Breakout Room 5 #6
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| #Mad Libs Generator Project | |||
| loop = 1 | |||
| while (loop < 9): | |||
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Loop will currently exit after 8 rounds of Mad Libs - reconfigure this so there are 10 rounds
| print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| #Loop back to "loop = 1" |
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Loop starts at the "while" statement on line 3, not line 2. It could be helpful for you to clarify this in your comment!
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",plural_noun,"in",place) | ||
| print ("Where the weather is always",adjective,".") | ||
| print () | ||
| print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") |
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To cut down on print statements, you could consider making this a multi-line string! https://www.w3schools.com/python/gloss_python_multi_line_strings.asp
| #Displays the story based on the users input | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") |
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Currently, all punctuation after user inputted words is separated from those words with a space (lines 14, 16, 18). You could remove these spaces for better readability
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| #Mad Libs Generator Project | |||
| loop = 1 | |||
| while (loop < 9): | |||
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The game should loop so the user can create 10 stories. The while loop can work without round bracket.
| while (loop < 9): | |
| while loop < 11: |
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| #Loop back to "loop = 1" | ||
| loop = loop + 1 |
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| loop = loop + 1 | |
| loop += 1 |
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Make multiline statements and use f-string in the print function.
| #Displays the story based on the users input | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| print ("Be kind to your",noun,"- footed", plural_noun) | ||
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") |
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| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", seond_noun,",") | |
| print ("For a duck may be somebody's", second_noun,",") |
| print ("You may think that is this the",third_noun,",") | ||
| print ("Well it is.") | ||
| print ("------------------------------------------") | ||
| #Loop back to "loop = 1" |
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| #Loop back to "loop = 1" | |
| #Loop back to "while loop < 11:" |
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