it cannot be used indoors.

From 6d88256f0d5ea048e4a07ba8826a22d4af7b2f4c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:54:17 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 29/86] L4 div spells

move From the Heaven's Eye, See Sin from 4th to 3rd
---
 Spells/4/Divination/index.md | 9 ---------
 1 file changed, 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Divination/index.md b/Spells/4/Divination/index.md
index ba56fc9bb..c7304e99c 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Divination/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Divination/index.md
@@ -6,15 +6,6 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 # Divination
 
-## From the Heaven's Eye, See Sin
-*4th level Divination*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Self<br>
-**Components:** V, S<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, until dusk
-
-Stare into the sun when you cast this spell and do not look away until you wish it to end. While staring into the sun, you shall see anything that the sun could see, in any part of the word. You can see it as close as if you were currently 100 feet above ground. At night, this spell does naught, and it cannot be used in doors.
-
 ## Mold the Waxen Sacrifice
 *4th level Divination (Ritual)*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>

From 7a583a0d672ebc4b07f23b565f3abd2188c6254b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:09:16 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 30/86] L4 div, phrasing

---
 Spells/4/Divination/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Divination/index.md b/Spells/4/Divination/index.md
index c7304e99c..06fb8f143 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Divination/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Divination/index.md
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 *4th level Divination (Ritual)*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(A wax figure and a lock of hair from a living creature.)<br>
 **Duration:** Special
 
-Present a waxen figure you have made as a part of casting this spell. Affix to the figure via nail a piece of another living creature. Whatever the figure feels so too will the living creature, though it will suffer no other ill effects from the figure's defacing. 10 times may the figure be manipulated before this spell ends.
+Present a waxen figure you have made as a part of casting this spell and affix to the figure the hair of another living creature. Whatever the figure feels so too will the living creature, though it will suffer no other ill effects from the figure's defacing. You may the manipulate the figure 10 times before this spell ends.

From 9bda8d64e56be55232d4d550f6faeaa9e16c56af Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:13:45 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 31/86] L4 evo, phrasing

---
 Spells/4/Evocation/index.md | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Evocation/index.md b/Spells/4/Evocation/index.md
index 8335958dc..946808631 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Evocation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Evocation/index.md
@@ -8,18 +8,18 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Flashbang
 *4th level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Bonus Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
 **Components:** V<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 1 minute
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-The next time you hit a creature with a ranged weapon attack during this spell's duration, a dazzling burst of radiant energy erupts on impact, releasing a concussive clap that is audible out to 300 feet. The attack deals an extra 2d6 radiant damage and 2d6 thunder damage to the target and disorients nearby creatures. Compare your attack roll to the Constitution defence of the target of the attack and each creature within 5 feet of it. On a hit, a creature becomes blinded and deafened until the start of your next turn.
+The next time you hit a creature with a ranged weapon attack during this spell's duration, a dazzling burst of radiant energy erupts on impact, releasing a concussive clap that is audible out to 300 feet. The attack deals an extra 2d6 sacred damage and 2d6 sonic damage to the target and disorients nearby creatures. Additionally, make an evocation attack roll vs the Constitution defence of the target of the attack and each creature within 5 feet of it. On a hit, a creature becomes [blinded](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Blinded/) and [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) until the start of your next turn.
 
 ## Shimmering Light
 *4th Level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** 300 Feet<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M (A miniature replica of a mission bell.)<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 1 minute
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-You shine a light towards a creature you can see within range, causing their head to grow heavy and their sight to grow dim, such that they might need to stop for the night. Make a spell attack roll vs the target's Wisdom defence. On a hit, they are blinded for the duration and gain 1 level of exhaustion. The target can make a Wisdom defence check vs your spell skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the blindness effect on a success.
+You shine a light towards a creature you can see within range, causing their head to grow heavy and their sight to grow dim, such that they might need to stop for the night. Make an evocation spell attack roll vs the target's Wisdom defence. On a hit, they are [blinded](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Blinded/) for the duration and gain 1 level of [exhaustion](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Exhaustion/). The target can make a Wisdom defence check vs your evocatino spell skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the blindness effect on a success.

From e653bf21b784cda1bc3cd7a54bb64d3115fdc6f0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:20:21 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 32/86] L4 resto, add resuscitate

moved from necro to resto
---
 Spells/4/Restoration/index.md | 13 +++++++++++++
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Restoration/index.md b/Spells/4/Restoration/index.md
index 3d6c04a81..974b5c7e2 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Restoration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Restoration/index.md
@@ -5,3 +5,16 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 ---
 
 # Restoration
+
+## Resuscitate
+*4th level Restoration (Ritual)*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** Touch<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(Diamonds worth 400 gp, which the spell consumes)*<br>
+**Duration:** Instantaneous
+
+You touch a creature that has died within the last hour. That creature returns to life with 1 hit point.
+
+This spell closes all mortal wounds, but it doesn't restore missing body parts. If the creature is lacking body parts or organs integral for its survival (its head, for instance) the spell automatically fails. This spell can't return to life a creature that has died of old age, nor can it return an undead creature to life.
+
+Coming back from the dead is an ordeal. The target takes a −2d dpenalty to all attack rolls, defences, and ability checks. Every time the target finishes a long rest, the penalty is reduced by 1 until it disappears.

From 2de22232332bb0ad45e1cea2e89c491e5f85af9f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:26:45 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 33/86] L4 necro, phrasing

---
 Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md | 28 +++++++---------------------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md
index f92443492..e5d420896 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -8,37 +8,23 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Invisible Touch
 *4th Level Necromancy*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** 120 Feet<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 1 minute
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-You create an invisible hand and use it to reach into a creature you can see within 120 feet, taking hold of their heart and slowly tearing them apart. Make a ranged spell attack against the creature. On a hit, the target takes 4d8 necrotic damage and the hand continues to cling to their heart for the spell's duration.
+You create an invisible hand and use it to reach into a creature you can see within 120 feet, taking hold of their heart and slowly tearing it apart. Make a ranged necromancy spell attack against the creature. On a hit, the target takes 4d8 profane damage and the hand continues to cling to their heart for the spell's duration.
 
-As long as the hand clings to the target's heart, they cannot regain hit points, and they take 2d8 necrotic damage at the start of each of their turns. The target can make a Charisma defence check against your spell skill DC at the end of each of their turns, ending the spell on a success.
+As long as the hand clings to the target's heart, they cannot regain stamina, and they take 2d8 profane damage at the start of each of their turns. The target can make a Charisma defence check vs your necromancy spell skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the spell on a success.
 
 ## Paint a Curse Upon the Tomb
 *4th level Necromancy (Ritual)*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(Cermonial paints.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-As a part of this spell, drench an object in the same paints used to adorn the tombs of god-kings and god-queens. Any creature that takes the object other than you is cursed. Said creature rolls twice on all die rolls and takes the worse result. If this would result in a failure for any reason, the creature suffers 1d6 damage. This curse persists until somehow dispelled, or if the cursed object is destroyed by fire.
-
-## Resuscitate
-*4th level Necromancy (Ritual)*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** Touch<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M*<br>
-**Duration:** Instantaneous
-
-You touch a creature that has died within the last hour. That creature returns to life with 1 hit point.
-
-This spell closes all mortal wounds, but it doesn't restore missing body parts. If the creature is lacking body parts or organs integral for its survival (its head, for instance) the spell automatically fails. This spell can't return to life a creature that has died of old age, nor can it return an undead creature to life.
-
-Coming back from the dead is an ordeal. The target takes a −2 penalty to all attack rolls, defences, and ability checks. Every time the target finishes a long rest, the penalty is reduced by 1 until it disappears.<br>
-**- (diamonds worth 400 gp, which the spell consumes)*
+As a part of this spell, drench an object in the same paints used to adorn the tombs of god-kings and god-queens. Any creature that takes the object other than you is cursed. A cursed creature has a -1d to all attack rolls, defences, and ability checks. If this results in a miss or failure for any reason, the creature suffers 1d6 profane damage. This curse persists until somehow dispelled, or if the cursed object is destroyed by fire.
 
 ## Ruin That Which Ruins Me
 *4th level Necromancy*<br>
@@ -47,4 +33,4 @@ Coming back from the dead is an ordeal. The target takes a −2 penalty to all a
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-You can cast this spell only when you die. That which kills you dies for 1 round, resurrecting after that round with hit points equal to its total hit dice.
+You can cast this spell only when you die. That which kills you dies for 1 round, resurrecting after that round with stamina equal to its recovery die multiplier.

From 1681f6a0d29996dafcb836db0d7c1fd1321c49bf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:29:56 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 34/86] L4 trans, phrasing

---
 Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md | 8 +++++---
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md
index 1e18b9614..02ced577c 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -8,9 +8,11 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Role Reversal
 *4th Level Transmutation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** 60 Feet<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M (A sugar pill.)<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 1 hour
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
 
-When you cast this spell, the universal muse comes over you, inspiring you to break it all down. Choose two willing humanoids with class levels that you can see within range. The targets exchange one class feature (other than spellcasting) with each other, losing their ability but gaining access to the other party's ability for the duration. For example, you could choose a barbarian and a bard, granting the Bardic Inspiration feature to the barbarian and Rage to the bard. A creature cannot gain an ability it already has through this spell, and abilities that have limited uses are not recharged at any point: the creature gaining the ability inherits however many uses were remaining at the time the spell was cast, and the original owner of the ability is left with only as many uses as were unspent at the end of the spell's duration.
+*The universal muse comes over you, inspiring you to break it all down.*
+
+Choose two willing humanoids that you can see within range. The targets exchange one feature (other than spellcasting) with each other, losing their ability but gaining access to the other party's ability for the duration. For example, you could choose a barbarian and a bard, granting the Bardic Inspiration feature to the barbarian and Rage to the bard. A creature cannot gain an ability it already has through this spell, and abilities that have limited uses are not recharged at any point: the creature gaining the ability inherits however many uses were remaining at the time the spell was cast, and the original owner of the ability is left with only as many uses as were unspent at the end of the spell's duration.

From d27ec521b2c37ae65bb579d3328956eb4d40e8b8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:32:43 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 35/86] L5 charms, phrasing

---
 Spells/5/Charm/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Charm/index.md b/Spells/5/Charm/index.md
index 3f0e6f77e..2c312c720 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Charm/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Charm/index.md
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Favour
 *5th level Charm*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-This is one of the words of power. Utter it, and one creature whose hand you hold will be able to cast any 1 spell you have memorized. Once cast, they will be compelled by fate to do you a single favor.
+This is one of the words of power. Utter it, and one creature whose hand you hold will be able to cast any 1 spell you can currently cast of their choice. Once cast, they will be compelled by fate to do you a single favor.

