update translation

data/english_text/ballots_house_intro.asm

@@ -70,6 +70,6 @@ text_08_45f0::
 	cont  "cold."
 	done
 
-text__::
+text_00_0000::
 	done
 

data/english_text/ballots_house_intro.csv

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 "08","4542","House_CutsceneText1","// init NAME_BALLOT, PIC_BALLOT_0
 嗯~
 放入這個~","// init NAME_BALLOT, PIC_BALLOT_0
-Ah, time to add the finishing touches!","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","",""
+Ah, time to add the finishing touches!","NEW LINE = NEW PARAGRAPH","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","",""
 "08","4552","House_CutsceneText2","// init NAME_BALLOT, PIC_BALLOT_0
 再加調味料⋯⋯","// init NAME_BALLOT, PIC_BALLOT_0
 Add a bit of seasoning here...","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","",""

data/english_text/bank08_misc.asm

@@ -49,11 +49,10 @@ text_08_46fe::
 	line  "you! Your mom"
 	cont  "would be"
 	cont  "proud!"
-	para  "Ah, sorry for"
-	line  "mentioning"
-	cont  "her! You're"
-	cont  "such a strong"
-	cont  "kid!"
+	para  "Ah, so sorry"
+	line  "for"
+	cont  "mentioning"
+	cont  "her!"
 	done
 
 text_08_4768::
@@ -86,9 +85,9 @@ text_08_47fb::
 	text2 "The moon"
 	line  "seems to have"
 	cont  "a blue tint"
-	cont  "today... Must"
-	cont  "be my"
-	cont  "imagination."
+	cont  "today..."
+	para  "Must be my"
+	line  "imagination."
 	done
 
 text_08_4837::
@@ -254,7 +253,7 @@ text_08_4b77::
 	text_init NAME_BALLOT, PIC_BALLOT_0
 	text2 "The school's"
 	line  "door is"
-	cont  "closed..."
+	cont  "locked..."
 	done
 
 text_08_4b8b::
@@ -337,7 +336,8 @@ text_08_4c8c::
 	line  "finally here?"
 	para  "It's a little"
 	line  "too early"
-	cont  "based on my"
+	cont  "compared to"
+	cont  "my"
 	cont  "calculations."
 	done
 
@@ -742,7 +742,7 @@ text_08_53af::
 	cont  "meteor shower"
 	cont  "event took"
 	cont  "place, about"
-	cont  "1,932 light"
+	cont  "1932 light"
 	cont  "years from"
 	cont  "Earth."
 	done

data/english_text/bank08_misc.csv

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ I wonder what's up with him?","machine translation assisted, original mentions t
 ...Huh?
 Is that for your dad?
 How nice of you! Your mom would be proud!
-Ah, sorry for mentioning her! You're such a strong kid!","
+Ah, so sorry for mentioning her!","
 孝順 carries connotations of filial piety but i'm not sure if that translates well in a western context
 
 媽媽病逝後，
@@ -81,7 +81,8 @@ tn: need more context","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","",
 有點藍藍的呢?
 一定是我眼睛又
 花了。","// init NAME_BLANK, $16
-The moon seems to have a blue tint today... Must be my imagination.
+The moon seems to have a blue tint today...
+Must be my imagination.
 ","""我眼睛又花"" means ""i must be short-sighted again"" but seems long winded","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","",""
 "08","4837","","// init NAME_BLANK, $19
 新聞報導說，
@@ -266,7 +267,7 @@ Why is it looking a little blue tonight? It's a bit scary...","","","","","","",
 一點⋯⋯","// init NAME_11, $11
 ...It's finally here?
 
-It's a little too early based on my calculations.","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","",""
+It's a little too early compared to my calculations.","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","",""
 "08","4cb5","","// init NAME_BALLOT, PIC_BALLOT_0
 爸⋯","// init NAME_BALLOT, PIC_BALLOT_0
 Dad...","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","",""
@@ -551,7 +552,7 @@ Anyway, can anyone tell me more about this meteor shower?","mr. mo sweat emote",
 光年。","// init NAME_BALLOT, $00
 The meteor shower originates in the Frigo Galaxy.
 
-It's been 120 years since the last meteor shower event took place, about 1,932 light years from Earth.","deepl said ""fritz galaxy"", google translate said ""frieze galaxy"", i say ""frigo galaxy"" -WHY
+It's been 120 years since the last meteor shower event took place, about 1932 light years from Earth.","deepl said ""fritz galaxy"", google translate said ""frieze galaxy"", i say ""frigo galaxy"" -WHY
 haven't found any other reference and it sounds close enough","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","","",""
 "08","53ef","","// init NAME_15, $24
 完全正確!!

