Incorporate feedback from Dan #83
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I like reorganization of the process in terms of the "decision points" as I think it helps make clear that acceptance is not the end of the process, but rather the beginning. I also think the text in the decision points section clearly lays out what the responsibilities/roles of the various parties are at each stage.
I think the flow chart helps too. The boxes are clear as they correspond to the decision points, but it's not as clear what the words on the arrows represent: are they intended to represent the state of the document, or actions that are to be taken at that step? From context it seems like the latter, but the connection to the text is not as clearly defined as it is for the decision points.
See #81.