From 35be0e0e2f1777d30d7be27a7c7fcf209cb3aef5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:34:13 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 36/86] L5 conj, phrasing

---
 Spells/5/Conjuration/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/5/Conjuration/index.md
index 5303b54df..0ccd6f54d 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Rule
 *5th level Conjuration*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
 **Components:** V<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous

From 1eb4cea0f8b6a9657eed5d814a862a572a59a9ea Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:39:39 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 37/86] L5 div, phrasing

---
 Spells/5/Divination/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Divination/index.md b/Spells/5/Divination/index.md
index fb29f8db3..db3b3fe13 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Divination/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Divination/index.md
@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Evil Eye
 *5th level Divination*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Special<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Special
 
-When you cast this spell, one of your eyes goes blind. A creature that you look upon when you cast this spell is cursed by the evil eye. You can see what it sees through one of its eyes, but only see, not hear, feel, or hear thoughts. At the end of every day, the creature must roll 1d20. On a 1, the die size reduces. When the die size reduces below a 1d4, the creature dies, and sight is returned to your blind eye.
+When you cast this spell, one of your eyes goes blind. A creature that you look upon when you cast this spell is cursed by the evil eye. You can see what it sees through one of its eyes, but only see, not hear, feel, or hear thoughts. At the end of every day, the creature must roll 1d20. On a 1, the die size reduces by one step, e.g. from 1d20 to 1d12. When the die size is reduced to a 1d4 and the creatures rolls 1, the creature dies. Sight is returned to your blind eye when the creature dies.
 
 ## Legend Lore
 *5th level Divination (Ritual)*<br>

From 9ae94e2f431aed9ad84c860ef58e8a8a0e564ad9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:45:19 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 38/86] L5 evo, phrasing

---
 Spells/5/Evocation/index.md | 16 +++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Evocation/index.md b/Spells/5/Evocation/index.md
index 45134559e..317c328d0 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Evocation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Evocation/index.md
@@ -8,20 +8,22 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Temporal Shunt
 *5th Level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Free Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
 **Range:** 120 Feet<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** 1 Round
 
-Make a spell attack roll vs the Charisma defence of a creature that you have seen within the last round. On a hit, it vanishes at the start of its last turn, being thrown to another point in time such that its actions on that turn never happened. At the start of its next turn, the target reappears where it was or in the closest unoccupied space. The target doesn't remember you casting the spell or being affected by it.
+Make an evocation spell attack roll vs the Charisma defence of a creature that you have seen within the last round. On a hit, it vanishes at the start of its last turn, being thrown to another point in time such that its actions on that turn never happened. At the start of its next turn, the target reappears where it was or in the closest unoccupied space. The target doesn't remember you casting the spell or being affected by it.
 
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 6th level or higher, you can target one additional creature for each slot level above 5th. All targets must be within 30 feet of each other.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 6 or more mana, you can target one additional creature within range for each additional mana. All targets must be within 30 feet of each other.
 
 ## Thunderbolt and Lightning
 *5th Level Evocation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** 120 Feet<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** 120 Feet (20-foot radius)<br>
 **Components:** S<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 1 minute
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
+
+*You do the fandango and call down a very, very frightening blast of energy.*
 
-You do the fandango and call down a very, very frightening blast of energy, which explodes in a 20-foot radius sphere centered on a point you choose within range. Make a spell attack roll vs the Dexterity defence of each creature in the area. On a hit, a target takes 4d6 thunder and 4d6 lightning damage and becomes frightened of you for the duration; on a miss, it takes half as much damage and is not frightened. A frightened creature can make a Wisdom defence check vs your spell skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the effect for themselves on a success.
+Make an evocation spell attack roll vs the Dexterity defence of each creature in the 20-foot area centered on a point you can see within range. On a hit, a target takes 4d6 sonic and 4d6 electric damage and becomes [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) of you for the duration; on a miss, it takes half as much damage and is not [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/). A [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) creature can make a Wisdom defence check vs your evocation spell skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the effect for themselves on a success.

From 02be48f04ef6471e1890e0738b9491c441163e6d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:55:11 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 39/86] L5 necro, phrasing

---
 Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md
index a6ecef436..48f76bfca 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S, M<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Take the body of a dead man and lay the corpse of an animal upon it. Only then may you cast this spell. The two bodies fuse in a way of your choosing. The new creature is risen as a chimera that will faithfully serve you. It has as many HD as you do, and has one aspect of the animal that it is fused with, such as an eagle's wings, a lion's claws, or a shark's water breath. If the chimera is ever exorcised, it dies instantly.
+Take the body of a dead man and lay the corpse of an animal upon it. Only then may you cast this spell. The two bodies fuse in a way of your choosing. The new creature is risen as a chimera that will faithfully serve you. It has as half the stamina as you, and has one aspect of the animal that it is fused with, such as an eagle's wings, a lion's claws, or a shark's water breath. If the chimera is ever exorcised, it dies instantly.
 
 ## Keep Dead the Dead
 *5nd level Necromancy (Ritual)*<br>
@@ -29,18 +29,18 @@ Raise Dead can be cast as a ritual.
 
 ## Upon Me I Bestow the Strength of the Dead
 *5th level Necromancy*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M<br>
-**Duration:** 6 Rounds
+**Components:** V, S, M (The skull of a fighter.)*<br>
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-You may only cast this spell while having the skull of a 4th level or higher fighting-man in your inventory. You gain their Strength score and proficiency bonus, as well as the ability to use all armour, shields and weapons for 6 rounds. 
+You may only cast this spell while having the skull of a fighting-man in your inventory. You gain their Strength score and martial weapon proficiencies, as well as the ability to use all armour and shields for the duration. 
 
 ## Walk Again, Those Countless Dead
 *5th level Necromancy (Ritual)*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(Flesh from the face of a deac man.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-To cast this spell, you must have a scrap of flesh from a dead man's face. Once cast, you call forth the dead to serve you. For the number of dead animated simply roll one hit die for every level above the 8th the caster is, thus a level 9 caster gets 1d6 animated dead. Note that the skeletons or dead bodies must be available in order to animate them. The spell lasts until dispelled or the animated dead are done away with.
+You call forth the dead to serve you. Roll your recovery die to determine the number of undead that you can raise. Note that the skeletons or dead bodies must be available in order to animate them. The spell lasts until dispelled or the animated dead are done away with.

From 79740dd53a03b45cd26015f2613bf20a4308bac7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 13:57:55 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 40/86] L5 trans, phrasing

---
 Spells/5/Transmutation/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/5/Transmutation/index.md
index 0787a81a0..19f8d05e2 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Reincarnate can be cast as a ritual.
 **Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
 **Range:** Self (5-mile radius)<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M (A small boat made of china.)<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 30 days
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 30 days
 
 You sing like a bird released, allowing you to take the weather with you everywhere you go. When you cast this spell, the current weather conditions (which are determined by the GM based on the climate and season) are fixed in a 5-mile radius around you. These conditions remain constant for the duration of the spell, and stay with you when you move. The weather conditions in the spell's area cannot be changed by any means short of a control weather spell.
 

From 01dd2e40addc324d8bdd6b0b087de0c9e75ff649 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 14:04:12 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 41/86] L6 conj, phrasing

---
 Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md
index 869d1be63..7ae3d6930 100644
--- a/Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -22,4 +22,4 @@ You must know the true name of a demon to cast this spell. You must also anoint
 **Components:** V, S, M<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-You must have fashioned from clay an animal the size of a small hut before casting this spell. This spell is cast on this the idol. The idol turns into a flesh-and-blood version of itself, intelligent, sentient, and speaking all languages. It has HD equal to your total levels + 5. It will serve you loyally as a sage or as a warrior. It has +9 to hit and deals 3d6 damage with its attacks. The animal has all the traits of whatever animal you sculpted it after. When it dies, is dispelled, or is exorcised, it turns into clay and shatters.
+You must have fashioned from clay an animal the size of a small hut before casting this spell. This spell is cast on this the idol. The idol turns into a flesh-and-blood version of itself, intelligent, sentient, and speaking all languages. It has stamina equal to 2 times your Constituion score. It will serve you loyally as a sage or as a warrior. When it attacks, make a melee conjuration spell attack roll and deals 3d6 damage of a type appropriate to its form on a hit. The animal has all the traits of whatever animal you sculpted it after. When it dies, is dispelled, or is exorcised, it turns into clay and shatters.

From 856a3c6bfd6623138a5e98eb00a49dec72eb499f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 14:06:47 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 42/86] L6 div, phrasing

---
 Spells/6/Divination/index.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/6/Divination/index.md b/Spells/6/Divination/index.md
index 16a517343..df5fbd2f7 100644
--- a/Spells/6/Divination/index.md
+++ b/Spells/6/Divination/index.md
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Destiny, Rewritten
 *6th level Divination*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
-**Range:** 100 feet<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
+**Range:** 120 feet<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-As a part of this spell's casting you must know the birth place of a creature within 100 feet. The creature's birth place is changed, and thus its entire life path is changed. The creature's memories are rewritten, as is their personality and alignment, and they disappear, reappearing somewhere else in the world.
+As a part of this spell's casting you must know the birth place of a creature that is within 120 feet of you. The creature's birth place is changed, and thus its entire life path is changed. The creature's memories are rewritten, as is their personality and alignment, and they disappear, reappearing somewhere else in the world.

From 01b8d2eac0474d3ddc676601c1eb5c7dee05d128 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 14:23:16 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 43/86] L6 necro, phrasing

---
 Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md
index e94061f53..20f9a2c03 100644
--- a/Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -13,32 +13,32 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S, M<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-You must have access to the corpse of a creature with its head attached before you can cast this spell. As a part of the casting, cover the corpse in clay. The next round, the creature will be reborn, healed of all ailments and wounds. 
+You must have access to the corpse of a creature with its head attached before you can cast this spell. As a part of the casting, cover the corpse in clay. The next day, the creature will be reborn, healed of all ailments and wounds. 
 
 ## Soul Cage
 *6th level Necromancy*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Free Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** 60 Feet<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A tiny silver cage worth 100 gp.)*<br>
 **Duration:** 8 Hours
 
-When a humanoid that you can see died within 60 feet of you in the last round, you can snatch its soul as it dies and traps it inside the tiny cage that you use for the material component. A stolen soul remains inside the cage until the spell ends or until you destroy the cage, which ends the spell. While you have a soul inside the cage, you can exploit it in any of the ways described below. You can use a trapped soul up to six times. Once you exploit a soul for the sixth time, it is released, and the spell ends. While a soul is trapped, the dead humanoid that it came from can’t be revived.
+You can cast this spell when a humanoid that you could see died within 60 feet of you within the last round. You snatch its soul as it dies and trap it inside the tiny cage that you use for the material component. A stolen soul remains inside the cage until the spell ends or until you destroy the cage, which ends the spell. 
 
-**Steal Life.** You can use a bonus action to drain vigour from the soul and regain 2d8 hit points.
+While you have a soul inside the cage and you are holding the cage, you can exploit it in any of the ways described below. You can use a trapped soul up to six times. Once you exploit a soul for the sixth time, it is released, and the spell ends. While a soul is trapped, the dead humanoid that it came from can’t be revived.
 
-**Query Soul.** You ask the soul a question (no action required) and receive a brief telepathic answer, which you can understand regardless of the language used. The soul knows only what it knew in life, but it must answer you truthfully and to the best of its ability. The answer is no more than a sentence or two and might be cryptic.
+**Steal Life.** You can use 2 actions to drain vigour from the soul and regain 2d8 stamina.
 
-**Borrow Experience.** You can use a bonus action to bolster yourself with the soul’s life experience, making your next attack roll or ability check with advantage. If you don't use this benefit before the start of your next turn, it is lost.
+**Query Soul.** You ask the soul a question (no action required) and receive a brief telepathic answer, which you can understand regardless of the language used. The soul knows only what it knew in life, but it must answer you truthfully and to the best of its ability. The answer is no more than a sentence or two and might be cryptic.
 
