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diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/0/0.md b/english/time-travel/0/0/0.md
@@ -5,5 +5,5 @@
 What do you want to do 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♂️?
 
 - [Travel back to the future 🌠](../1/1.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
 - [🥣 Search for food](../7/7.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/1/1.md b/english/time-travel/0/1/1.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 **Your time machine broke. 💔**
 
-*Instead of travelling at speed of light, it travels at speed much larger than it 🌠🌠💫.*
+*Your time machine uncontrollably accelerates to over 10X the speed of light 🌠🌠💫.*
 
-You are thrown out of it while travelling and your body is torn up 🩸.
+Your body is violently throw out and torn up whilst attempting the return journey 🩸
 
 You. Are. Dead.
 💀☠😐⚰

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You are untying woman 👩.**
+**You untie the woman 👩.**
 
-She is so happy and kissing you on the cheek 😘. She tells you, that better to hurry up and go from this place, because she saw two more werewolves 🐺.
+She is so happy, she can hardly stop kissing you 😘. As the adrenaline wears off, she warns you it's not safe here. Her memory isn't clear, but she swears she saw two more werewolves 🐺 nearby.
 
-You can see bushes 🌳 deeper in the ravine. You are sure you can cut them with your machate 🔪.
+You look around, hoping to make a plan. You see a patch of bushes 🌳 at the end of the clearing. You think to yourself that it's either forwards 🔪 or backwards...
 
 - [🏞️ Go back through the gorge](10-1A.md)
 - [🌳 Cut 🔪 the bushes](10-1B.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1A.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1A.md
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
-**You are trying to go back the way you came here 🏞️.**
+**You turn back to face the darkness of the gorge that brought you here 🏞️.**
 
-Suddenly two werewolves 🐺 appears from both sides.
+*Two smaller werewolves 🐺🐺 emerge from the sliver of blackness in the gorge*
 
 You don't have the strength 😫 to fight anymore.
 
-They attack you both. 
+They ambush you both. 
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You die<!-- a virgin --> ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1B.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1B.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 **You cut the bushes 🌳.**
 
-It turns out that this path leads to the river on which you walked earlier!
+This path leads back to the river!
 
-This is a place where the river is shallow so there will be no problem with crossing.
+The river is shallow here and you both have no problems crossing the river.
 
-Soon, you are in your shelter ⛺ with beautiful woman 👩
+Soon, you are back in your shelter ⛺ with this beautiful woman 👩
 
 - [Stay there and start living with woman 👩](10-1BA)
 - [🌠 Go back to your times](../1800-won)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1BA.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-1BA.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 **Congratulations! 🥳**
 
-You lived happily ever after with a beautiful woman 💑.
+You lived happily ever after with this beautiful woman 💑...
 
-Till... 🐺 🐺
+...until 🐺 🐺 😈
 
 Thanks for playing! 🥳
 

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You are killing 🔪 woman 👩 with cold blood.**
+**You kill her 🔪 👩 in cold blood.**
 
-She screams 😱 loudly and die ☠️.
+Her screams 😱 echo into the clearing and fade from the night air ☠️.
 
-You can see bushes 🌳 deeper in the ravine. You are sure you can cut them with your machate 🔪.
+You can see bushes 🌳 at the other end of the clearing. Your machete drips with her blood 🔪.
 
 - [🏞️ Go back through the gorge](10-1A.md)
 - [🌳 Cut 🔪 the bushes](10-2A.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2A.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2A.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 **You cut the bushes 🌳.**
 
-It turns out that this path leads to the river on which you walked earlier!
+This path leads back to the river!
 
-This is a place where the river is shallow so there will be no problem with crossing.
+The river is shallow here and you have no problems crossing.
 
-Soon, you are in your shelter ⛺. You feel terible about what you did. Her screams and blood gonna haunt you in your nightmares ☹️.
+Soon, you are in your shelter ⛺. You feel terible about what you did. Her screams and blood will haunt your dreams ☹️.
 
