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Review hellow microverse project #8

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@mohamedelshamy55 mohamedelshamy55 commented Oct 19, 2021

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changed required

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![screenshot](https://github.com/mohamedelshamy55/readme-template/blob/mohamedelshamy55-patch-1/site_screenshote.png)

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  • I suggest you make your comments clearer so that students can understand what is expected of them

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### Setup
-None


### Install
-Git

### Usage
-None

### Run tests
-None

### Deployment
-None

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  • Kindly make your comments clear and easy to understand. For Example:

This is a clear comment: The README's "Built With" and "Getting Started" sections are currently empty. Why don't you add content, listing the technology used in the project and how to run it, to them so your README is more informative and professional?

This is a vague comment: The README is not descriptive, why don't you make it better?

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There are two README files. One in main branch and one in htmlcss-branch. Which one should I change?

@mohamedelshamy55 mohamedelshamy55 changed the title Add files via upload Review hellow microverse project Oct 25, 2021
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Hi 👋,

Good job so far!
There are some issues that you still need to work on to go to the next project but you are almost there!

Required Changes ♻️

  • Remember to explain why you request a change - it might be obvious for you but not for someone else.
  • Check below and make the necessary changes
    Check the comments under the review.

Optional suggestions

Every comment with the [OPTIONAL] prefix is not crucial enough to stop the approval of this PR. However, I strongly recommend you to take them into account as they can make your code better.

You can also consider:

  • You can include emojis and gifs to make your code review more human-friendly 👽.

Cheers and Happy coding!👏👏👏

Feel free to leave any questions or comments in the PR thread if something is not 100% clear.

Please, do not open a new Pull Request for re-reviews. You should use the same Pull Request submitted for the first review, either valid or invalid unless it is requested otherwise.


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Comment on lines 28 to +42
### Setup
-None


### Install
-Git

### Usage
-None

### Run tests
-None

### Deployment
-None

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  • Kindly make your comments clear and easy to understand. For Example:

This is a clear comment: The README's "Built With" and "Getting Started" sections are currently empty. Why don't you add content, listing the technology used in the project and how to run it, to them so your README is more informative and professional?

This is a vague comment: The README is not descriptive, why don't you make it better?

Comment on lines +4 to 5
![screenshot](https://github.com/mohamedelshamy55/readme-template/blob/mohamedelshamy55-patch-1/site_screenshote.png)

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  • I suggest you make your comments clearer so that students can understand what is expected of them

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<style>
h1 {
font-size: 18pt;
font-family: tahoma;
color: #CC3300;
}

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Please remove style from the HTML page and put it in the CSS page.
This is good for showing page readability.

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Please review changes according to the inline comment.

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Project Approved 🚀

Hi @mohamedelshamy55 🥇,

Your project is complete! There is nothing else to say other than... it's time to merge it :shipit:
Congratulations! 🎉

Cheers and Happy coding!👏👏👏

Feel free to leave any questions or comments in the PR thread if something is not 100% clear.


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Hello @mohamedelshamy55,
I am sorry to have approved this project, I am not supposed to review the project because it's opened on the Microverse repo. 🥺
Kindly change your base branch back to your branch instead of Microverse's. 🙏
Here is a guideline on how to change your base branch to your branch

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