data/english_text/bank0e_misc.asm

@@ -5,41 +5,36 @@ text_0e_4abe::
 	cont  "I'm sure"
 	cont  "there'll be a"
 	cont  "lead in the"
-	cont  "house"
-	cont  "somewhere!"
+	cont  "house!"
 	done
 
 text_0e_4af9::
 	text_init NAME_BALLOT, $00
-	text2 "Dad must be"
-	line  "somewhere."
-	cont  "I'm sure"
-	cont  "there'll be a"
-	cont  "lead in the"
-	cont  "house"
-	cont  "somewhere!"
+	text2 "I'll have to"
+	line  "search inside"
+	cont  "first, I'm"
+	cont  "sure there'll"
+	cont  "be a lead"
+	cont  "somewhere."
 	done
 
 text_0e_4b34::
 	text_init NAME_BALLOT, $2d
-	text2 "I found a"
+	text2 "There's a"
 	line  "diary in the"
 	cont  "drawer!"
 	done
 
 text_0e_4b4d::
 	text_init NAME_BALLOT, $00
-	text2 "This is"
-	line  "written in"
-	cont  "the diary:"
-	para  "..."
+	text2 "..."
 	para  "April 20th"
 	para  "There are"
 	line  "signs of the"
 	cont  "moon turning"
-	cont  "blue. If we"
-	cont  "don't"
-	cont  "decipher the"
+	cont  "blue."
+	para  "If we don't"
+	line  "decipher the"
 	cont  "diagram soon,"
 	cont  "I'm afraid we"
 	cont  "won't be able"
@@ -53,12 +48,13 @@ text_0e_4bc0::
 	line  "design"
 	cont  "diagram is"
 	cont  "enclosed in"
-	cont  "the diary."
+	cont  "the diary!"
 	cont  "The diagram"
 	cont  "contains a"
 	cont  "dense"
 	cont  "mechanical"
-	cont  "nstruction..."
+	cont  "con-"
+	cont  "struction..."
 	done
 
 text_0e_4bfb::
@@ -80,7 +76,7 @@ text_0e_4bfb::
 	line  "diagram... no"
 	cont  "matter how"
 	cont  "hard I try, I"
-	cont  "can’t"
+	cont  "can't"
 	cont  "understand"
 	cont  "it..."
 	done
@@ -221,20 +217,21 @@ text_0e_4eb4::
 	line  "made cookies!"
 	para  "Super"
 	line  "de-li-cious!"
-	para  "Wow! Looks"
-	line  "like you're"
+	para  "Ahh! Look"
+	line  "out! You're"
 	cont  "being chased"
 	cont  "by one of"
-	cont  "those 'star"
-	cont  "beasts'!"
+	cont  "those Star"
+	cont  "Beasts!"
 	done
 
 text_0e_4efa::
 	text_init NAME_BLANK, $16
-	text2 "Is the sky"
-	line  "cracking now"
+	text2 "Uhh... Is"
+	line  "that a crack"
+	cont  "in the sky,"
 	cont  "or am I going"
-	cont  "crazy?"
+	cont  "mad?"
 	done
 
 text_0e_4f2f::
@@ -422,15 +419,15 @@ text_0e_5333::
 	text_init NAME_BALLOT, PIC_BALLOT_0
 	text2 "The school's"
 	line  "door is"
-	cont  "closed..."
+	cont  "locked..."
 	done
 
 text_0e_5347::
 	text_init NAME_BLANK, $12
 	text2 "After the"
 	line  "meteor"
-	cont  "shower, star"
-	cont  "beasts are"
+	cont  "shower, Star"
+	cont  "Beasts are"
 	cont  "out and"
 	cont  "about."
 	para  "After"
@@ -469,8 +466,8 @@ text_0e_53c0::
 text_0e_5437::
 	text_init NAME_BLANK, $1e
 	text2 "Wow!"
-	para  "I got a star"
-	line  "beast, but"
+	para  "I got a Star"
+	line  "Beast, but"
 	cont  "don't tell my"
 	cont  "Dad!"
 	para  "Whoa, you"
@@ -749,8 +746,8 @@ text_0e_5a5a::
 	cont  "I can't see"
 	cont  "the follow-up"
 	cont  "news report"
-	cont  "of the star"
-	cont  "beast. By the"
+	cont  "of the Star"
+	cont  "Beast. By the"
 	cont  "way, why"
 	cont  "hasn't Burt"
 	cont  "come back"

