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front-seat · Jan 24, 2024 · 7c15ce5 · 7c15ce5
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@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ import {
       <H3 className="border-t-2 border-medium mt-32 md:mt-44 pt-6">
         Backed by evidence and vouched for by experts &mdash; we’ve done the
         research to give you <span class="text-sun"
-          >a one-stop-shop to defeat Trump</span
+          >a strategy to defeat Trump</span
         >.
       </H3>
 
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ import {
             <div class="text-darkest w-[304px] flex-shrink-0 flex flex-col">
               <H2>How it works</H2>
               <P28 className="pt-6">
-                Your donation is spread across these impactful programs.
+                You donate directly to these impactful programs.
               </P28>
               <p
                 class="pt-8 pb-4 md:pb-0 text-[15px] leading-[22.5px] font-switzer"
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ import {
                   The most quantitatively measurable and cost-effective tactics
                   for voter registration, persuasion, and turnout
                 </P21>
-                <PMedium className="flex-shrink-0">30%</PMedium>
+                <PMedium className="flex-shrink-0">40%</PMedium>
               </div>
               <div
                 class="flex flex-row flex-nowrap border-b py-6 border-darkest items-center space-x-8"
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ import {
                   Organizations that focus on specific communities and
                   demographics
                 </P21>
-                <PMedium className="flex-shrink-0">25%</PMedium>
+                <PMedium className="flex-shrink-0">20%</PMedium>
               </div>
               <div
                 class="flex flex-row flex-nowrap border-b py-6 border-darkest items-center space-x-8"
@@ -153,18 +153,9 @@ import {
                 class="flex flex-row flex-nowrap border-b py-6 border-darkest items-center space-x-8"
               >
                 <P21 className="flex-grow">
-                  Other competitive federal races (the House and Senate are
-                  backups in case Trump wins)
+                  Other competitive house races
                 </P21>
-                <PMedium className="flex-shrink-0">15%</PMedium>
-              </div>
-              <div
-                class="flex flex-row flex-nowrap border-b py-6 border-darkest items-center space-x-8"
-              >
-                <P21 className="flex-grow">
-                  Infrastructure and innovative approaches
-                </P21>
-                <PMedium className="flex-shrink-0">10%</PMedium>
+                <PMedium className="flex-shrink-0">20%</PMedium>
               </div>
             </div>
           </div>
@@ -200,7 +191,7 @@ import {
                 </P24>
                 <P24 className="text-medium">
                   Our goal is to provide the most effective giving strategies
-                  for donors not working with a political donor advisor. 
+                  for people not working with a donor advisor. 
                 </P24>
               </div>
               <!-- question -->
@@ -261,22 +252,26 @@ import {
 
               <!-- question -->
               <div class="flex flex-col py-6">
-                <P24><Em24>But political donations are so yucky.</Em24></P24>
+                <P24><Em24>How much does giving money matter?</Em24></P24>
+               <P24 className="text-medium">
+                  Only 1.5% of Americans gave more than $200 in 2020 &mdash; so giving money and
+                  encouraging friends to give money can win this election.
+                </P24>
                 <P24 className="text-medium">
-                  Look, there’s too much money in politics — but until campaign
-                  finance reform is fixed, money still wins elections. Only 1.5%
-                  of Americans gave more than $200 in 2020 — so giving money and
-                  encouraging our friends to give money is probably the most
-                  effective way we can make an impact.
+                  If you can raise $250 each hour you reach out to your friends,  
+                  it is the highest-impact volunteer opportunity to defeat Trump.
                 </P24>
               </div>
 
               <!-- question -->
               <div class="flex flex-col py-6">
-                <P24><Em24>No seriously, political giving is gross.</Em24></P24>
+                <P24><Em24>But political giving is yucky.</Em24></P24>
                 <P24 className="text-medium">
-                  It’s better than another Trump Presidency. If you want
-                  absolute certainty that your dollar reaches people in need,
+                  It’s better than another Trump Presidency. There’s too much money in politics
+                  &mdash; but until campaign finance reform is fixed, money wins elections.
+                 </P24>      
+                 <P24 className="text-medium">
+                  If you want absolute certainty that your dollar reaches people in need,
                   politics is not for you. But government money dwarfs any
                   philanthropic contribution. So in exchange for uncertainty,
                   you get big leverage.