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@@ -168,9 +168,9 @@ <h2 id="execute_pilots">Test and Pilot</h2>
 
       <p>Note that the use of real patient data (bottom row) involves patient and institutional consent, appropriate privacy and security protections, and should be planned for many months before testing aims to start.</p>
       <p>Early testing provides early feedback and engages key community members in activities that bring the use case concept and IG closer to life. </p>
-      <p>However, CodeX use cases have found it useful to start with very simple tests that can be started in 6-12 months after the start of the project, including components similar to the first row in the table above. Over time, CodeX use cases typically ramp up through increasingly ambitious tests to real-world pilots including components similar to the bottom row: e.g., demonstrating the full use case workflow, using software systems intended for sale or otherwise deployed, using real patient data, driven by the intended users, and within many organizations across which the future use case is planned to operate. See the <a href="https://codex-hl7-fhir-accelerator.github.io/playbook/casestudies/radiation_therapy.html">Radiation Therapy Treatment Data Case Study</a> for a good example of planning and ramping up of testing.</p>
+      <p>However, CodeX use cases have found it useful to start with relatively simple tests that can be run 6-12 months after the start of the project, including components similar to the first row in the table above. Over time, CodeX use cases typically ramp up through increasingly ambitious tests to real-world pilots including components similar to the bottom row: e.g., demonstrating the full use case workflow, using software systems intended for sale or otherwise deployed, using real patient data, driven by the intended users, and within many organizations across which the future use case is planned to operate. See the <a href="https://codex-hl7-fhir-accelerator.github.io/playbook/casestudies/radiation_therapy.html">Radiation Therapy Treatment Data Case Study</a> for a good example of planning and ramping up of testing.</p>
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-      Obviously, these real-world pilots require substantial planning, commitment, preparation, and legal/regulatory steps, well in advance of the execution of the pilot. This advanced planning is particularly important for testing in real healthcare settings, working with real patients, and using real patient data.
+      Obviously, these real-world pilots require substantial planning, commitment, preparation, and legal/regulatory steps, well in advance of the execution of the pilot. This advanced planning is particularly important for testing within real healthcare settings, working with real patients, and using real patient data.
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       <p>For each of the tests and pilots, considerations typically include the elements below.  These elements should be nearly finalized when initial planning is complete, especially the commitment of the necessary resources.</p>