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Update index.mdx #232

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@imhamad imhamad commented Jul 10, 2024

Added some more clarity to 2nd line for better flow and readability.

To be more specific, irrespective is replaced by regardless for better readibility.

Added some more clarity to 2nd line for better flow and readability.

To be more specific, irrespective is replaced by regardless for better readibility.

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@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ description: "If you want to make your software applications more sustainable an

Do you want to be a part of the green software movement?

If you want to make your software applications more sustainable and build a career in green software, then this training is for you. It will teach you how to build, maintain and run greener applications irrespective of the application domain, industry, organization size or type, programming language, or framework.
If you want to make your software applications more sustainable and build a career in green software, then this training is for you. It will teach you how to build, maintain, and run greener applications, regardless of the application domain, industry, organization size or type, programming language, or framework.
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somehow, I would not add extra comma here after maintain and applications, but I like regardless more than irrespective. .

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Sweet! Let's add regardless and remove the comma @franziska-warncke

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Done @franziska-warncke , happy for you to check and merge accordingly

As requested by @franziska-warncke the comma "," has been removed and the word regardless stayed as is, 

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As requested by @franziska-warncke the comma "," has been eradicated and the word regardless stayed as is,

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Looks good 🌻

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@russelltrow Please have a look and merge it! Thanks :)

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imhamad commented Jul 23, 2024 via email

@russelltrow russelltrow merged commit 1aca5ff into Green-Software-Foundation:main Jul 30, 2024
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