data/english_text/bank0e_misc.csv

@@ -6,20 +6,20 @@
 ，
 一定會有線索的
 !","// init NAME_BALLOT, $00
-Dad must be somewhere. I'm sure there'll be a lead in the house somewhere!","after the meteor shower cutscene."
+Dad must be somewhere. I'm sure there'll be a lead in the house!","after the meteor shower cutscene."
 "0e","4af9","","// init NAME_BALLOT, $00
 爸爸一定是到了
 某個地方了。
 在房子裡找的話
 ，
 一定會有線索的
 !","// init NAME_BALLOT, $00
-Dad must be somewhere. I'm sure there'll be a lead in the house somewhere!","exact same text as before lol
+I'll have to search inside first, I'm sure there'll be a lead somewhere.","originally exact same text as before
 thanks VF, very cool"
 "0e","4b34","","// init NAME_BALLOT, $2d
 在抽罹裡~
 發現了日記!","// init NAME_BALLOT, $2d
-I found a diary in the drawer!",""
+There's a diary in the drawer!",""
 "0e","4b4d","","// init NAME_BALLOT, $00
 日記的內容這麼
 寫道:
@@ -33,17 +33,17 @@ I found a diary in the drawer!",""
 再不快解開圖中
 的祕密，
 恐怕就⋯⋯","// init NAME_BALLOT, $00
-This is written in the diary:
 ...
 April 20th
-There are signs of the moon turning blue. If we don't decipher the diagram soon, I'm afraid we won't be able to stop that event.",""
+There are signs of the moon turning blue.
+If we don't decipher the diagram soon, I'm afraid we won't be able to stop that event.",""
 "0e","4bc0","","// init NAME_BALLOT, $2d
 日記裡夾著一張
 泛黃的設計圖。
 圖裡畫著密密麻
 麻的機械構造圖
 ⋯⋯","// init NAME_BALLOT, $2d
-A yellowed design diagram is enclosed in the diary. The diagram contains a dense mechanical construction...",""
+A yellowed design diagram is enclosed in the diary! The diagram contains a dense mechanical con- struction...",""
 "0e","4bfb","","// init NAME_BALLOT, $00
 爸爸一定想解開
 設計圖中的祕密
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ A yellowed design diagram is enclosed in the diary. The diagram contains a dense
 理解⋯","// init NAME_BALLOT, $00
 Dad must have wanted to unearth the secrets of the design schematics. If I can unlock the secrets of the blueprints, I'll probably find Dad.
 
-But this diagram... no matter how hard I try, I can’t understand it...",""
+But this diagram... no matter how hard I try, I can't understand it...",""
 "0e","4c6a","","// init NAME_BALLOT, $2b
 伊隼人曾經提到
 過他的朋友，
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ AHH!! BALLOT!! WATCH OUT!",""
 !
 萬歲!","// init NAME_BLANK, $20
 Hooray!
-No class today because of the meteor shower!","deepl"
+No class today because of the meteor shower!",""
 "0e","4eb4","","// init NAME_BLANK, $1d
 巴‧洛‧特~
 人家的餅乾做好
@@ -165,14 +165,14 @@ No class today because of the meteor shower!","deepl"
 怪獸追了!","// init NAME_BLANK, $1d
 Ballot! I made cookies!
 Super de-li-cious!
-Wow! Looks like you're being chased by one of those 'star beasts'!","machine translation assisted"
+Ahh! Look out! You're being chased by one of those 'Star Beasts'!",""
 "0e","4efa","","// init NAME_BLANK, $16
 唉呀~
 怎麼天空上有一
 道裂縫呢?
 一定是我眼睛又
 花了。","// init NAME_BLANK, $16
-Is the sky cracking now or am I going crazy?","machine translation assisted
+Uhh... Is that a crack in the sky, or am I going mad?","
 must be the ""imagination"" guy from earlier, he should take his normal pills"
 "0e","4f2f","","// init NAME_BLANK, $19
 我看到了!
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ The school's door is closed...","see 08:4b77"
 起來了!
 啊!就在那邊⋯
 不要跑!!","// init NAME_BLANK, $12
-After the meteor shower, star beasts are out and about.
+After the meteor shower, Star Beasts are out and about.
 After weakening them, you can use this capsule to catch them!
 Ah! There they are... don't run!","modified deepl output
 gotta catch 'em all"
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ They saved the Earth!","modified deepl output"
 你也有星獸嗎?
 較量一下吧!","// init NAME_BLANK, $1e
 Wow!
-I got a star beast, but don't tell my Dad!
+I got a Star Beast, but don't tell my Dad!
 Whoa, you have one too? Let's battle 'em!","machine translation assisted
 guy in the 1st route who wants to battle"
 "0e","547a","","// init NAME_BLANK, $1e
@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ It's a joke to ask everyone to put together this 30 million! Hide this! That one
 了那麼久，
 怎麼還沒有回來
 呢?","// init NAME_BLANK, $1b
-It's a real pain in the ass, the inexplicable power outage. I can't see the follow-up news report of the star beast. By the way, why hasn't Burt come back from his long trip to the tower to fix it?","deepl
+It's a real pain in the ass, the inexplicable power outage. I can't see the follow-up news report of the Star Beast. By the way, why hasn't Burt come back from his long trip to the tower to fix it?","deepl
 yes, it curses
 google says Bot instead of Burt"
 "0e","5ac1","","// init NAME_1D, $1a

data/english_text/signposts_1.asm

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 
 text_0c_40a7::
 	text_sign
-	text2 "School"
+	text2 "↑School"
 	done
 
 text_0c_40af::
 	text_sign
-	text2 "to Observatory"
+	text2 "→Observatory"
 	done
 
 text_0c_40b8::