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Addressing Éric Vyncke's IESG review comments #59

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21 changes: 17 additions & 4 deletions draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended.md
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Unicode Technical Standard #35:
Unicode Locale Data Markup Language (LDML)
date: false
ICAO-PA:
title: >
Annex 10 to the Convention on International Civil Aviation:
Aeronautical Telecommunications;
Volume II Communication Procedures including those with PANS status (7th ed.)
author:
org: International Civil Aviation Organization
date: July 2016
target: https://store.icao.int/annex-10-aeronautical-telecommunications-volume-ii-communication-procedures-including-those-with-pans-status

# points to https://github.com/unicode-org/cldr/blob/main/common/bcp47/calendar.xml
DATA-MINIMIZATION: I-D.arkko-iab-data-minimization-principle
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UTC Offset:
: Difference between a given local time and UTC, usually given in
negative or positive hours and minutes. For example, local time in New
York in the wintertime is 5 hours behind UTC, so its UTC offset is "-05:00".
negative or positive hours and minutes. For example, local time in
the city of New York, NY, USA, in the wintertime in 2023, is 5 hours
behind UTC, so its UTC offset is "-05:00".

Z:
: A suffix which, when applied to a time, denotes a UTC offset of
00:00; often spoken "Zulu" from the ICAO phonetic alphabet
representation of the letter "Z". (Definition from {{Section 2 of RFC3339}}.)
representation of the letter "Z".
(Definition from {{Section 2 of RFC3339}}; see {{ICAO-PA}} for the
phonetic alphabet.)

Time Zone:
: A set of rules representing the relationship of local time to UTC
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"one day later"), a time zone also defines how to derive new
timestamps based on differences in local time.
For example, to calculate "one day later than this
timestamp in San Francisco", a time zone is required because the
timestamp in San Francisco, California", a time zone is required because the
UTC offset of local time in San Francisco can change from one day
to the next.

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