-**Eyes of the Dead.** You can use an action to name a place the humanoid saw in life, which creates an invisible sensor somewhere in that place if it is on the plane of existence that you're currently on. The sensor remains for as long as you concentrate, up to 10 minutes (as if you were concentrating on a spell). You receive visual and auditory information from the sensor as if you were in its space using your senses.
+**Borrow Experience.** You can use 1 action to bolster yourself with the soul’s life experience, granting a +1d to your next attack roll, defence or ability check. If you don't use this benefit before the start of your next turn, it is lost.
 
-A creature that can see the sensor (such as one using *see invisibility* or *truesight*) sees a translucent image of the tormented humanoid whose soul you caged.
+**Eyes of the Dead.** You can use 2 actions to name a place the humanoid saw in life, which creates an invisible sensor somewhere in that place if it is on the plane of existence that you're currently on. The sensor remains for as long as you sustain the effect, up to 10 minutes (as if you were sustaining a spell). You receive visual and auditory information from the sensor as if you were in its space using your senses. A creature that can see the sensor (such as one using *see invisibility* or *truesight*) sees a translucent image of the tormented humanoid whose soul you caged.
 
 ## Unluck of the Doomsday
 *6th level Necromancy*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Special<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Roll 1d20 when you cast this spell, and stare at the creature whom you are cursing. On that day, the creature must succeed at a Wisdom defence check or die. If it has less then 20 hit points, it will die no matter what.
+Roll 1d20 when you cast this spell, and stare at the creature whom you are cursing. On that day, the creature must succeed at a Wisdom defence check vs your necromancy spell skill. On a failure, if it has less than 20 stamina it will die.

From 42d06d5bb213a5b35ba6c43a15644e25ebcff986 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 14:30:19 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 44/86] phrasing, Unluck of the Doomsday

---
 Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md
index 20f9a2c03..c6ed66a9d 100644
--- a/Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -41,4 +41,4 @@ While you have a soul inside the cage and you are holding the cage, you can expl
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Roll 1d20 when you cast this spell, and stare at the creature whom you are cursing. On that day, the creature must succeed at a Wisdom defence check vs your necromancy spell skill. On a failure, if it has less than 20 stamina it will die.
+Stare at the creature whom you are cursing and roll 1d8. In a number hours equal to the roll, the creature must succeed at a Wisdom defence check vs your necromancy spell skill. On a failure, if it has less than 20 stamina it will die.

From cb65607cae6fc3aeecee031779c91579a5c1f053 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 14:36:57 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 45/86] L6 trans, phrasing

---
 Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md | 18 ++++++++++++------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md
index 22687f6ac..677a81cf6 100644
--- a/Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -8,15 +8,15 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Investment of Translucent Alabaster
 *6th Level Transmutation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 10 minutes
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 10 minutes
 
 Until the spell ends, your body is encased in flakes of white stone, and you gain the following benefits:
-* You have resistance to necrotic damage, immunity to all disease and, as long as you have at least 1 hit point, you regain 1d8 hit points at the start of each of your turns.
+* You have gain 1 level of resistance to profane damage, immunity to all disease and, as long as you have at least 1 stamina, you regain 1d8 stamina at the start of each of your turns.
 * You can understand all languages and speak them with perfect diction.
-* You act with more conviction, gaining advantage on all Charisma checks.
+* You act with more conviction, gaining +1d on all Charisma checks.
 * You gain mastery over all swarms of creatures. They will do your bidding when ordered as if magically charmed.
 
 ## Ironwood
@@ -32,9 +32,15 @@ Further, if you make only half as much *ironwood* as the spell would normally al
 
 ## Serve
 *6th level Transmutation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
 **Components:** V<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-You utter a word of power. This utterance forces the world to serve you. You can use this spell to part water up to 10" deep, or lower the water level of a body of water by 50%. You can create weather of any kind, or raise up great walls 100 feet tall and 500 feet wide. Casting this spell allows only one of these feats to be achieved.
+You utter a word of power. This utterance forces the world to serve you. 
+
+You can use this spell to perform one of the following effects:
+* Part water up to 10 feet deep.
+* Lower the water level of a body of water by 50%.
+* You can create weather of any kind.
+* Raise up great walls 100 feet tall and 500 feet wide. 

From c6db2711079c00a8406c3e1d2d494f7930389bce Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 14:37:58 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 46/86] Update index.md

---
 Spells/2/index.md | 11 -----------
 1 file changed, 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/index.md b/Spells/2/index.md
index 9bb47ee7f..6d2f0b9db 100644
--- a/Spells/2/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/index.md
@@ -6,14 +6,3 @@ nav_order: 4
 ---
 
 # Level 2
-
-## Let the Soul Pass
-*2nd level Warding (Ritual)*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 3 actions<br>
-**Range:** Touch<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M *(Oils, salts and strips of linen worth 100gp which the spell consumes.)*<br>
-**Duration:** Instantaneous
-
-*You prepare a body making it dificult to return to the living.*
-
-You touch the body of a deceased creature, anointing it with the ceremonial oils and salts. If, within the next 10 days, a spell is cast upon it to return it to life, the reviving caster must first succeed on a restoration spell check vs your warding spell skill for the creature to return to life. 

From 51032f767c692b024c758854a118117216000188 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 14:38:32 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 47/86] move to correct folder

---
 Spells/2/Warding/index.md | 11 +++++++++++
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Warding/index.md b/Spells/2/Warding/index.md
index 475f41bbf..aed85d64e 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Warding/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Warding/index.md
@@ -6,6 +6,17 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 # Warding
 
+## Let the Soul Pass
+*2nd level Warding (Ritual)*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 3 actions<br>
+**Range:** Touch<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(Oils, salts and strips of linen worth 100gp which the spell consumes.)*<br>
+**Duration:** Instantaneous
+
+*You prepare a body making it dificult to return to the living.*
+
+You touch the body of a deceased creature, anointing it with the ceremonial oils and salts. If, within the next 10 days, a spell is cast upon it to return it to life, the reviving caster must first succeed on a restoration spell check vs your warding spell skill for the creature to return to life. 
+
 ## Pass Without Trace
 *2nd level Ward*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>

From df761a0577608bb962febc6399966ec7e0e68f41 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 15:04:47 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 48/86] L3 warding, phrasing

Counterspell example calculations need to be modified
---
 Spells/3/Warding/index.md | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Warding/index.md b/Spells/3/Warding/index.md
index 347fcc26e..9894e28de 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Warding/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Warding/index.md
@@ -8,19 +8,19 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Dispel Magic
 *3rd level Ward*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** 120 feet<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Choose one creature, object, or magical effect within range. Any spell of 3rd level or lower on the target ends. For each spell of 4th level or higher on the target, make an ability check using your spellcasting ability. The DC equals 10 + the spell's level. On a successful check, the spell ends.
+Choose one creature, object, or magical effect within range. Any spell of 3rd level or lower on the target ends. For each spell of 4th level or higher on the target, make warding spell ability check. The DC equals 10 + the spell's level. On a successful check, the spell ends.
 
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 4th level or higher, you automatically end the effects of a spell on the target if the spell's level is equal to or less than the level of the spell slot that you used.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, you automatically end the effects of a spell on the target if the spell's level is equal to or less than the mana that you used.
 
 ### Counterspell
-As a special use of the dispel magic spell, you may attempt to interrupt a creature in the process of casting a spell as a free action. If the creature is casting a spell of 3rd level or lower, its spell fails and has no effect. If it is casting a spell of 4th level or higher, it makes a spellcasting attack roll modified by the spell's level vs your spellcasting ability defence modified by *counterspell*'s level. On a failure, the creature's spell fails and has no effect.
+As a special use of the dispel magic spell, you may attempt to interrupt a creature in the process of casting a spell as a free action. If the creature is casting a spell of 3rd level or lower, its spell fails and has no effect. If it is casting a spell of 4th level or higher, it makes a spell skill check using the skill of spell school being cast modified by the spell's level vs your warding spell skil, modified by *counterspell*'s level. On a failure, the creature's spell fails and has no effect.
 
-For example, if a level 5 wizard with 18 intelligence casts a 3rd level *counterspell* vs a 5th level *cone of cold* spell cast by a CR 6 Mage with 17 intelligence, the Mage makes a proficient roll with an attack bonus of:
+For example, if a level wizard with 18 intelligence casts a 3rd level *counterspell* vs a 5th level *cone of cold* spell cast by a Mage with 17 intelligence, the Mage makes a proficient roll with an attack bonus of:
 
 <center>
 
@@ -36,22 +36,22 @@ vs a DC of:
 
 </center>
 
-You can only *counterspell* can only be cast when another creature that you can see casts a spell within 60 feet of you. In order to be ready to *counterspell*, you must on your own turn declare the conditions under which you will cast *counterspell*. If you wish to upcast *counterspell* then you must declare this in advance. You may only cast *counterspell* once per round.
+You can only *counterspell* when another creature that you can see casts a spell within 60 feet of you. In order to be ready to *counterspell*, you must on your own turn declare the conditions under which you will cast *counterspell*. If you wish to upcast *counterspell* then you must declare this in advance. You may only cast *counterspell* once per round.
 
 The conditions must be specific. For example:
 * I will *counterspell* the first spell that the mage casts.
 * I will *counterspell* at 6th level the first evocation spell that the lich casts.
 * I will *counterspell* the first spell attempting to heal the hobgoblin warlord.
 
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 4th level or higher, the targeted spellcaster's defence is reduced as described above.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, the targeted spellcaster's defence is reduced as described above.
 
 ## Exorcise the Hated Evil
 *3rd level Ward (Ritual)*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A polished opal worth at least 1000 gp.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Make an unarmed attack roll vs. a creature that is posessed or under the influence of a minor curse. On a hit, you grab the creature by the throat and press a polished opal to its forehead.
+Make an melee attack roll vs a creature that is posessed or under the influence of a minor curse. On a hit, you grab the creature by the throat and press a polished opal to its forehead.
 
-Make a spell attack roll vs. the Charisma defence of the posessing creature, or the DC of the curse. On a hit, when you pull opal back, the curse or entity posessing the creature will exit the creature in the form of black, ichor-filled vomit. Afterwards, the creature is no longer cursed or possessed.
+Make a warding attack roll against vs the Charisma defence of the posessing creature, or the DC of the curse. On a hit, when you pull the opal back and the curse or entity posessing the creature will exit the creature in the form of black, ichor-filled vomit. Afterwards, the creature is no longer cursed or possessed.

From e82b603555d8af87c677a7ee8a37879af8bcb3d0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 15:10:30 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 49/86] L7 conj, phrasing

---
 Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md
index c2087c4f1..dd086f940 100644
--- a/Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -8,14 +8,14 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## The Wall
 *7th Level Conjuration*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** 120 Feet<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M (Another brick.)<br>
 **Duration:** Until dispelled or torn down
 
 A nonmagical wall of bricks and mortar springs into existence at a point you choose within range. The wall is 6 inches thick and is composed of twenty 10-foot-by-10-foot panels. Each panel must be contiguous with at least one other panel. Alternatively, you can create 10-foot-by-5-foot panels that are 16 inches thick, incorporating a 4-inch cavity. If a space would be surrounded below and on all four sides by the wall (or the wall and another solid surface), the spell can create a pitched roof of tile and timber to create a fully enclosed volume. Roof sections do not count towards the total number of panels conjured by the spell.
 
