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| The third section of introduction to WoT is Building Blocks. In this video, we will explain | ||
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| each building block, WoT Thing description, Wot Discovery, WoT Binding templates, and WoT Scripting API. |
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| each building block, WoT Thing description, Wot Discovery, WoT Binding templates, and WoT Scripting API. | |
| each building block, Thing Description, Discovery, Binding Templates, and Scripting API. |
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We need to put profile in the first slides and propagate the changes. Sorry for missing it in the initial review
| Let's look closer to the WoT building blocks. | ||
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| It is an abstraction of the relationship between the building blocks and the main architectural aspects of a Thing. |
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A bit of pause before this is needed.
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| It is an abstraction of the relationship between the building blocks and the main architectural aspects of a Thing. | ||
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Starting here, the animation is happening too fast. When it says "A Thing always has a TD.", the first arrow should happen. With "This TD can be shared directly by the Thing or through TD Directory.", the orange box should appear.
| TD is a key building block that provides metadata describing a Thing and its network interface. | ||
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| This TD can be shared directly by the Thing or through TD Directory. |
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| This TD can be shared directly by the Thing or through TD Directory. | |
| This TD can be shared directly by the Thing or through a TD Directory. |
| However, in some cases let's say you are trying to communicate with your smart bulb with your smartphone, | ||
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| the lack of limitation of the TDs causes an unnecessary implementation load to communicate with every Thing. |
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The animation timing is off. The reduction part of the animation should happen in the next subtitle
| the lack of limitation of the TDs causes an unnecessary implementation load to communicate with every Thing. | ||
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| and while implementing a thing profile makes it way easier with providing guidance. |
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| and while implementing a thing profile makes it way easier with providing guidance. | |
| and while implementing a Thing or Consumer, profiles makes it way easier by providing guidance. |
| Thus, in those cases, Profile limits the capabilities of the TDs which enables out of box interoperability among things and | ||
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| devices. And make it possible to communicate with only minor configuration operations such as entering a key or IP address. |
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| devices. And make it possible to communicate with only minor configuration operations such as entering a key or IP address. | |
| Consumer applications. And make it possible to communicate with only minor configuration operations such as entering a key or IP address. |
| don’t have to decide on the protocols when programming controllers. It turns abstract run time scripts into concrete protocol messages. | ||
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| To summarize, WoT enables implementing device logic by reusable scripts executed in a runtime |
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| To summarize, WoT enables implementing device logic by reusable scripts executed in a runtime | |
| To summarize, Scripting API enables implementing device logic by reusable scripts executed in a runtime |
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By the way, this video ended up being too long. We will split it after Discovery. |
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