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Add "Microsoft Search in Bing" in "Address bar" section of Privacy #3224

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@mikehoffms mikehoffms commented Jul 12, 2024

Rendered article section for review:

Changes made in this PR:

  • Added Microsoft Search in Bing h4 subsection in the Address bar and suggestions h2 section.
  • Did a 50% thorough copyedit in entire "Address bar and suggestions" h2 section.
  • Did a 75% thorough structural edit in entire "Address bar and suggestions" h2 section (ie added h4 headings).
  • Trimmed trailing whitespace in entire article.
  • In one spot in unrelated h2 section, changed from "To do x, do the following:" to "To do x:"
  • In entire article, normalized: above each subheading (h4), html comment divider 40 char wide.
  • In repo, consistently wrote title as "Microsoft Edge Privacy Whitepaper".

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The PR LGTM.
to expedite this update, hidden todo comments (from broad review of entire h2 section) are to be fixed later, after move article to other repo.

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Edge Privacy Champ approved

@zoherghadyali zoherghadyali merged commit 7506a5f into main Jul 24, 2024
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