-If the wall cuts through a creature’s space when it appears, the creature is pushed to one side of the wall (your choice). If a creature would be surrounded on all sides by the wall (or the wall and another solid surface), make a spell attack roll vs their Dexterity defence. On a miss, it moves up to its speed so that it is no longer enclosed by the wall.
+If the wall cuts through a creature’s space when it appears, the creature is pushed to one side of the wall (your choice). If a creature would be surrounded on all sides by the wall (or the wall and another solid surface), make a conjuration spell attack roll vs their Dexterity defence. On a miss, it moves up to its speed so that it is no longer enclosed by the wall.
     
 The wall can have any shape you desire, though it can’t occupy the same space as a creature or object. The wall doesn't need to be vertical or rest on any firm foundation. It must, however, merge with and be solidly supported by existing structures or landforms. Thus, you can use this spell to bridge a chasm, create a ramp, or build a cantilevered annex onto an existing building.
 

From 88fa7fed0716c20ec27a343d72627126d3679714 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 15:11:22 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 50/86] Update index.md

move Resurrection to resto
---
 Spells/7/Necromancy/index.md | 3 +--
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/7/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/7/Necromancy/index.md
index 9946ac23c..5560239ce 100644
--- a/Spells/7/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/7/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -6,5 +6,4 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 # Necromancy
 
-## Resurrection
-Resurrection can be cast as a ritual.
+

From 408612cd5015a8e153ab5fe77df455381a41db5f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 15:11:49 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 51/86] Resurrection from necro

---
 Spells/7/Restoration/index.md | 3 +++
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Spells/7/Restoration/index.md b/Spells/7/Restoration/index.md
index 49efe30f2..d0ca91acb 100644
--- a/Spells/7/Restoration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/7/Restoration/index.md
@@ -5,3 +5,6 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 ---
 
 # Restoration
+
+## Resurrection
+Resurrection can be cast as a ritual.

From 9a714b2a05440b8bfe3d4f63f4baec8176cc200b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 15:14:02 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 52/86] L7 ward, phrasing

---
 Spells/7/Warding/index.md | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/7/Warding/index.md b/Spells/7/Warding/index.md
index 0741c4d55..d86201a77 100644
--- a/Spells/7/Warding/index.md
+++ b/Spells/7/Warding/index.md
@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 # Warding
 
 ## Safeguard
-*6th level Ward*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Bonus Action<br>
+*7th level Ward*<br>
+**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
 **Range:** Self (10-foot radius)<br>
 **Components:** V, S<br>
-**Duration:** Concentration, up to 1 minute
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-In the face of danger, you create a barrier that protects you and those around you. A faintly glowing sphere of protection with a radius of 10 feet appears. The sphere lasts for as long as maintain concentration, or up to 1 minute.
+In the face of danger, you create a barrier that protects you and those around you. A faintly glowing sphere of protection with a radius of 10 feet appears. The sphere lasts for the duration.
 
 Any spell of a lower level than the Safeguard cast from outside the barrier can't affect creatures or objects within it, even if the spell is cast using a higher level spell slot. Such a spell can target creatures and objects within the barrier, but the spell has no effect on them. Similarly, the area within the barrier is excluded from the areas affected by such spells.
 
@@ -23,4 +23,4 @@ Furthermore, hazards of the followings type cannot physically pass through the b
 * A specific effect, such as a dragon's breath attack.
 * An environmental danger, such as falling rocks or a lava flow.
 
-***At Higher Levels.*** When you cast Safeguard using a spell slot of 8th level or higher, the maximum radius increases by 10 feet for each slot level above 7th.
+***At Higher Levels.*** When you cast Safeguard using 8 or more mana, the maximum radius increases by 10 feet for each additional mana.

From e270386f42d001cf12849f293552c904d7537902 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 15:15:54 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 53/86] move true rez to resto

---
 Spells/9/Necromancy/index.md | 2 --
 1 file changed, 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/9/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/9/Necromancy/index.md
index 0666d72e2..f6d7c07e9 100644
--- a/Spells/9/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/9/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -6,5 +6,3 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 # Necromancy
 
-## True Resurrection
-True Resurrection can be cast as a ritual.

From d4d7bd4607f848b33b7ad3046cf7899b2f86c7c3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 15:16:14 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 54/86] true rez from necro

---
 Spells/9/Restoration/index.md | 3 +++
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+)

diff --git a/Spells/9/Restoration/index.md b/Spells/9/Restoration/index.md
index 95012fca3..e274dee46 100644
--- a/Spells/9/Restoration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/9/Restoration/index.md
@@ -5,3 +5,6 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 ---
 
 # Restoration
+
+## True Resurrection
+True Resurrection can be cast as a ritual.

From 6012e0afba19789b568f879558ff7143eded1055 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Sep 2023 15:17:12 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 55/86] L9 trans, phrasing

---
 Spells/9/Transmutation/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/9/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/9/Transmutation/index.md
index 03c98ecd1..eeca50b96 100644
--- a/Spells/9/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/9/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 ## Time Stop
 *9th-level transmutation*<br>
-**Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
+**Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Self<br>
 **Components:** V<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous<br>
@@ -17,4 +17,4 @@ You briefly stop the flow of time for everyone but yourself. No time passes for
   
 **Action:** You take 3 turns in a row, during which you can use actions and move as normal.
 
-When you take this extra turn attack rolls are made with advantage and any attack that hits counts as a critical hit.
+When you take this extra turn attack rolls have +1d and any attack that hits counts as a critical hit.

From 105f80c485a1dddad5f3f680241320afabec54cf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 13:50:04 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 56/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/1/Warding/index.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/1/Warding/index.md b/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
index ee9ad1d9d..a465e80d0 100644
--- a/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
+++ b/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
@@ -69,17 +69,17 @@ When this spell is cast, you gain resistance to physical damage for the duration
 
 When you cast the spell, choose one of the following rites, the target of which must be within 10 feet of you throughout the casting.
 
-**Atonement.** You touch one willing creature who has broken an oath or breached their diety's principals. Make a spellcasting ability check vs DC 20. On a successful check, the target is absolved of its transgressions. A creature can benefit from this rite once every 7 days.
+**Atonement.** You touch one willing creature who has broken an oath or breached their diety's principals. Make a DC 20 Warding check. On a successful check, the target is absolved of its transgressions. A creature can benefit from this rite once every 7 days.
 
 **Bless Water.** You touch one vial of water and cause it to become holy water.
 
-**Coming of Age.** You touch one humanoid who is a young adult. For the next 24 hours, whenever the target makes an ability check, it can roll a d4 and add the number rolled to the ability check. A creature can benefit from this rite only once.
+**Coming of Age.** You touch one humanoid who is a young adult. For the next 24 hours, the target makes skill checks with +1d. A creature can benefit from this rite only once.
 
 **Dedication.** You touch one humanoid who wishes to be dedicated to your god’s service. For the next 24 hours, whenever the target makes a defence check, it can roll a d4 and add the number rolled to the save. A creature can benefit from this rite only once.
 
-**Funeral Rite.** You touch one corpse, and for the next 7 days, the target can’t become undead by any means short of a wish spell.
+**Funeral Rite.** You touch one corpse and, for the next 7 days, the target can’t become undead by any means short of a [Wish]() spell.
 
-**Wedding.** You touch adult humanoids willing to be bonded together in marriage. For the next 7 days, each target gains a +2 bonus to Strength and Dexterity defence vs melee and ranged attacks while they are within 30 feet of each other. A creature can benefit from this rite again only if widowed.
+**Wedding.** You touch adult humanoids willing to be bonded together in marriage. For the next 7 days, each target gains +1d vs melee and ranged attacks, while they are within 30 feet of each other. A creature can benefit from this rite again only if widowed.
 
 ## Mage Armour
 *1st Level Warding (Ritual)*<br>

From 2ba1e2a355f8aa1293478df1979a8fbb9462dd1b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 15:06:13 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 57/86] Revised

---
 Spells/2/Charms/index.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Charms/index.md b/Spells/2/Charms/index.md
index e283f6f2e..09f07f842 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Charms/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Charms/index.md
@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 *2nd level Charm (Ritual)*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Action<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M *(A stone stele.)*<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(A stone stele worth 50 sp)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Take a stone stele and affix it into a point of your choosing when you cast this spell. The stele has 10 integrity and DR 6. The spell ends when the stele reduced to zero integrity or until dispelled. 
+Take a stone stele and affix it into a point of your choosing when you cast this spell. The stele weighs 86 lbs, has 45 integrity and DR 8. The spell ends when the stele is reduced to 0 integrity, or until dispelled. 
 
-A creature that attempts to make an attack against you within 30 feet of the stele must first make a Charisma defence check vs your charms spell skill. On a success, the spell has no effect on the creature. On a failure, the creature must spend at least 1 action to Strike the stele as it is drawn to destroy it. 
+Any creature that attacks you within 20 feet of the stele must first make a Charisma defence check vs your Charms spell skill. On a success, the spell has no effect on the creature. On a failure, the creature is drawn to destroy the stele instead. An affected creature must use its actions to moves towards the stele and damage it. 
 
 At the end of each of its turns, a creature affected by this spell can make another Charisma defence check. 
 
-**At Higher Levels:** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 3rd level or higher, the integrity of the stele increases by 10 and the DR of the stele increases by 2 for each slot level above 2nd.
+**At Higher Levels:** When you cast this spell using 3 or more mana, the distance from the stele at which the spell is effective increases by 10 feet for every point of mana beyond the first.

From 93f26dcb66206693461a307a7fd862eaed879474 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 15:31:10 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 58/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
index 0d2041452..c6127e8bc 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ This spell cannot be used indoors.
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 hour
 
 A statue of animated stone constructs itself. It stands twice your height and is decorated and painted to mimic that of a famed warlord. It will follow in your footsteps for the spell's duration, or until you use 1 action to command it to take one of the following actions:
-* **Attack:** The statue charges to strike. Make a melee conjuration attack against the target that you can see within 30 feet of the statue. On a hit, this attack deals 5d6 bludgeoning damage.
+* **Attack:** The statue charges to strike. Make a melee conjuration attack against a target that you can see within 30 feet of the statue. On a hit, this attack deals 5d6 bludgeoning damage.
 * **Defend:** The statue interposes itself between you and your enemies. This counts as using the [Raise Shield](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Combat/Melee/Raise/) action, giving you a +3 shield bonus vs melee and ranged attacks until the start of your next turn.
 * **Lift:** The status will lift one thing weighing 500 lbs. or less and move it up to 30 feet.
 

From 9409057f316cbc7f5a56d855e4d0b8c00c5773f8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 15:36:29 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 59/86] undid capitalisation

---
 Spells/1/Warding/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/1/Warding/index.md b/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
index a465e80d0..24b6040f0 100644
--- a/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
+++ b/Spells/1/Warding/index.md
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ When this spell is cast, you gain resistance to physical damage for the duration
 
 When you cast the spell, choose one of the following rites, the target of which must be within 10 feet of you throughout the casting.
 
