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Commercial: updates #244
Commercial: updates #244
Commits on Aug 2, 2023
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Consulting Services: hide AnonBSD Inc.
https://sites.google.com/site/anonbsd/ redirects to https://sites.google.com/site/sites/system/errors/WebspaceNotFound?path=/anonbsd/&pli=1 - site not found.
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Consulting Services: hide Ouellet Consulting Inc.
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Commits on Aug 4, 2023
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Commercial Vendors: reorder, reformat, improve
Don't begin by linking to a page that lacks descriptions. Be calm, be correct. A person seeking a commercial vendor is not likely to be excited by 'Books and accessories you just cannot live without!' where only three things are listed, and the first is neither a book nor an accessory! Life goes on! Use fewer exclamation marks! This is not (UK tabloid) The Sun! Grammar, for example: - punctuation missing from things such as 'Miscellaneous Vendors Books and accessories you …' - duplication in 'Software Vendors Vendors From audio players, …' - 'supports a … support' - superfluous 'our' in 'our endorsement of their products or services by the FreeBSD Project.' Some attention to weasel words … … and so on (expect further improvements in and around this page).
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consult_bycat: be true, and don't state the obvious
From the subheadings, geography is immediately obvious. No need for a preceding paragraph that vaguely describes categorisation. It's not proper to mention proper gallery entries where there is no gallery.
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Move the title to the head of the page, and use an appropriate level.
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consult_bycat: title, heading level
Move the title to the head of the page, and use an appropriate level.
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Weasel word: growing. (Not always; lists sometimes shrink.) What was (or is) stated at the parent page – note, the sidebar and menu contexts for https://www.freebsd.org/commercial/ – need not be restated, verbatim or condensed, in pages such as these. Aiming to have the same text at eight or more subpages is not only a maintenance burden, there's also resultant nonsense.
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Weasel word: growing. (Not always; lists sometimes shrink.) What was (or is) stated at the parent page – note, the sidebar and menu contexts for https://www.freebsd.org/commercial/ – need not be restated, verbatim or condensed, in pages such as these. Aiming to have the same text at eight or more subpages is not only a maintenance burden, there's also resultant nonsense.
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Commits on Aug 7, 2023
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Commits on Aug 14, 2023
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