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                   <h1 id="mainHeader" style="color:white">DirectML</h1>
-                    <div id="mainSubtext" style="color:white">Transform your Windows application with the power of artificial intelligence.</div>
+                    <div id="mainSubtext" style="color:white">Transform your Windows application with the power of Artificial Intelligence</div>
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-                    <!-- <a role="button"  href="#learnMore" class="btn btn-custom mt-2 mr-2" id="learn-more">Learn more</a> --> 
-                    <a role="button" href="#get-started" class="btn btn-custom mt-2 ml-2" id="download" onclick="scrollToGetStarted()">Get Started</a>               </div><br/>
+                    <a role="button"  target="_blank" href="#get-started" class="btn btn-custom mt-2 mr-2" id="learn-more" onclick="scrollToGetStarted()" >Get Started</a> 
+                    <a role="button" href="https://github.com/microsoft/DirectML" class="btn btn-custom mt-2 ml-2" id="download">Github</a>
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@@ -76,7 +77,7 @@ <h1 id="mainHeader" style="color:white">DirectML</h1>
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-        <h2 id="mainSubtext" class="mb-3 mt-0" style="text-align: left">DirectML, a powerful machine learning API developed by Microsoft, is fast, versatile, and works seamlessly across a wide range of hardware platforms. With support from every DirectX 12-capable GPU and soon across NPUs, developers can use DirectML to power AI experiences on almost every Microsoft device! </h2>
+        <h2 id="mainSubtext" class="mb-3 mt-0" style="text-align: left">DirectML, a powerful machine learning API developed by Microsoft, is fast, versatile, and works seamlessly across a wide range of hardware platforms. With support from every DirectX 12-capable GPU and soon across NPUs, developers can use DirectML to deliver AI experiences at scale </h2>
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-        <h2 id="mainSubtext" class="mb-3 mt-0" style="text-align: left">DirectML is already pre-installed on many Windows 10+ devices and is also available as a NuGet package. With the ability to access DML from a range of supported languages (C++, Python, C#) and integration with ONNX for converting, tuning, and integrating machine learning models, it’s easy to <a href="#get-started"> get started </a></h2>
+        <h2 id="mainSubtext" class="mb-3 mt-0" style="text-align: left">DirectML is already pre-installed on a huge range of Windows 10+ devices and is also available as a NuGet package. You can access DirectML from multiple supported languages (C++, Python, C#). Explore our <a href="#get-started">Get Started guide</a> and <a href="https://github.com/microsoft/DirectML">GitHub repo</a> to learn how to use DirectML to integrate machine learning models into your application  </h2>
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-      <h2 class="mb-3 mt-0">Organizations and products using DirectML</h2>
+      <h2 class="mb-3 mt-0">Organizations and products leveraging DirectML</h2>
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-      <h2 class="mb-3 mt-0">Get started with these three steps:</h2>
+      <h2 class="mb-3 mt-0">Get started with DirectML and the ONNX Runtime</h2>
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@@ -154,7 +155,7 @@ <h2 class="mb-3 mt-0">Get started with these three steps:</h2>
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           <h2>1. Convert</h2>
-          <p class="lead mb-0">The ONNX format enables you to leverage ONNX Runtime with DirectML, which provides cross-platform and hardware capabilities. </p>
+          <p class="lead mb-0">The ONNX format enables you to leverage ONNX Runtime with DirectML, which provides cross-hardware capabilities. </p>
           <p class="lead mb-0">To convert your model to the ONNX format, you can utilize <a href="https://github.com/onnx/onnxmltools">ONNXMLTools</a> or <a href="https://github.com/microsoft/Olive#readme">Olive</a>. </p>
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           <h2>3. Integrate</h2>
-          <p class="lead mb-0">Once your model is ready, it’s time to bring hardware-accelerated inferencing to your app with ONNX Runtime and DirectML.</p>
+          <p class="lead mb-0">When your model is ready, it’s time to bring hardware-accelerated inferencing to your app with ONNX Runtime and DirectML.</p>
           <p class="lead mb-0">We built some samples to show how you can use DirectML in a range of languages:</p>
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               <li><a href="https://github.com/microsoft/DirectML/tree/master/Samples"> C++</a></li>
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-        <h2 id="mainSubtext" class="mb-3 mt-0" style="text-align: left">For some developers, this guide is just the beginning. For documentation, more advanced samples and other helpful content see our <a href="links.html">Links page</a>. </h2>
+        <h2 id="mainSubtext" class="mb-3 mt-0" style="text-align: left">For some developers, this guide is just the beginning. For more documentation, samples and other helpful content see our <a href="links.html">Links page</a>. </h2>
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