-**Atonement.** You touch one willing creature who has broken an oath or breached their diety's principals. Make a DC 20 Warding check. On a successful check, the target is absolved of its transgressions. A creature can benefit from this rite once every 7 days.
+**Atonement.** You touch one willing creature who has broken an oath or breached their diety's principals. Make a DC 20 warding check. On a successful check, the target is absolved of its transgressions. A creature can benefit from this rite once every 7 days.
 
 **Bless Water.** You touch one vial of water and cause it to become holy water.
 

From 6427de1ee7518f6f6d86ae4e35d10e66ea79f014 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 15:37:06 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 60/86] Undid capitalisation

---
 Spells/2/Charms/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Charms/index.md b/Spells/2/Charms/index.md
index 09f07f842..af027add3 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Charms/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Charms/index.md
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 Take a stone stele and affix it into a point of your choosing when you cast this spell. The stele weighs 86 lbs, has 45 integrity and DR 8. The spell ends when the stele is reduced to 0 integrity, or until dispelled. 
 
-Any creature that attacks you within 20 feet of the stele must first make a Charisma defence check vs your Charms spell skill. On a success, the spell has no effect on the creature. On a failure, the creature is drawn to destroy the stele instead. An affected creature must use its actions to moves towards the stele and damage it. 
+Any creature that attacks you within 20 feet of the stele must first make a Charisma defence check vs your charms skill. On a success, the spell has no effect on the creature. On a failure, the creature is drawn to destroy the stele instead. An affected creature must use its actions to moves towards the stele and damage it. 
 
 At the end of each of its turns, a creature affected by this spell can make another Charisma defence check. 
 

From 5680f5857985565611a8716ce705b08e90fe8147 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 15:39:39 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 61/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/2/Evocation/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Evocation/index.md b/Spells/2/Evocation/index.md
index 7654b9479..4f4e1a835 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Evocation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Evocation/index.md
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ This spell blesses or curses an area in a 20-foot radius sphere centered on a po
 
 **Consecrate.** Undead cannot be created within or summoned into the area. If the consecrated area contains an altar, shrine, or other permanent fixture dedicated to your deity, pantheon, or aligned higher power, undead creatures within the area suffer -1d on attack rolls and other creatures gain +1d on attack rolls to hit them.
 
-**Desecrate.** Undead creatures created within or summoned into the area gain stamina equal to your spellcasting ability modifier. If the desecrated area contains an altar, shrine, or other permanent fixture dedicated to your deity or aligned higher power, undead creatures within the area gain +1d on attack rolls and other creatures suffer -1d to hit them.
+**Desecrate.** Undead creatures created within or summoned into the area gain stamina equal to your spellcasting attribute modifier. If the desecrated area contains an altar, shrine, or other permanent fixture dedicated to your deity or aligned higher power, undead creatures within the area gain +1d on attack rolls and other creatures suffer -1d to hit them.
 
 You cannot consecrate/desecrate an area with a similar fixture of a deity other than your own patron. Instead, the spell curses the area, cutting off its connection with the associated deity or power. This secondary function, if used, does not also grant the bonuses and penalties relating to undead, as given above.
 
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ On each of your turns before the spell ends, you can use 1 action to change the
 
 A silvery beam of pale light shines down in a 5-foot-radius, 40-foot-high cylinder centered on a point within range. Until the spell ends, dim light fills the cylinder.
 
-When the spell is first cast and at the end of each of your turns for the spell's duration, any creature within the spell's area is engulfed in ghostly flames that cause searing pain. Make a evocation spell attack vs the Constitution defence for each creature inside the area. On a hit, it takes 2d10 sacred damage, or half as much damage on a miss. Additionally, any creature that enters the spell's area for the first time on a turn must also make a Constitution defence check vs your evocation spell skill. It takes 2d10 sacred damage on a failed check, or half as much damage on a successful one.
+When the spell is first cast and at the end of each of your turns for the spell's duration, any creature within the spell's area is engulfed in ghostly flames that cause searing pain. Make a evocation attack vs the Constitution defence of each creature inside the area. On a hit, it takes 2d10 sacred damage, or half as much damage on a miss. Additionally, any creature that enters the spell's area for the first time on a turn must also make a Constitution defence check vs your evocation spell skill. It takes 2d10 sacred damage on a failed check, or half as much damage on a successful one.
 
 You gain +1d to hit shapechangers and they make their defence check with -1d. If one is hit or fails, it also instantly reverts to its original form and can't assume a different form until it leaves the spell's light.
 

From 4e7c57e47484e87f83bbc9bc0786be87e708a6b4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 15:41:02 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 62/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md
index 1373850eb..a5e4d0a56 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -13,6 +13,6 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S, M *(Incense and a book.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Until dispelled or triggered
 
-Light incense upon a book when you cast this spell. When a creature attempts to read the contents of the book, or attempts to cast a spell that lets them do so, it must make a Constituion defence check vs your necromancy spell skill. On a failure, they will be blinded for 1d6 days time. 
+Light incense upon a book when you cast this spell. When a creature attempts to read the contents of the book, or attempts to cast a spell that lets them do so, it must make a Constituion defence check vs your necromancy skill. On a failure, they will be blinded for 1d6 days time. 
 
 After one creature is cursed in this manner, the book is no longer protected.

From d11411c308c0a48e5d8180486467d32f7e761864 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 15:55:38 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 63/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md
index 76d7ba92d..82037b6d7 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ You touch a willing creature. Until the spell ends, the target's skin has a roug
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** 3 Days
 
-Make a transmutation spell attack vs a creature's Wisdom defence. On a hit, the creature becomes cursed for the duration of the spell. The victim of this spell grows hideously disfigured. The physical appearance of the deformity is subject to the caster’s whim (most demon worshipers choose deformities that reflect their Abyssal patron’s shape or form).
+Make a transmutation attack vs a creature's Wisdom defence. On a hit, the creature becomes cursed for the duration of the spell. The victim of this spell grows hideously disfigured. The physical appearance of the deformity is subject to the caster’s whim (most demon worshipers choose deformities that reflect their Abyssal patron’s shape or form).
 
 **At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a 3 or more mana, the spell's duration increases by 2 days for each additional mana.
 
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ Sprinkle the dust of a black ore onto clay, mud, soil, brick, limestone, or any
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A pinch of powdered iron.)*<br>
 **Duration:** 1 Minute (Concentration)
 
-You cause a creature or an object you can see within range to grow larger or smaller for the duration. Choose either a creature or an object that is neither worn nor carried. If the target is unwilling, make a transmutation spell attack vs the Constitution defence of the target. On a miss, the spell has no effect. If the target is a creature, everything it is wearing and carrying changes size with it. Any item dropped by an affected creature returns to normal size at once.
+You cause a creature or an object you can see within range to grow larger or smaller for the duration. Choose either a creature or an object that is neither worn nor carried. If the target is unwilling, make a transmutation attack vs the Constitution defence of the target. On a miss, the spell has no effect. If the target is a creature, everything it is wearing and carrying changes size with it. Any item dropped by an affected creature returns to normal size at once.
 
 **Enlarge.** The target's size doubles in all dimensions, and its weight is multiplied by eight. This growth increases its size by one category. If there isn't enough room for the target to double its size, the creature or object attains the maximum possible size in the space available. Until the spell ends, the target also has +1d on Strength checks, indirect attacks vs its Strength defence suffer -1d, and its walking speed increases by 5 feet. The target's weapons also grow to match its new size and deal 1d4 extra damage.
 
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ You cause a creature or an object you can see within range to grow larger or sma
 **Casting Time:** 2 Actions<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
 **Components:** V, S, M (A sheet of paper.)<br>
-**Duration:** Sustained, up to 10 mintues
+**Duration:** Sustained, up to 10 minutes
 
 You touch a willing creature while begging them to fly halfway around the world. The target gains a flying speed of 30 feet for the duration. This spell ends early if the target takes fire or radiant damage. When the spell ends, the target comes spiraling down, landing in a random location within a horizontal radius equal to their altitude when the spell ended.
 

From eaf5c18f5bc8ef9a68775e6863b7e5d283e14c6f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 15:57:40 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 64/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/2/Warding/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/2/Warding/index.md b/Spells/2/Warding/index.md
index aed85d64e..67394f49f 100644
--- a/Spells/2/Warding/index.md
+++ b/Spells/2/Warding/index.md
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 *You prepare a body making it dificult to return to the living.*
 
-You touch the body of a deceased creature, anointing it with the ceremonial oils and salts. If, within the next 10 days, a spell is cast upon it to return it to life, the reviving caster must first succeed on a restoration spell check vs your warding spell skill for the creature to return to life. 
+You touch the body of a deceased creature, anointing it with the ceremonial oils and salts. If, within the next 10 days, a spell is cast upon it to return it to life, the reviving caster must first succeed on a restoration check vs your warding skill for the creature to return to life. 
 
 ## Pass Without Trace
 *2nd level Ward*<br>

From 92e7f313659c642d4f5c2f0dbd552d3da19ac2d1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:01:36 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 65/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/3/Charm/index.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Charm/index.md b/Spells/3/Charm/index.md
index 670f22353..0a5f6335a 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Charm/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Charm/index.md
@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V<br>
 **Duration:** 1 Hour
 
-You address allies, staff, or innocent bystanders to exhort and inspire them to greatness, whether they have anything to get excited about or not. Choose up to five creatures within range that can hear you. For the duration, each affected creature gains 10 temporary hit points and attacks vs their Wisdom defence suffer disadvantage. If an affected creature takes damage, it has advantage on the next attack roll it makes. One round after an affected creature loses the temporary hit points granted by this spell, the spell ends for that creature.
+You address allies, staff, or innocent bystanders to exhort and inspire them to greatness, whether they have anything to get excited about or not. Choose up to five creatures within range that can hear you. For the duration, each affected creature gains 10 temporary hit points and attacks vs their Wisdom defence suffer -1d. If an affected creature takes damage, it has advantage on the next attack roll it makes. One round after an affected creature loses the temporary hit points granted by this spell, the spell ends for that creature.
 
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 4th level or higher, the temporary hit points increase by 5 for each slot level above 3rd.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 mana or more, the temporary hit points increase by 5 for each point of mana beyond the first.
 
 ## Psychic Spy
 *3rd Level Charm*<br>
@@ -24,4 +24,4 @@ You address allies, staff, or innocent bystanders to exhort and inspire them to
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Special, see text.
 
-With this spell, you can try to steal the elation from the mind of one humanoid you can see within 60 feet. Make a spell charm attack roll vs the Charisma defence of the target. On a hit, you can steal one beneficial effect that they currently possess, such as an ongoing spell (as long as its level is equal to or less than the slot level that psychic spy was cast from), temporary hit points, or possession of Bardic Inspiration dice. The effect ends for the target and transfers to you for the remainder of its normal duration. If the effect is being sustained, you must sustain it instead of the original caster.
+With this spell, you can try to steal the elation from the mind of one humanoid that you can see within 60 feet. Make a charm attack roll vs the Charisma defence of the target. On a hit, you can steal one beneficial effect that they currently possess, such as an ongoing spell (as long as its level is equal to or less than the level that psychic spy was cast at), temporary hit points, or possession of a Bardic Inspiration die. The effect ends for the target and transfers to you for the remainder of its normal duration. If the effect is being sustained, you must sustain it instead of the original caster.