 - [Stay there for a night 🌙](10-2B)
 - [🌠 Go back to your times](../1800-won)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2B.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-2B.md
@@ -1,13 +1,14 @@
 **You are feeling sleepy 💤.**
 
-You are lying on the bed 🛌.
+You lie in bed 🛌 and drift off to an uncomfortable sleep.
 
-At night 🌙, you are awakened by the sound of the door 🚪 opening. Before you react, you feel like your heart is pierced 💔.
+At midnight 🌙, the door 🚪 creaks open. You are wrenched from your nightmares by the feeling of an icecicle piercing your heart 💔.
 
-You see two werewolves 🐺 standing over you.
+As your vision fades to black you make out the silhouettes of two werewolves in the moonlight 🐺🐺 crouched by your bedside.
 
-*For our father...*
+As your final breath escapes you hear their shrill voices ringing in your ears: 
+*"For our father..."*
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You died ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You are leaving woman 👩 and go away.**
+**You leave the helpless woman 👩 tied up.**
 
-She screams 😱 loudly.
+She screams 😱 in panic.
 
-You can see bushes 🌳 deeper in the ravine. You are sure you can cut them with your machate 🔪.
+You can see bushes 🌳 on the other side of the clearing. You are sure you can cut them with your machate 🔪.
 
 - [🏞️ Go back through the gorge](10-1A.md)
 - [🌳 Cut 🔪 the bushes](10-3A.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3A.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3A.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 **You cut the bushes 🌳.**
 
-It turns out that this path leads to the river on which you walked earlier!
+This path leads back to the river!
 
-This is a place where the river is shallow so there will be no problem with crossing.
+The river is shallow here and you have no problems crossing.
 
 Soon, you are in your shelter ⛺. You wonder if you did the right thing by leaving the woman 👩.
 

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3B.md b/english/time-travel/0/10/10-3B.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **Congratulations! 🥳**
 
-You survived and killed werewolf 🐺! Now you can play another dungeons or rooms! 
+You survived and killed the werewolf 🐺! Now you can play other dungeon or rooms! 
 
 Thanks for playing! 🥳
 

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/1800-won.md b/english/time-travel/0/1800-won.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **Congratulations! 🥳**
 
-You survived and killed werewolf 🐺! Now you can play another dungeons or rooms! 
+You survived and killed the werewolf 🐺! Now you can play other dungeons or rooms! 
 
 Thanks for playing! 🥳
 

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/3/3.md b/english/time-travel/0/3/3.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**You built a shelter 🎁⛺!**
+**After 2 hours, you managed to build a cozy shelter 🎁⛺!**
 
 *Sun is about to set* 🌆. *You miss your friends*(👦🧑👧👩‍🦰) *back in the future*.
 

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/5/5.md b/english/time-travel/0/5/5.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **You sit in the dark shelter alone and fall asleep.😴🛌**
 
-**While you were sleeping, a tiger enters your wood built house. 🐅🐯**
+**Whilst asleep, a hungry tiger snuck into your cozy shelter 🐅🐯**
 
 He. Kills. You. 😐🥩
 

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/6/6-1A.md b/english/time-travel/0/6/6-1A.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**You ate cooked meat and felt sleepy .**
+**You ate cooked meat and felt sleepy.**
 
 *You fall asleep by the fire and it's cosy 🤗. You awake in the morning in your new house.*
 

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2A.md b/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2A.md
@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@
-**You spend some time looking for food, and you found berries 🍇.**
+**In the darkness of the forest, you get lucky and stumble into a tasty-looking berry bush 🍇**
 
-Unfortunately, way back home wolf 🐺 attacked you.
+You make your way back to camp, munching on your tasty treats.  
+Unfortunately, you're not the only one in the forest who's looking for a meal...
+A rabid wolf 🐺 smells your berries and attacks.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You slowly and painfully bleed out until you die 🩸☠️
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2B.md b/english/time-travel/0/6/6-2B.md
@@ -1,3 +1,6 @@
-**You are waking up very hungry and has no strength to do anything.**
+**You wake up famished and have no strength to do anything.**
+
+Spending the night in the past was fun, but you're so hungry and tired.
+You look at your time machine and remember the possibilities are endless...
 
