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Commercial: updates #244

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  2. Consulting Services: hide Ouellet Consulting Inc.

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    grahamperrin authored Aug 2, 2023
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Commits on Aug 4, 2023

  1. Commercial Vendors: reorder, reformat, improve

    Don't begin by linking to a page that lacks descriptions. 
    
    Be calm, be correct. A person seeking a commercial vendor is not likely to be excited by 'Books and accessories you just cannot live without!' where only three things are listed, and the first is neither a book nor an accessory! Life goes on! Use fewer exclamation marks! This is not (UK tabloid) The Sun!
    
    Grammar, for example: 
    
    - punctuation missing from things such as 'Miscellaneous Vendors Books and accessories you …'
    - duplication in 'Software Vendors Vendors From audio players, …'
    - 'supports a … support'
    - superfluous 'our' in 'our endorsement of their products or services by the FreeBSD Project.'
    
    Some attention to weasel words …
    
    … and so on (expect further improvements in and around this page).
    grahamperrin authored Aug 4, 2023
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  2. consult_bycat: be true, and don't state the obvious

    From the subheadings, geography is immediately obvious. No need for a preceding paragraph that vaguely describes categorisation. 
    
    It's not proper to mention proper gallery entries where there is no gallery.
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  3. consult: title, heading level

    Move the title to the head of the page, and use an appropriate level.
    grahamperrin authored Aug 4, 2023
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  4. consult_bycat: title, heading level

    Move the title to the head of the page, and use an appropriate level.
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  5. consult_bycat: deduplicate

    Weasel word: growing. (Not always; lists sometimes shrink.)
    
    What was (or is) stated at the parent page – note, the sidebar and menu contexts for https://www.freebsd.org/commercial/ – need not be restated, verbatim or condensed, in pages such as these. 
    
    Aiming to have the same text at eight or more subpages is not only a maintenance burden, there's also resultant nonsense.
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  6. consult: deduplicate

    Weasel word: growing. (Not always; lists sometimes shrink.)
    
    What was (or is) stated at the parent page – note, the sidebar and menu contexts for https://www.freebsd.org/commercial/ – need not be restated, verbatim or condensed, in pages such as these. 
    
    Aiming to have the same text at eight or more subpages is not only a maintenance burden, there's also resultant nonsense.
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