From f04cc671ddb2342a251353acf4130c1e6cd3e48c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:10:59 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 66/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md
index c9de71946..392e9a4d2 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ You create 45 pounds of food and 30 gallons of water on the ground or in contain
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** 1 Round
 
-Cover your ears and close your eyes as a part of this spell's casting. Then, walk forward. Your body will descend underground, to a place no living or undead creature may follow. The following round, appear anywhere within 360 feet of your original location that you can see. When you emerge, one denizen of the underworld- of the GM's discretion - emerges with you, and will aggressively haunt wherever you appear.
+Cover your ears and close your eyes as a part of this spell's casting. Then, walk forward. Your body will descend underground, to a place where no living or undead creature may follow. The following round, appear anywhere within 360 feet of your original location that you can see. When you emerge, one denizen of the underworld - of the GM's discretion - emerges with you, and will aggressively haunt wherever you appear.
 
 ## Set Loose the Crocodiles
 *3rd level Conjuration*<br>
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Cover your ears and close your eyes as a part of this spell's casting. Then, wal
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-A moat 20 feet deep, 10 feet wide, and with a radius 30 feet away from you is suddenly carved into the earth and filled with water. If these dimensions cannot be met, then the moat tears through any non-magical obstructions to form itself. Inside of the moat, countless crocodiles. Creatures who attempt to swim or leap across must make a Athletics check or take 1d6 damage as they are pulled in. Creatures in the moat cannot move, and take 3d6 damage every turn until they succeed at the Athletics check and can swim out. 
+A moat 20 feet deep, 10 feet wide, and with a radius 30 feet away from you is suddenly carved into the earth and filled with water. If these dimensions cannot be met, then the moat tears through any non-magical obstructions to form itself. Inside of the moat, countless crocodiles. Creatures who attempt to swim or leap across must make an [Athletics](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Skills/Athletics/) check or take 1d6 damage as they are pulled in. Creatures in the moat cannot move, and take 3d6 damage every turn until they succeed at the [Athletics](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Skills/Athletics/) check and can swim out. 
 
 ## Transfigure Dust into Vermin
 *3rd level Conjuration*<br>
@@ -40,6 +40,6 @@ A moat 20 feet deep, 10 feet wide, and with a radius 30 feet away from you is su
 **Components:** S<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to one minute
 
-Point to a creature within range. Unseen motes of dust that lie upon the creature are turned into lice, rats, and scorpions. The vermin swarm them, biting and gnawing, dealing 6d6 piercing damage.  This damage continues until the target brings fire to the vermin, or the spell is dispelled.
+Point to a creature within range. Unseen motes of dust that lie upon the creature are turned into lice, rats and scorpions. The vermin swarm them, biting and gnawing, dealing 6d6 piercing damage. This damage continues until the target brings fire to the vermin, or the spell is dispelled.
 
 **At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, the damage increases by 1d6 for each additional mana.

From 4a81afb3e4fd9ba9d9e1d5be251e8bab9be38dbd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:12:43 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 67/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/3/Divination/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Divination/index.md b/Spells/3/Divination/index.md
index f06fafd80..b01d088a8 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Divination/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Divination/index.md
@@ -13,6 +13,6 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 10 minutes
 
-Stare at the sun when you cast this spell and do not look away until you wish it to end. While staring into the sun, you shall see anything that the sun could see, in any part of the word. You can see it as close as if you were 10 feet above ground. After you have looked away from the sun, you are [blinded](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Blinded/) for 1d4 hours.
+Stare at the sun when you cast this spell and do not look away until you wish it to end. While staring into the sun, you shall see anything that the sun could see, in any part of the world. You can see it as close as if you were 10 feet above ground. After you have looked away from the sun, you are [blinded](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Blinded/) for 1d4 hours.
 
 At night this spell has no effect, and it cannot be used indoors.

From 5cf203f00a09e114ec2264916039c2a55a09daa5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:13:51 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 68/86] Reviewed GFAtWW

---
 Spells/3/Evocation/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md b/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md
index 8049eb0c1..83be777fe 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md
@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** 1 Round
 
-Lift your hands and sing to all the seas you cannot sea. A 30 foot radius of space around you is filled with churning, crashing waves of white-crested green water. Creatures in the water begin [suffocating](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Adventuring/TheEnvironment/Suffocating/) and thus cannot speak or cast spells with verbal components, unless under an effect that allows them to breah in water.
+Lift your hands and sing to all the seas you cannot sea. A 30 foot radius of space around you is filled with churning, crashing waves of white-crested green water. Creatures in the water begin [suffocating](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Adventuring/TheEnvironment/Suffocating/) and thus cannot speak or cast spells with verbal components, unless under an effect that allows them to breath in water.
 
-Make an evocation spell attack roll vs the Strength defence of each creature in the area of the spell. On a hit, they take 3d8 bludgeoning damage and are picked up and deposited prone at a location of the spellcaster's choice within the area of the spell. On a miss, the creature takes half as much damage and remains unmoved. After 1 round, the waves dissipate, returning to their distant homes.
+Make an evocation attack roll vs the Strength defence of each creature in the area of the spell. On a hit, they take 3d8 bludgeoning damage and are picked up and deposited prone at a location of the spellcaster's choice within the area of the spell. On a miss, the creature takes half as much damage and remains unmoved. After 1 round, the waves dissipate, returning to their distant homes.
 
 **At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, the damage increases by 1d8 for each additional mana.
 

From 7c923f7208c06ef90a218ef7d9f554f866c210ba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:15:58 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 69/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/3/Evocation/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md b/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md
index 83be777fe..f9d5ee626 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Evocation/index.md
@@ -39,4 +39,4 @@ You can send the message across any distance and even to other planes of existen
 
 You scatter minerals strange and esoteric as a part of this spell's casting. A 30-foot cube magical zone is created originating from you. All metal objects not held or worn are thrown out of it with haste, as are objects made of stone or bone. 
 
-Make an evocation spell atack vs the Strength defence of any creature within the area holding or wearing any such object. On a hit, any such held object is pulled out of their hands, landing in a space of your choice immediately outside of the area. Additionally, any creature wearing any such object is pushed 10 feet in a direction of your choice. On a miss, this spell has no effect on a creature.
+Make an evocation atack vs the Strength defence of any creature within the area holding or wearing any such object. On a hit, any such held object is pulled out of their hands, landing in a space of your choice immediately outside of the area. Additionally, any creature wearing any such object is pushed 10 feet in a direction of your choice. On a miss, this spell has no effect on a creature.

From 10527d43c6b52d00ab10de9e9705a3f9cb9041f2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:16:50 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 70/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/3/Illusion/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Illusion/index.md b/Spells/3/Illusion/index.md
index 127118913..71572a329 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Illusion/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Illusion/index.md
@@ -13,6 +13,6 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A white feather or the heart of a hen.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-You project a phantasmal image of a creature’s worst fears. Make an illusion spell attack roll vs the Wisdom defence of each creature in a 30-foot cone. On a hit, the creatures drop whatever they are holding and become [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) for the duration.
+You project a phantasmal image of a creature’s worst fears. Make an illusion attack roll vs the Wisdom defence of each creature in a 30-foot cone. On a hit, the creatures drop whatever they are holding and become [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) for the duration.
 
-While [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) by this spell, a creature must [Stride](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Combat/Moves/Stride/) and move away from you by the safest available route on each of its turns, unless there is nowhere to move. If the creature ends its turn in a location where it doesn't have line of sight to you, the creature can make a Wisdom defence check. On a successful check, the spell ends for that creature.
+While [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) by this spell, a creature must [Stride](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Combat/Moves/Stride/) and move away from you by the safest available route on each of its turns, unless there is nowhere to move. If the creature ends its turn in a location where it doesn't have line of sight to you, the creature can make a Wisdom defence check. On a success, the spell ends for that creature.

From fcb02c09667a82771d4784f11e90f3bc5662dacd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:18:05 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 71/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md
index 479b9d14d..387215f21 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -13,4 +13,4 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 10 minutes
 
-Work a short ceremony that loosens your soul from your body. While your soul is loosened, it can slip out of your body and move up to 10 feet away, sliding through walls or doors. You see and hear whatever is within the same area or space as your soul.
+You work a short ceremony that loosens your soul from your body. While your soul is loosened, it can slip out of your body and move up to 20 feet away, sliding through walls or doors. You see and hear whatever is within the same area or space as your soul.

From 80d239359dcc38f9c892d0004d36230cdcf22f8f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:19:21 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 72/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md
index 716d6751a..fb62e8bd0 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -13,6 +13,6 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V,S<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
  
-Billowing flames grant you explosive speed. For the duration, your speed increases by 10 feet and moving doesn’t provoke opportunity attacks. When you move within 5 feet of a creature or an object that isn’t being worn or carried, it takes 1d6 fire damage from your trail of heat. A creature or object can take this damage only once during a turn.
+Billowing flames grant you explosive speed. For the duration, your speed increases by 10 feet and moving doesn’t provoke opportunity attacks of opportunity. When you move within 5 feet of a creature or an object that isn’t being worn or carried, it takes 1d6 fire damage from your trail of heat. A creature or object can take this damage only once during a turn.
 
 **At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, your speed increases by 5 feet and the spell deals an additional 1d6 fire damage for each additional mana.

From 9849c1c1da6013df76d1ce363c5a546bd2f60730 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:27:42 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 73/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/3/Warding/index.md | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Warding/index.md b/Spells/3/Warding/index.md
index 9894e28de..7fae271dd 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Warding/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Warding/index.md
@@ -13,18 +13,18 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Choose one creature, object, or magical effect within range. Any spell of 3rd level or lower on the target ends. For each spell of 4th level or higher on the target, make warding spell ability check. The DC equals 10 + the spell's level. On a successful check, the spell ends.
+Choose one creature, object, or magical effect within range. Any spell of 3rd level or lower on the target ends. For each spell of 4th level or higher on the target, make a warding check. The DC equals 10 + the spell's level. On a successful check, the spell ends.
 
-**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, you automatically end the effects of a spell on the target if the spell's level is equal to or less than the mana that you used.
+**At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, you automatically end the effects of a spell on the target if the spell's level is equal to or less than the amount of mana that you used.
 
 ### Counterspell
-As a special use of the dispel magic spell, you may attempt to interrupt a creature in the process of casting a spell as a free action. If the creature is casting a spell of 3rd level or lower, its spell fails and has no effect. If it is casting a spell of 4th level or higher, it makes a spell skill check using the skill of spell school being cast modified by the spell's level vs your warding spell skil, modified by *counterspell*'s level. On a failure, the creature's spell fails and has no effect.
+As a special use of the dispel magic spell, you may attempt to interrupt a creature in the process of casting a spell as a free action. If the creature is casting a spell of 3rd level or lower, its spell fails and has no effect. If it is casting a spell of 4th level or higher, it makes an attack roll using the spell school being cast modified by the spell's level vs your warding skil, modified by *Counterspell*'s level. On a failure, the creature's spell fails and has no effect.
 