 - [Travel back to the future 🌠](../1/1.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/6/6.md b/english/time-travel/0/6/6.md
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
 
 Your stomach growls with hunger 😟.
 
-- [Go out and try to find a food](6-2A.md) 
+- [Forage for food](6-2A.md) 
 - [Stay home ⛺ and go to sleep](6-2B.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-**You feel dizzy from eating mushrooms 🍄. Your world starts spinning 🌀 and you fall to the ground.**
+**Within 10 minutes, you begin to feel dizzy 🍄. Your world slowly starts spinning 🌀 and you blissfully fall down to meet the soft forest floor. You close your eyes.**
 
-A huge rainbow 🌈 hare 🐰 appears in front of you and is asking for the way to Valhalla...
-Unfortunately, you are unable to speak.
+Your eyes crack open. Suddenly, a huge rainbow 🌈 bunny-rabbit 🐰 appears, politely asking if you know the way to Valhalla...
+You understand his perfect English, but your head is still spinning when you try to speak:
 
 - [🙊 ymmhmmmhmmm](7-1A.md) 
-- [↪️ Show him random direction](7-1B.md) 
+- [↪️ Point to a random direction](7-1B.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1A.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1A.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-**A huge rainbow 🌈 hare 🐰 gets angry and throw shurikens at you.**
+**The huge rainbow 🌈 bunny-rabbit 🐰 gets angry at your blasphemous mumbling and throws shurikens at you.**
 
-You die ☠️.
+Everything happened so fast! Your wounds don't feel real. Paralyzed by what took place, you bleed out and die ☠️.
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1B.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-1B.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-**He thanks you and leave you alone.**
+**He thanks you and leaves you to enjoy your bliss.**
 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-**You see a little hare 🐰 jumping around.**
+**You see a little bunny-rabbit 🐰 jumping around.**
 
-- [👐 Try to kill him with bare hands](7-2A.md) 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [👐 Try to kill him with your bare hands](7-2A.md) 
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2A.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2A.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**Hare 🐰 noticed you and started to run away.**
+**The bunny-rabbit 🐰 noticed you and runs away.**
 
 - [🏃 Chase him](7-2AA.md) 
-- [🤾‍♂️ Throw a stone at it](7-2AB.md) 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [🤾‍♂️ Throw a stone at him](7-2AB.md) 
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AA.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AA.md
@@ -1,5 +1,7 @@
-**Suddenly a wolf 🐺 jumps out of the bushes and attacks you.**
+**You take off after the bunny-rabbit 🐰 with the speed of Usain Bolt 🇯🇲, randomly darting through the trees after your prey.**
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+*On your pursuit, a rabid wolf 🐺 joins in the hunt! Unwilling to share your next meal, you abandon your chase by attacking the beast instead!***
 
-[🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
+You manage to fight off the rabid wolf, but you've been bitten and are badly bleeding. Within hours, rabies sets in - driving you mad. Alone, hungry and confused deep inside the forest, you think of the time machine and your friends back in the future.You eventually succumb to your injurues, and die ☠️.
+
+[🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AB.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2AB.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**You thrown 🤾‍♂️ a stone at hare 🐰.**
+**You thrown 🤾‍♂️ a stone at the bunny-rabbit 🐰.**
 
-It died. You obtained **meat** 🥩.
+Critical HIT! You obtained **meat** 🥩.
 
-- [🤤 Eat meat 🥩](7-2ABA.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2-1.md)
+- [🤤 Eat raw meat 🥩](7-2ABA.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2-1.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2ABA.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-2ABA.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**It wasn't eatable. You puked 🤮.**
+**It wasn't edible. You vomit 🤮.**
 
-You still feel hungry.
+You feel better after vommitting, but still hungry.
 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-3.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-3.md
@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@
-**You spend some time looking for food, and you found berries 🍇.**
+**You get lucky and stumble into a tasty-looking berry bush 🍇**
 
-Unfortunately, wolf 🐺 attacked you.
+You continue through the lush forest, munching on your tasty treats.  
+Unfortunately, you're not the only one in the forest who's looking for a meal...
+A rabid wolf 🐺 smells your berries and attacks.
 
