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Co-authored-by: Shana Matthews <shana.l.matthews@gmail.com>

src/platforms/python/guides/aiohttp/index.mdx

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ pip install --upgrade aiocontextvars
 
 ## Configure
 
-If you have the `aiohttp` package in your dependencies, the AIOHTTO integration will be enabled automatically. There is nothing to do for you except initializing the Sentry SDK.
+If you have the `aiohttp` package in your dependencies, the AIOHTTO integration will be enabled automatically when you initialize the Sentry SDK.
 
 <SignInNote />
 
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ app.add_routes([web.get('/', hello)])
 web.run_app(app)
 ```
 
-When you point your browser to [http://localhost:8080/](http://localhost:8080/) a transaction in the Performance section of [sentry.io](https://sentry.io) will be created. Additionally an error event will be sent to [sentry.io](https://sentry.io) and will be connected to the transaction.
+When you point your browser to [http://localhost:8080/](http://localhost:8080/) a transaction will be created in the Performance section of [sentry.io](https://sentry.io). Additionally, an error event will be sent to [sentry.io](https://sentry.io) and will be connected to the transaction.
 
 It takes a couple of moments for the data to appear in [sentry.io](https://sentry.io).
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ It takes a couple of moments for the data to appear in [sentry.io](https://sentr
 
 ## Options
 
-By adding `AioHttpIntegration` explicitly to your `sentry_sdk.init()` call you can set options for `AioHttpIntegration` to change its behavior:
+By adding `AioHttpIntegration` to your `sentry_sdk.init()` call explicitly, you can set options for `AioHttpIntegration` to change its behavior:
 
 ```python
 import sentry_sdk