-For example, if a level wizard with 18 intelligence casts a 3rd level *counterspell* vs a 5th level *cone of cold* spell cast by a Mage with 17 intelligence, the Mage makes a proficient roll with an attack bonus of:
+For example, if a character with 18 intelligence who is trained in warding casts a 3rd level *Counterspell* vs a 5th level *Cone of Cold* spell cast by a Mage with 17 intelligence, then the Mage makes a trained roll with an attack bonus of:
 
 <center>
 
-<strong>+4 Intelligence +5 <em>cone of cold</em> spell level = +9 attack bonus</strong>
+<strong>+4 Intelligence +5 <em>Cone of Cold</em> spell level = +9 attack bonus</strong>
 
 </center>
 
@@ -32,16 +32,16 @@ vs a DC of:
 
 <center>
 
-<strong>10 +4 Intelligence +4 proficiency +3 <em>counterspell</em> level = DC 21</strong>
+<strong>10 +4 Intelligence +4 training +3 <em>counterspell</em> level = DC 21</strong>
 
 </center>
 
-You can only *counterspell* when another creature that you can see casts a spell within 60 feet of you. In order to be ready to *counterspell*, you must on your own turn declare the conditions under which you will cast *counterspell*. If you wish to upcast *counterspell* then you must declare this in advance. You may only cast *counterspell* once per round.
+You can only *Counterspell* when another creature that you can see casts a spell within 60 feet of you. In order to be ready to *Counterspell*, you must on your own turn declare the conditions under which you will cast *Counterspell*. If you wish to upcast *counterspell* then you must declare this in advance. You may only cast *Counterspell* once per round.
 
 The conditions must be specific. For example:
-* I will *counterspell* the first spell that the mage casts.
-* I will *counterspell* at 6th level the first evocation spell that the lich casts.
-* I will *counterspell* the first spell attempting to heal the hobgoblin warlord.
+* I will *Counterspell* the first spell that the mage casts.
+* I will *Counterspell* at 6th level the first evocation spell that the lich casts.
+* I will *Counterspell* the first spell attempting to heal the hobgoblin warlord.
 
 **At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, the targeted spellcaster's defence is reduced as described above.
 
@@ -52,6 +52,6 @@ The conditions must be specific. For example:
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A polished opal worth at least 1000 gp.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Make an melee attack roll vs a creature that is posessed or under the influence of a minor curse. On a hit, you grab the creature by the throat and press a polished opal to its forehead.
+Make an unarmed attack roll vs a creature that is posessed or under the influence of a minor curse. On a hit, you grab the creature by the throat and press a polished opal to its forehead.
 
 Make a warding attack roll against vs the Charisma defence of the posessing creature, or the DC of the curse. On a hit, when you pull the opal back and the curse or entity posessing the creature will exit the creature in the form of black, ichor-filled vomit. Afterwards, the creature is no longer cursed or possessed.

From f0d9f948bacbae3d2f86de1016f5207967d8c79c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:38:44 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 74/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/4/Charms/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Charms/index.md b/Spells/4/Charms/index.md
index 807cb4a78..2d8e13c11 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Charms/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Charms/index.md
@@ -13,4 +13,4 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A dagger worth at least 50gp.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-Slice your hand open with a ceremonial dagger and take 1d6 damage when you cast this spell. Point your cut hand towards a creature that can see you within range and make a charm spell attack vs the Wisdom defence of the target. On a hit, the target will exert all of its efforts to attack as many creatures as it can other than your for the duration.
+Slice your hand open with a ceremonial dagger and take 1d6 damage when you cast this spell. Point your cut hand towards a creature that can see you within range and make a charm attack vs the Wisdom defence of the target. On a hit, the target will exert all of its efforts to attack as many creatures as it can *other* than you for the duration.

From 0eaf65fe3aa364fc5fbf6bca413cea5b58635f0e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:48:39 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 75/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/4/Divination/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Divination/index.md b/Spells/4/Divination/index.md
index 06fb8f143..f58f9cd23 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Divination/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Divination/index.md
@@ -13,4 +13,4 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S, M *(A wax figure and a lock of hair from a living creature.)<br>
 **Duration:** Special
 
-Present a waxen figure you have made as a part of casting this spell and affix to the figure the hair of another living creature. Whatever the figure feels so too will the living creature, though it will suffer no other ill effects from the figure's defacing. You may the manipulate the figure 10 times before this spell ends.
+Present a waxen figure that you have made as a part of casting this spell and affix to the figure the hair of another living creature. Whatever the figure feels so too will the living creature, though it will suffer no other ill effects from the figure's defacing. You may the manipulate the figure 10 times before this spell ends.

From af229144d396ec156f6c9aac84107368a07e6a76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 16:51:05 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 76/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/4/Evocation/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Evocation/index.md b/Spells/4/Evocation/index.md
index 946808631..dd34c0990 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Evocation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Evocation/index.md
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-The next time you hit a creature with a ranged weapon attack during this spell's duration, a dazzling burst of radiant energy erupts on impact, releasing a concussive clap that is audible out to 300 feet. The attack deals an extra 2d6 sacred damage and 2d6 sonic damage to the target and disorients nearby creatures. Additionally, make an evocation attack roll vs the Constitution defence of the target of the attack and each creature within 5 feet of it. On a hit, a creature becomes [blinded](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Blinded/) and [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) until the start of your next turn.
+The next time that you hit a creature with a ranged weapon attack during this spell's duration, a dazzling burst of radiant energy erupts on impact, releasing a concussive clap that is audible out to 300 feet. The attack deals an extra 2d6 sacred damage and 2d6 sonic damage to the target and disorients nearby creatures. Additionally, make an evocation attack roll vs the Constitution defence of the target of the attack and each creature within 5 feet of it. On a hit, a creature becomes [blinded](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Blinded/) and [deafened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Deafened/) until the start of your next turn.
 
 ## Shimmering Light
 *4th Level Evocation*<br>
@@ -22,4 +22,4 @@ The next time you hit a creature with a ranged weapon attack during this spell's
 **Components:** V, S, M (A miniature replica of a mission bell.)<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-You shine a light towards a creature you can see within range, causing their head to grow heavy and their sight to grow dim, such that they might need to stop for the night. Make an evocation spell attack roll vs the target's Wisdom defence. On a hit, they are [blinded](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Blinded/) for the duration and gain 1 level of [exhaustion](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Exhaustion/). The target can make a Wisdom defence check vs your evocatino spell skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the blindness effect on a success.
+You shine a light towards a creature you can see within range, causing their head to grow heavy and their sight to grow dim, such that they might need to stop for the night. Make an evocation attack roll vs the target's Wisdom defence. On a hit, they are [blinded](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Blinded/) for the duration and gain 1 level of [exhaustion](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Exhaustion/). The target can make a Wisdom defence check vs your evocation skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the blindness effect on a success.

From d416aeaef292ca83b2abbdc6854fcade8c778442 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lorekeeper <69066156+twclifton77@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 10:17:32 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 77/86] phrasing

---
 Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md
index fb62e8bd0..b1a189e28 100644
--- a/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/3/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -13,6 +13,6 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V,S<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
  
-Billowing flames grant you explosive speed. For the duration, your speed increases by 10 feet and moving doesn’t provoke opportunity attacks of opportunity. When you move within 5 feet of a creature or an object that isn’t being worn or carried, it takes 1d6 fire damage from your trail of heat. A creature or object can take this damage only once during a turn.
+Billowing flames grant you explosive speed. For the duration, your speed increases by 10 feet and moving doesn’t provoke attacks of opportunity. When you move within 5 feet of a creature or an object that isn’t being worn or carried, it takes 1d6 fire damage from your trail of heat. A creature or object can take this damage only once during a turn.
 
 **At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 4 or more mana, your speed increases by 5 feet and the spell deals an additional 1d6 fire damage for each additional mana.

From ef97a5566a5cfac3b831ec19cb7c84dc2ce137ac Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 17:20:37 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 78/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md
index e5d420896..c4f9d5b41 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-You create an invisible hand and use it to reach into a creature you can see within 120 feet, taking hold of their heart and slowly tearing it apart. Make a ranged necromancy spell attack against the creature. On a hit, the target takes 4d8 profane damage and the hand continues to cling to their heart for the spell's duration.
+You create an invisible hand and use it to reach into a creature that you can see within 120 feet, taking hold of their heart and slowly tearing it apart. Make a ranged necromancy attack against the creature. On a hit, the target takes 4d8 profane damage and the hand continues to cling to their heart for the spell's duration.
 
-As long as the hand clings to the target's heart, they cannot regain stamina, and they take 2d8 profane damage at the start of each of their turns. The target can make a Charisma defence check vs your necromancy spell skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the spell on a success.
+As long as the hand clings to the target's heart, they cannot regain stamina and they take 2d8 profane damage at the start of each of their turns. The target can make a Charisma defence check vs your necromancy skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the spell on a success.
 
 ## Paint a Curse Upon the Tomb
 *4th level Necromancy (Ritual)*<br>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ As long as the hand clings to the target's heart, they cannot regain stamina, an
 **Components:** V, S, M *(Cermonial paints.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-As a part of this spell, drench an object in the same paints used to adorn the tombs of god-kings and god-queens. Any creature that takes the object other than you is cursed. A cursed creature has a -1d to all attack rolls, defences, and ability checks. If this results in a miss or failure for any reason, the creature suffers 1d6 profane damage. This curse persists until somehow dispelled, or if the cursed object is destroyed by fire.
+As a part of this spell, drench an object in the same paints used to adorn the tombs of god-kings and god-queens. Any creature that takes the object other than you is cursed. A cursed creature has a -1d to all attack rolls, defences and skill checks. If this results in a miss or failure for any reason, the creature suffers 1d6 profane damage. This curse persists until somehow dispelled, or if the cursed object is destroyed by fire.
 
 ## Ruin That Which Ruins Me
 *4th level Necromancy*<br>

From 82222df7898c438269db1f3458e715257f74167c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 18:49:29 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 79/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md
index 02ced577c..ca0d9b1c1 100644
--- a/Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/4/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -15,4 +15,4 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 *The universal muse comes over you, inspiring you to break it all down.*
 
-Choose two willing humanoids that you can see within range. The targets exchange one feature (other than spellcasting) with each other, losing their ability but gaining access to the other party's ability for the duration. For example, you could choose a barbarian and a bard, granting the Bardic Inspiration feature to the barbarian and Rage to the bard. A creature cannot gain an ability it already has through this spell, and abilities that have limited uses are not recharged at any point: the creature gaining the ability inherits however many uses were remaining at the time the spell was cast, and the original owner of the ability is left with only as many uses as were unspent at the end of the spell's duration.
+Choose two willing humanoids that you can see within range. The targets exchange one talent (other than spellcasting) with each other, losing their ability but gaining access to the other party's talent for the duration. For example, you could choose barbarian and bard talents, granting the Bardic Inspiration feature to the barbarian and Rage to the bard. A creature cannot gain an ability that it already has through this spell, and abilities that have limited uses are not recharged at any point: the creature gaining the ability inherits however many uses were remaining at the time the spell was cast, and the original owner of the ability is left with only as many uses as were unspent at the end of the spell's duration.

From 082490e22eae7a9c799b67ccce59cc21a0b06bc1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 18:50:24 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 80/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/5/Charm/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Charm/index.md b/Spells/5/Charm/index.md
index 2c312c720..1be541e8a 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Charm/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Charm/index.md
@@ -13,4 +13,4 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-This is one of the words of power. Utter it, and one creature whose hand you hold will be able to cast any 1 spell you can currently cast of their choice. Once cast, they will be compelled by fate to do you a single favor.
+This is one of the words of power. Utter it, and one creature whose hand you hold will be able to cast any 1 spell that you can currently cast of their choice. Once cast, they will be compelled by fate to do you a single favour.

