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 			<h2 id="use_case_discovery">Use Case Discovery:<br>Identifying and Prioritizing Potential Specialty Projects</h2>
 			<p>Use case discovery, in CodeX, generally starts with use case champions who engage and gain commitment from potential participants. Together, they build a list of possible use cases and work to agree on their first (or next) use case project, based in part on the factors below.</p>
-<p>New specialties should look at <%= link_to("CodeX oncology use cases","https://confluence.hl7.org/display/COD/CodeX+Use+Cases") %>. They may find that there is a parallel use case in their specialty (e.g., for clinical trials, registry reporting, quality measurement, prior authorization, etc.) for which previous oncology work could provide a jump start in the new specialty. Modeling new specialty work after existing work could also serve to make the new effort compatible with prior efforts, thus serving implementers, health systems, and patients well.</p>
+<p>New specialties should look at <%= link_to("CodeX oncology use cases","https://confluence.hl7.org/display/COD/CodeX+Use+Cases") %>. They may find that there is a parallel use case in their specialty (e.g., for clinical trials, registry reporting, quality measurement, prior authorization, and others that cut across specialties) for which previous oncology work could provide a jump start in the new specialty. Modeling new specialty work after existing work could also serve to make the new effort compatible with prior efforts, thus serving implementers, health systems, and patients well.</p>
 
 			<p>For the CodeX Program Management Office (with the opportunity for input from the Steering and Operating Committees) to assess the readiness of a use case to go into the CodeX Discovery Stage, the following information is requested:</p>
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 				<li>Ask the right questions:
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 						<li>What's driving the need for the use case: Is the need related to clinical workflow improvements, research improvements, new regulatory requirements, cost or burden reduction, and/or other factors?</li>
-						<li>Who are the target actors? e.g., patients, physicians, nurses, researchers, payors, regulators, etc.</li>
+						<li>Who are the target actors? (e.g., patients, physicians, nurses, researchers, payors, regulators, and others).</li>
 					</ul>
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