-You're dying ☠️.
+You slowly and painfully bleed out until you die 🩸☠️
 
 [🔄 Restart the game](../../begin-journey.md) 
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7-4.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7-4.md
@@ -4,4 +4,5 @@ What do you want to do?
 
 - [🚶‍♂️ Explore the area](../8/8.md) 
 - [⏲ Go to the future year 2100](../../1/0.md) 
-- [🌠 Go back to your present](../1/1.md)
+- [🌠 Go back to your present](../1/1.md)
+
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/7/7.md b/english/time-travel/0/7/7.md
@@ -1,8 +1,9 @@
 **You are looking around and notice strange-looking mushrooms 🍄.**
 
-When you look at mushrooms, you hear animal sounds.
+As you approach the mushroom patch, you hear the faint sounds of animals nearby...
+What do you do?
 
-- [🍄 Eat mushrooms](7-1.md) 
+- [🍄 Pick and eat the mushrooms](7-1.md) 
 - [🦻 Follow the sounds of the animals](7-2.md) 
-- [🥣 Search for another food](7-3.md) 
-- [🌳🪓🏠 Gather some woods for shelter](../2/2.md)
+- [🥣 Look for something else to eat](7-3.md) 
+- [🌳🪓⛺ Gather wood to build a shelter](../2/2.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-1.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-1.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 **The bushes 🌳🌲 on the other side of the river are too tall to pass through.**
 
-Without machete 🔪 you are unable to go further.
+Without a machete 🔪 you are unable to proceed.
 
 - [⬅️ Go back](8-4.md)
diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2.md
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
-**You see the stream narrows and becomes quite dangerous.**
+**You see the river widens up and becomes quite dangerous.**
+
+*the rocks create rapids which throw white water over 1m into the air*
+
+What now?
 
 - [⬆️ Go upstream](8-2A.md)
 - [➡️ Cross the river](8-2B.md)

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2A.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2A.md
@@ -1,8 +1,10 @@
-**You are keep walking, and mile beyond, the hills narrow ominously on either side.**
+**You reluctantly press onwards. After about a mile, the gently-sloping river bank shifts to ominous, narrow canyon walls on either side.**
 
-The road goes uphill ⛰️ in a series of switchbacks and continues. 
+The river slices through the surrounding hillside 🏞️, leaving a trecherous gorge in its wake that stretches into endless blackness.
 
-The stream slices through the neighboring ridge 🏞️, carving a dark and dangerous gorge as it goes.
+Uphill ⛰️ the path continues in a series of switchbacks and loose boulders.
+
+*Your path forks in two* 
 
 - [⛰️ Go uphill](8-2AA.md)
 - [🏞️ Go through the gorge](8-2C.md)

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AA.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AA.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-**You keep going uphill and you reach an ramshackle farm 🏚️🌾.**
+**You wind your way uphill until you reach an ramshackle farm 🏚️🌾.**
 
-The farm consists of well-kept fields 🌾, a farmhouse 🏚️, a woodshed, and a mostly-collapsed barn.
+Just beyond the boulders you spy the remains of a mostly-collapsed barn. Next to it lies what appears to be a woodshed. As you near your approach, to your delight and releif, a small farmhouse 🏚️ with well-kept fields 🌾 morph into view.
 
 - [🏚️ Enter farmhouse](8-2AB.md)
 - [🚪 Enter woodshed](8-2AC.md)

diff --git a/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AB.md b/english/time-travel/0/8/8-2AB.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-**You enter farmhouse 🏚️.**
+**You enter the farmhouse 🏚️.**
 
-The front room contains a table, four chairs 🪑, a fireplace 🔥, a few cooking utensil and some books 📚.
+In the front room now, you see a table with four chairs 🪑, a fireplace 🔥 with cooking utensils, and some books 📚.
 
-There is also back room.
+In the corner, you see the entance to the back room.
 
 - [📚 Read books](8-2ABA.md)
 - [🚪 Enter back room](8-2ABB.md)