From c74172edaac62ea7ee5b85fa66886906c285fbca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 18:57:05 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 81/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md
index dd086f940..c09efad13 100644
--- a/Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/7/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 
 A nonmagical wall of bricks and mortar springs into existence at a point you choose within range. The wall is 6 inches thick and is composed of twenty 10-foot-by-10-foot panels. Each panel must be contiguous with at least one other panel. Alternatively, you can create 10-foot-by-5-foot panels that are 16 inches thick, incorporating a 4-inch cavity. If a space would be surrounded below and on all four sides by the wall (or the wall and another solid surface), the spell can create a pitched roof of tile and timber to create a fully enclosed volume. Roof sections do not count towards the total number of panels conjured by the spell.
 
-If the wall cuts through a creature’s space when it appears, the creature is pushed to one side of the wall (your choice). If a creature would be surrounded on all sides by the wall (or the wall and another solid surface), make a conjuration spell attack roll vs their Dexterity defence. On a miss, it moves up to its speed so that it is no longer enclosed by the wall.
+If the wall cuts through a creature’s space when it appears, the creature is pushed to one side of the wall (your choice). If a creature would be surrounded on all sides by the wall (or the wall and another solid surface), make a conjuration attack roll vs their Dexterity defence. On a miss, it moves up to its speed so that it is no longer enclosed by the wall.
     
 The wall can have any shape you desire, though it can’t occupy the same space as a creature or object. The wall doesn't need to be vertical or rest on any firm foundation. It must, however, merge with and be solidly supported by existing structures or landforms. Thus, you can use this spell to bridge a chasm, create a ramp, or build a cantilevered annex onto an existing building.
 

From aee72477a55d37d3e125308deadc946ebb2de944 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 20:13:02 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 82/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md b/Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md
index 7ae3d6930..716efa4f3 100644
--- a/Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md
+++ b/Spells/6/Conjuration/index.md
@@ -22,4 +22,4 @@ You must know the true name of a demon to cast this spell. You must also anoint
 **Components:** V, S, M<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-You must have fashioned from clay an animal the size of a small hut before casting this spell. This spell is cast on this the idol. The idol turns into a flesh-and-blood version of itself, intelligent, sentient, and speaking all languages. It has stamina equal to 2 times your Constituion score. It will serve you loyally as a sage or as a warrior. When it attacks, make a melee conjuration spell attack roll and deals 3d6 damage of a type appropriate to its form on a hit. The animal has all the traits of whatever animal you sculpted it after. When it dies, is dispelled, or is exorcised, it turns into clay and shatters.
+You must have fashioned from clay an animal the size of a small hut before casting this spell. This spell is cast on this idol. The idol turns into a flesh-and-blood version of itself; intelligent, sentient and speaking all languages. It has stamina equal to 3 times your spellcasting attribute score. It will serve you loyally as a sage or as a warrior. When it attacks, make a melee conjuration attack roll and it deals 3d6 damage of a type appropriate to its form on a hit. The animal has all the traits of whatever animal you sculpted it after. When it dies, is dispelled, or is exorcised, it turns into clay and shatters.

From 2f033d9f92084a84f4d010ea461bdcb7b6c651b9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 20:16:35 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 83/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md b/Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md
index 677a81cf6..b420233bf 100644
--- a/Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/6/Transmutation/index.md
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Further, if you make only half as much *ironwood* as the spell would normally al
 You utter a word of power. This utterance forces the world to serve you. 
 
 You can use this spell to perform one of the following effects:
-* Part water up to 10 feet deep.
+* Part water up to 100 feet deep.
 * Lower the water level of a body of water by 50%.
 * You can create weather of any kind.
 * Raise up great walls 100 feet tall and 500 feet wide. 

From 5c2b2aed1c7dc34cad6b093b822cd41884e0e837 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 20:19:55 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 84/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/5/Evocation/index.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Evocation/index.md b/Spells/5/Evocation/index.md
index 317c328d0..c6ea7c1cc 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Evocation/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Evocation/index.md
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ grand_parent: Spells
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** 1 Round
 
-Make an evocation spell attack roll vs the Charisma defence of a creature that you have seen within the last round. On a hit, it vanishes at the start of its last turn, being thrown to another point in time such that its actions on that turn never happened. At the start of its next turn, the target reappears where it was or in the closest unoccupied space. The target doesn't remember you casting the spell or being affected by it.
+Make an evocation attack roll vs the Charisma defence of a creature that you have seen within the last round. On a hit, it vanishes at the start of its last turn, being thrown to another point in time, such that its actions on that turn never happened. At the start of its next turn, the target reappears where it was or in the closest unoccupied space. The target doesn't remember you casting the spell or being affected by it.
 
 **At Higher Levels.** When you cast this spell using 6 or more mana, you can target one additional creature within range for each additional mana. All targets must be within 30 feet of each other.
 
@@ -26,4 +26,4 @@ Make an evocation spell attack roll vs the Charisma defence of a creature that y
 
 *You do the fandango and call down a very, very frightening blast of energy.*
 
-Make an evocation spell attack roll vs the Dexterity defence of each creature in the 20-foot area centered on a point you can see within range. On a hit, a target takes 4d6 sonic and 4d6 electric damage and becomes [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) of you for the duration; on a miss, it takes half as much damage and is not [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/). A [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) creature can make a Wisdom defence check vs your evocation spell skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the effect for themselves on a success.
+Make an evocation attack roll vs the Dexterity defence of each creature in a 20-foot area centered on a point that you can see within range. On a hit, a target takes 4d6 sonic and 4d6 electric damage and becomes [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) of you for the duration; on a miss, it takes half as much damage and is not [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/). A [frightened](https://stormchaserroleplaying.com/stormchaserRPG/Conditions/Frightened/) creature can make a Wisdom defence check vs your evocation skill at the end of each of their turns, ending the effect for themselves on a success.

From 4a4aa282628657fcf4cd91d71cf386759b41db8f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 20:27:22 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 85/86] Reviewed

---
 Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md | 8 +++++---
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md b/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md
index 48f76bfca..10ae87653 100644
--- a/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md
+++ b/Spells/5/Necromancy/index.md
@@ -34,13 +34,15 @@ Raise Dead can be cast as a ritual.
 **Components:** V, S, M (The skull of a fighter.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Sustained, up to 1 minute
 
-You may only cast this spell while having the skull of a fighting-man in your inventory. You gain their Strength score and martial weapon proficiencies, as well as the ability to use all armour and shields for the duration. 
+You may only cast this spell while having the skull of a fighting-man in your inventory. You gain their Strength score and weapon proficiencies, as well as the ability to use all armour and shields for the duration. 
 
 ## Walk Again, Those Countless Dead
 *5th level Necromancy (Ritual)*<br>
 **Casting Time:** 1 Minute<br>
 **Range:** Touch<br>
-**Components:** V, S, M *(Flesh from the face of a deac man.)*<br>
+**Components:** V, S, M *(Flesh from the face of a dead man.)*<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-You call forth the dead to serve you. Roll your recovery die to determine the number of undead that you can raise. Note that the skeletons or dead bodies must be available in order to animate them. The spell lasts until dispelled or the animated dead are done away with.
+You call forth the dead to serve you. Roll 1d6 to determine the number of undead that you can raise. Note that the skeletons or dead bodies must be available in order to animate them. The spell lasts until dispelled or the animated dead are done away with.
+
+**At Higher Levels:** When you cast this spell using 6 or more mana, the number of undead that you can raise increases by 1d6 for every point of mana beyond the fifth.

From 2644a2a0cf7e2259ac93356f3b7cfa43266882aa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle <stormchaserroleplaying@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 20:37:21 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 86/86] Reviewed

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 Spells/6/Necromancy/index.md | 10 +++++-----
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@@ -24,15 +24,15 @@ You must have access to the corpse of a creature with its head attached before y
 
 You can cast this spell when a humanoid that you could see died within 60 feet of you within the last round. You snatch its soul as it dies and trap it inside the tiny cage that you use for the material component. A stolen soul remains inside the cage until the spell ends or until you destroy the cage, which ends the spell. 
 
-While you have a soul inside the cage and you are holding the cage, you can exploit it in any of the ways described below. You can use a trapped soul up to six times. Once you exploit a soul for the sixth time, it is released, and the spell ends. While a soul is trapped, the dead humanoid that it came from can’t be revived.
+While you have a soul inside the cage and you are holding the cage, you can exploit it in any of the ways described below. You can use a trapped soul up to six times. Once you exploit a soul for the sixth time, it is released and the spell ends. While a soul is trapped, the dead humanoid that it came from can’t be revived.
 
-**Steal Life.** You can use 2 actions to drain vigour from the soul and regain 2d8 stamina.
+**Steal Life.** You can use an action to drain vigour from the soul and regain 2d8 stamina.
 
 **Query Soul.** You ask the soul a question (no action required) and receive a brief telepathic answer, which you can understand regardless of the language used. The soul knows only what it knew in life, but it must answer you truthfully and to the best of its ability. The answer is no more than a sentence or two and might be cryptic.
 
-**Borrow Experience.** You can use 1 action to bolster yourself with the soul’s life experience, granting a +1d to your next attack roll, defence or ability check. If you don't use this benefit before the start of your next turn, it is lost.
+**Borrow Experience.** You can use 1 action to bolster yourself with the soul’s life experience, granting a +1d to your next attack roll, defence, or skill check. If you don't use this benefit before the start of your next turn, it is lost.
 
-**Eyes of the Dead.** You can use 2 actions to name a place the humanoid saw in life, which creates an invisible sensor somewhere in that place if it is on the plane of existence that you're currently on. The sensor remains for as long as you sustain the effect, up to 10 minutes (as if you were sustaining a spell). You receive visual and auditory information from the sensor as if you were in its space using your senses. A creature that can see the sensor (such as one using *see invisibility* or *truesight*) sees a translucent image of the tormented humanoid whose soul you caged.
+**Eyes of the Dead.** You can use 2 actions to name a place that the humanoid saw in life, which creates an invisible sensor somewhere in that place if it is on the plane of existence that you are currently on. The sensor remains for as long as you sustain the effect, up to 10 minutes (as if you were sustaining a spell). You receive visual and auditory information from the sensor as if you were in its space using your senses. A creature that can see the sensor (such as one using *see invisibility* or *truesight*) sees a translucent image of the tormented humanoid whose soul you caged.
 
 ## Unluck of the Doomsday
 *6th level Necromancy*<br>
@@ -41,4 +41,4 @@ While you have a soul inside the cage and you are holding the cage, you can expl
 **Components:** V, S<br>
 **Duration:** Instantaneous
 
-Stare at the creature whom you are cursing and roll 1d8. In a number hours equal to the roll, the creature must succeed at a Wisdom defence check vs your necromancy spell skill. On a failure, if it has less than 20 stamina it will die.
+Stare at the creature whom you are cursing and roll 1d20. In a number of days equal to the roll, the creature must succeed at a Wisdom defence check vs your necromancy skill, or die. On a failure, it dies only if it has less than 20 stamina.